Kirby's Nightmare in Dreamland
Another Problem
'That is practically impossible! The spell was supposed to last for eternity! The arrival of this star warrior could not have been coincidental! I can only be glad that Twilight was able to find him in time.'
Celestia quickly withheld her shock as she collected her thoughts.
"Find Princess Cadence and Shining Armour!"
Celestia threw aside the stack of papers she was currently signing, and summoned a scroll and quill. She then began scribbling down a letter.
Dear my most faithful student,
While I enjoy your enthusiasm about Kirby, I require you to travel to Canterlot as soon as possible for a test. Sadly, I'm busy at the moment, so I require you to watch over Kirby for a day while I finish some errands. This is an important task. It's also imperative that you bring Kirby along as well.
Sincerely,
Princess Celestia
"Okay! Question one!"
Twilight levitated her paper from a desk nearby. She then placed her pair of glasses on her forehead before scribbling down a few notes.
"Now, how did you get here?"
"Poyo!" replied Kirby as he attempted to reply.
Twilight cringed a slight as she realized her mistake. Kirby didn't seem to be able to produce normal speech, yet he could understand her. Twilight quickly scribbled that down before looking back to Kirby
"Okay then, I'll ask you yes or no answers, you nod or shake in reply. Each question, I'll give you one of these candie-" Twilight was interrupted by a sudden change in air. Each of the respective candies flew into Kirby's mouth.
Suddenly, Kirby began to blink softly as a small tune could be faintly heard.
"Uhh, Twi? I don't think that was the best idea to keep the candy there."
*THUD*
Twilight flinched as she face-hoofed a little too hard. Today had not been her day.
Twilight then wrote down a note in her notepad: Don't give candy to Kirby.
She then began to think of any yes or no answers to give Kirby. Weirdly enough, none of her questions could be answered with a simple nod. She just had too much to ask.
She then found a simple question, "Okay, Kirby, what-"
"Do ya' like apples the best?"
*THUD*
Twilight could have sworn she had bruised herself by then.
Kirby then slowly shook his head as images of Chef Kawasaki's delicious meals came to mind. He had eaten so many delectable meals there, along with many good memories.
Applejack seemed to become visibly upset by the gesture, but she regained her posture as she let Twilight continue.
"Okay, as I was saying-"
*BURP*
A small, green fire could be could be seen across the room where a small, baby dragon, who had been dusting the shelves, had his claw against his stomach.
Twilight visibly fumed at the matter. She had been interrupted twice.
"Spike! Manners!"
She then stomped over to the baby dragon before realizing what was floating in front of his face. In front of him was a letter from Princess Celestia.
Twilight was shocked. Not only was she surprised that she responded so early, but the fact that Princess Celestia was probably swamped with paperwork after a hurricane spawned due to a weather mishap in Manehatten.
Twilight then put aside the other things as she grasped the letter with her levitation.
She quickly opened the letter before addressing the shortness of the letter.
*GASP*
'A test!? OH, NONONONO! What could it possible be about!? I cannot fail this!'
Without warning, Twilight teleported to the nearest nearest desk before levitating her saddle bag off the hook by the door.
She then began emptying the contents of the desk into her saddle bag before throwing a giant stack of note cards at Spike.
"Spike! I need you to watch over Kirby while I go study, stat!"
Applejack then turned to Kirby, who had a confused expression on his face. Kirby then turned to Applejack before nodding in understanding and running to the door, followed by Applejack. Before long, Spike had stopped paying attention and walked out the door towards Kirby, with a look of concern plastered on his face.
Applejack, Spike, and Kirby slowly traveled down the Ponyville streets towards Sweet Apple Acres. They were unsure about what was going on, but it was bound to be serious. The mare slowly turned around before hearing an explosion as the tree house flew a good 30 meters into the sky.
'Hmm, I woulda expected a good 50.'
They then continued their way to the farm.
Celestia and Luna stood in front of a bright pink stain-glass window as they discussed the matter at hoof.
"Sister, why don't I come along to help?" asked Luna.
"Luna, this is Kirby and Twilight's burden to carry."
Luna grew rather upset at the remark.
"Just what is all this talk about Kirby and the star warriors?"
Celestia's eyes darkened as she reached into her mind and pulled the memories from long ago.
"Around a thousand years ago, a few years after your banishment, The Crystal Empire and its residents were attacked and enslaved by King Sombra. The had been forced to mine the surrounding crystals that only grew in that area. We believed that the crystals had been Sombra's source of power, but we were wrong." A slight gasp emanated from Luna's mouth. She knew who Sombra was, but the fact that previous research was wrong, surprised her. "The crystals were being taken to places unknown by ponies and never to be seen again. One day, a star-shaped ship fell from the sky. Inside was a peculiar female unicorn name Galacta Noble, who claimed to be a star warrior. The mare had offensive abilities like none other. She was a master in the art of fighting. She claimed that she came to Equestria to stop the impending evil after escaping from the grasp of an evil empire named N.M.E."
Luna was in shock as she took in the things just told to her. Celestia, on the other hand, continued talking.
"She came from the Meta Tribe, where they sent their youth to planets to protect them. She said that the tribe shaped upon maturity, which gave her the unicorn form. She had apparently landed in Equestria before, and shaped into a unicorn upon maturity. She had sent off her son before it had been intercepted by N.M.E., where they attempted to use his DNA to create the Anti Star Warrior weapon, used to stop the star warriors. The son, on the other hoof, was unable to perform the task, so they tried to shape him into the perfect weapon. They captured Galacta Noble, who was attempting to save Kirby, and used her to aid them. N.M.E. hadn't taken into account of the son himself, and he rebelled. With the newly gained power, he was able to escape N.M.E. and returned flew into space on his original ship, but not before helping his mother. Galacta was placed into stasis so she could witness the end of the star warriors, especially after the things they had obtained from her. Galacta was able to escape with the help of the son, and flew threw space. The son, on the other hand, continued another way."
Celestia was visibly strained from all the thinking. The words of the Star Warrior were engraved in her mind. She wished that they would never have to have been brought up again, but now it was too late. She continued.
"Galacta had been transported through space, and into Equestria. With her help, I was able to seal off Sombra and save the Crystal empire. Before Sombra left, he cursed the crystal empire and the people in it as it vanished. The star warrior was sealed away along with the empire, never to be seen again, until now."
Celestia then trotted over to the nearest window before pointing out to a specific statue in the gardens. The statue depicted a unicorn, unlike the others.
Luna was shocked. She had just learned about a new tribe of intergalactic warriors that existed for so long, yet she was completely clueless. The old stories had never mentioned anything about a star warrior. One thing confused Luna though.
"Celestia?"
"Yes, Luna?"
"How does the story about the star warrior's son have to do with this?"
Celestia's expression darkened ever so slightly as her a small phrase escaped her mouth.
"Kirby is the son."
A/N:
Hi guys! I'm sorry about the little delay. I was writing this on my birthday yesterday, but it froze and I lost all of my progress.
Yes, this is my twist. I'm sorry if it is rather sudden and/or rushed, but I did this quickly after having to re-write it. I took the info I knew/learned, and changed it up a little. All of the items hear may, or may not be entirely canon for Kirby and/or MLP.
Special thanks to Camlio for the help!
If anyone's wondering, This is just the first arc.
-munomana
Hi fegelein here so now i need to review this right so lets start. I. Dont think this was bad but i think this chapter was kind of a trensition between story arck. I wasn't expecting that much because i know this is kind of a Filler but now. I have great expectation for the next chapter hope you dont screw up. I think this can be a great fic and stuff continiue on this way and you may earn fame dont go down.
Fegelein
Happy birthday
P.s: the spanish inquisition just told me im first
1705686 This was mostly to answer the dozens of questions that people had. I would have made it more subtle, but people were complaining too much. At least I got it over with.
Thanks!
It's about time someone wrote this!
1705711 now you have all your time to make an awesome next chapter
Fegelein
1705721 Now THAT's a great way to look at it! I can finally focus more on the quality and epic scenes
I have a feeling that meta knights involved
1705730 "dramatic effect"
In the next chapter
The biggest thriller yet
"Dramatic effect"
Kirby eat stuff
More stuff
More stuff
A lot of stuff
"Dramatic effect"
This is all to be seen on the next chapter of kirby nightmare in equestria
Will be on internet when the author want it to be
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1705772 HI BILLY MAYS HERE WITH A SPECIAL OFFER JUST FOR YOU. buy the premium version for 99.99 plus ship. You will see kirby eat trixie and gilda in the bonus scene. So call 514-troll-fegelein now to have your premium version and your special. But if you call in the next 5 min kirby will eat discord so call now
1705798 How about just Gilda? Trixie is best pony.
Anyways, Kirby already ate Twilight.
Ok ok just for you kirby will eat the cutie mark crusader is that alright with you
Fegelein
Since Galactica whatsherface turned into a unicorn upon "maturity", is there a possibility of Kirby turning into a pony for the same reason?
Yeoman, out
Look on the bright side, Celestia! At least THIS Kirby isn't the one from 'Sonic for Hire', right?
Dun dun dun dun dun duuuuuun. What a . Seems interesting, so i guess I'll track.
Does an over dramatic bow as a meta tribe mask and cape form. "I live to serve."
Seriously though you pulled it off perfectly. A tad rushed but, absolutely perfect considering. Ah yes, about the mask. I had finished a bit of research and found that Meta Knight isn't completely mature as he still looks like Kirby save for his body being deep royal blue, which is Luna's fully grown coat color, & yellow eyes behind his mask.
Said mask is supposed to allow an adolescent access to several per-programed copy powers. Meta Knight being basically late into his teens while Kirby is still a baby. Meta Tribe Star Warriors are unable to use the Copy ability after outgrowing the Baby Stage hence the use of Meta Masks. Which the Tribe is named for. These mask will continue to be used and will grow in power and the amount of abilities they can perform as the star warrior continues to grow. Finally sealing as they reach adulthood. The mask would become a ponies Cutie Mark if said warrior grew in Equestria.
Each Meta Tribe has a unique mask. Galacta Knight uses the stolen mask of Galacta Noble as the reward for being the first successful ASW* and for being the most powerful among them. Usually a Meta Tribe Warrior will pass down their mask to their child as they cannot use it after passing adolescence. But, they gain a few copy powers attuned to the form they adapt into.
* ASW = Anti Star Warrior
Wait, is this based of of Hoshi no Kaabii?
Ah. This is based on on Hoshi no Kaabi. Should have realized when you referred to...no, actually, I'm pretty sure Kurosawa is in the games as well...
Anyway, so this is based on the anime, didn't actually realize that until now. Huh.
Apparently I forgot to place Hoshi no Kaabi in the description as well...
Yeah... this is... I'll just go ahead and change that...
Keep em coming. I take back the sentence about pics. you are using them. Loving the story.
How will Kirby react to all this when he find's out? Is this based in the Kirby Right Back at Ya anime? If so will we be seeing Tiff and Tuff or King Dedede and Escargoon later in the story?
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ummm hoshi no kaabi and kirby right back at ya are the same show, so there'd be no real bother right?
For writing this chapter, you deserve something.
Here is a (few) gif(s).
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That is all.
1706091 No kidding.
1708072 They are slightly different. 4kids dubs are...
1707394 He was rather young. He may either react with extreme shock, or nothing at all... You will see.
1708312 Well, trying to stay as canonical as possible.
1708456 I was just trying to do a bit of funny.... or maybe a Maury moment. Whichever comes first to people who see the comment.
1708542 Fair enough then.
nice.
1709569 Did I lose?
1706091 I actually think that might be interesting...... I might have to make that.......
1706091 Exactly.
And feel bad for you. You managed to be the 101st and 201st comments here, so I get to watch you get strangled by RD much to my amusement. Too bad you couldn't be 301.
1711296 Meh, I don't feel like it
1711302 Aw. I still wish you did, because the 301st is a bunch of GIFs and my tiny writing netbook can barely handle it
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!! this is awesome!!!!
1714361 Here you go, one internet. That'll be 2 payments of 14.98 + P&H.
You put my favorite video game... as... a Xover.... Will you marry me?
1716790 If I ever get a divorce with my Kirby plushie... I'll marry my poster. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_2.png
"Kirby is the son."
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You know, I think Luna helped beat King Sombra as well. All I know is that I saw two Alicorns (now cannon title, YAY!), one with yellow magic, the other dark blue.
Haven't read this chapter yet but you've earned another mustache from me!!!!!!!!!
Thats a total of
Is Galacta Nobel, Related to Galacta Knight?
http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Galacta_Knight
2019889 hum..could be
Fun story concept but unfortunately needs heavy editing. The scene between Celestia and Luna was in particular so sloppily written that I am unwilling to continue reading.
umm Luna was banished after King Sombra was defeated...
obviously Kirby is the son, after numerous mentions of his name in the story...
Isn't Kirby a little bit to... uh, childlike to be be over 1000 years old?
2722776 And you know how Star Warriors age? maybe it's a longer process than normal? Maybe longer than dragons? Perhaps they live for a long long time and mature very slowly? We've never had an explanation about Star Warriors, in fact, we have no idea how old Kirby really is... Because he's a completely different species, nobody knows for sure.
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Meta Knight mentions that Kirby showed up on Popstar 200 years before he was supposed to become active. On that alone, Star Warriors obviously have very long lifespans if 200 years if just barely out of infancy.
Yup, my feeling was right. This story has been all but ruined in my eyes. I'll continue to read it for the comedy, but other then that I've lost all interest in this story...
i was like whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? until i reached my highest pitch