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Kirby's Nightmare in Dreamland
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Quick Note: Kirby's chat will be pink from now on.
There he was. Kirby. Sitting in a tree. Eating an apple. The simple sight wouldn't have been such a big deal if it wasn't for the fact that THE SURROUNDING TREES WERE COMPLETELY EMPTY.
'How. How could Kirby have eaten all those apples. It's impossible. Even PINKIE wouldn't be able to eat that much and Kirby doesn't even look any bigger.'
Twilight couldn't accept the thought. She was stuck in between a rock and a hard place. Kirby couldn't have physically been able to eat it, while Applejack wouldn't tell a lie. She had no idea how to accept it, but the evidence was right in front of her.
"A-Applejack? Are you SURE you saw Kirby eat all of this?"
"Ah'm as sure as... well me."
Twilight was still extremely doubtful, but Applejack wouldn't lie. She decided on one thing. Twilight quickly looked back to Kirby before lowering her head. She slowly lifted Kirby from the tree with her levitation, stirring Kirby from his delicious snack time. She carefully brought the possibly dangerous alien in front of her before forcibly opening his mouth.
Twilight then simultaneously cast a light spell on her horn before stepping ahead. She carefully stared into Kirby's gaping maw. Twilight stared down Kirby's throat before freezing. Instead of seeing a digestive system or stomach, it was all black with few bright dots. The weird arrangement peaked Twilight's interest, causing her to lean in closer.
As Twilight leaned in, She forgot the fact that she was also levitating him and keeping his mouth open. As she got a majority of her body into his mouth, the magic wore of, dropping Kirby to the ground. Kirby quickly closed his mouth in reflex, but before it closed entirely, a lasso flew into his mouth and wrapped around Twilight.
Twilight was instantly sucked into his stomach, which to her surprise, was easily navigable due to the abnormally large amount of space. Twilight quickly reached the black dot before realizing what that black dot was.
Twilight realized that she was in space. Around her were various foods and stars glittering the area. She turned around before seeing a giant pile of apples. Twilight's mind was literally BROKEN. She could not comprehend the science behind all of this. Kirby managed to have an entire universe in his stomach.
Before Twilight could ponder the matter at hand any longer, she noticed a tug at her waist.
Kirby had been taken away from the apple tree somehow. He didn't know how he was even floating in mid-air. All he knew was that the purple thing was now looking into his mouth which he could not close. Kirby tried to squirm around. Much to his dismay, he was not capable of moving any of his limbs. The purple thing began climbing deeper into his mouth.
Suddenly, Kirby was dropped to the ground. He attempted to close his mouth immediately as a force of habit, but a rope flew into his mouth before-hand. Kirby closed his mouth before swallowing, relieving the pressure in his mouth. Before he could acknowledge what had happened, a flash of light permeated from him. Kirby opened his eyes to reveal that he was now wearing:
He had remembered that ability. He had used it before, but Kirby did not expect to get it at that time.
Kirby looked up in front of him. The orange creature from before was staring right at him, surprise in it's eyes. In its mouth was the same rope that was in his mouth. Before Kirby could do anything about the rope in his mouth, he felt a tug in his mouth. It continued to push on. Before long, Kirby began to feel a large lump enter his mouth.
Out of his mouth came the purple creature from before, a look of shock on its face.
Twilight had been, eaten, swallowed, and regurgitated by an alien half her size. It had clearly been an unusual day. Apparently, Kirby had: a galaxy for a stomach, the ability to swallow stuff, and the ability to eat stuff without it digesting or chewing. Now, Twilight was staring at Kirby, although now, he was wearing a silly hat and holding a wand with a ridiculously large bulb on the end... One rather unusual part was the fact that he was now... yellow.
Twilight slowly trotted over to Applejack before whispering into her ear.
"Do you happen to have anywhere to lock up Kirby for the time being while I regain my sanity?"
"A-ah have an old shack behind th' barn if ya need it." Applejack was just as confused as Twilight, but she had not seen what Twilight had seen.
"It's good enough!"
Twilight quickly lifted up Kirby before following Applejack to the shack. Applejack quickly opened it before Twilight placed Kirby inside. They then closed it on the confused face of Kirby.
The pair then walked to a nearby apple tree before sitting to rest. Applejack deserved an answer, so Twilight began to speak.
"Applejack...I'm so confused."
Applejack was surprised. Twilight was usually never confused on anything. She was the smartest pony she had ever met.
"What do ya mean, Twilight?"
"Kirby...just doesn't make any sense."
Now Applejack was worried. Twilight usually knows everything. Celestia knows what she witnessed in there.
"In his stomach... was an entire galaxy." Twilight said, visibly confused.
Applejack knew what to do to get Kirby off of Twilight's mind for now: a glass of Sweet Apple Acres' cider.
"Ah know this is real confusing Twilight, but I'm pretty sure that taking yer mind off of the little pink puff for the time'll probably help," Applejack got back to her hooves as she turned towards the barn before looking back at Twilight, "C'mon, let's go. My head hurts from all these things anyway"
Twilight slowly returned to her hooves before walking towards the barn.
Applejack and Twilight slowly returned to the barn. Twilight stopped right in front of the barn before looking back towards Ponyville.
"Thank for the offer Applejack, but I left Spike all alone and I need to get back to my studies. I have a LOT to study now. By the way, do you think you could look after Kirby again tonight?"
"Sure thing, Sugarcu-"
*BOOM*
Applejack was disrupted with the sound of a boom emanating from the shack where Kirby was held.
Applejack looked towards Twilight before Twilight nodded back. Together, they ran to the shack.
When they arrived back at the old shack, they were greeted with a rather...unwelcoming sight. The front side of the shack was almost completely blown away. The hole in the front was letting out smoke from the sides as if an explosive had gone off in there. They looked around them quickly, but spotted no Kirby.
Both of the mares looked at each other in anger before yelling.
"KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRBYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!"
A/N:
Hey guys! I just want to thank all of you who liked, favorited, or watched me. It's people like you who keep me going!
One does not simply lock up beam Kirby in a shed.
So, yeah. People wanted to know what he'd be first, so one curious unicorn later, beam Kirby.
Well, I'm going to be in California from next Sunday for a week, so I decided not to just leave you guys hanging on for so long.
So, there you go, Hope you enjoy!
-munomana
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HOLY CRAP! Featured!? Unbelievable! Never did I think this story would ever get into the feature box!
I love you guys so much, thank you for all the support along the way!
Congratulations Kirby, you broke Twilight's mind
*Standing Ovation*
Awwww yeaaah cant wait to see what kirby turns into with pinkie pie!
Keep up the good work, and congrats on being featured!
-Kiryu
Can't wait till Kirby get's into town.
He's mirror Kirby
KIRBY! You left them quite a scare!
It's bad enough that Twilight's mind is now beyond repair!
KIRBY! Don't go into the town!
And make the ponies run awaaaaaaaay~!!
KIRBY! Are they your prey alone?
Or are you just excited that you've got another home?
KIRBY! You're sure to make them frown!
So be the one to save the daaaaaaaaay~!!
1624117 Chef kirby.
1624212 Oh man, that is epic.
1624567 *bows* Thank you, thank you. I do birthdays.
1624579 Well, my 975th birthday is coming, up.......maybe I'll give you a call.
What Twilight saw inside Kirby was...interesting. I don't remember anything like that from the show, but the description of "it's like a galaxy" reminded me of Squeak Squad and how the bottom screen on the DS represents Kirby's stomach.
I found the little tidbit that Kirby has had Beam before pretty interesting. It never occurred to me that he obviously has experience with copy abilities from before the series. He really is an enigma, isn't he?
I'm really enjoying this so far, it's a crossover I haven't considered before but it actually kind of makes sense when you compare the two series (lighthearted for the most part, but has some surprisingly dark villains). Heck, all of the MLP:FiM villains, especially Nightmare Moon and Sombra, seem like villains I could see easily fitting in among Kirby bad guys.
Speaking of bad guys, since this is based off the anime, I wonder if Nightmare Enterprises will play a part in this. Sure there's no King Dedede but they could just send a random monster or something.
Whoa hold on now... That picture is Mirror Kirby friend.
Beam Kirby has the yellow body and the orange and red hat. Like so.
freewebs.com/kirbyscrib/beam%20kirby.JPG
Tell me if it doesn't upload.
Wait isn't that the kirby that can make that little roundish shield/the illusion like dodge move? Granted that is in the games but....
Well damn looks like someone went for the angle I was planning for a crossover fic between Kirby and MLP before me. Then again I've been acting such a perfectionist that I hadn't gotten past writing the prologue. I will admit it's nice to see that you also thought that Kirby would get the Beam ability from Twilight (Either that or the Magic ability). I eagerly await to see if you pick all the same abilities that I had for the various characters. Here's hoping he keeps far away from Vinyl for the sake of the entirety of Ponyville.
1624736 Ahh, thanks! I got what first came off of google images XD I'll fix that now... dumb google images...
EDIT: I'm getting mixed images. The hat is wrong, but they're depicting him as pink and/or yelow, so I'll keep as pink
EDIT2: changed part of the text and picture to fit it.
1624212 Please do my birthday! It's in 11 days! I'll probably write a chapter on my birthday for the heck of it anyway.
Sorry to all of you guys who pointed out the image mistake. I thought something was unusual when the description said " beam kirby"
Note: Don't trust google images.
Chapter 4 and Twilight was already eaten
I realy like where this is going.
I don't know if you want to keep with Kirbys normal transformations but there are some nice crossover pictures with him on Deviant Art.
here are the mane 6, spike, derpy and the princesses: http://jrk08004.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=kirby
and here the mane 6 from another artist: http://silver-soldier.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=kirby
I'm sure they would allow you to use them if you ask.
Of course it's your decision if you even want to use special transformations.
1625548 No worries. Almost thought it was Mirror Kirby
1626517 I was gonna discontinue it, but this seems like a fun idea.
1625693 Thanks for the suggestions, but I'm doing the closest thing to each character, For example:
Twilight: beam
Rainbow Dash: Tornado
Pinkie Pie: chef
So on, so forth. I can't guarantee they'll all be eaten though. I'm trying to make it likely.
I wonder... would that mean that kirby becomes mirror when he swallows Rarity?
But anyways, you are doing great.
1624050
Hey, you deserve it.
1626964 That would probably take some time if the time ever came. Rock first came to mind, but mirror is a little likely too.
1624112
Yep.
1624117 Here's how I imagine his copy abilities from the mane six.
Raindow Dash - Jet
Applejack - Hammer
Fluttershy - Cupid
Pinkie Pie - Bubble
Rarity - Clean
Anyway, good story.
wat happened to the pink text
And thanks for putting my fanart as the title picture thing! :D
1633851 No problem, but Kirby never said anything that chapter
Kirby, I do believe you have caused yet another catastrophe. And for that, I thank you.
1635212 Kirby is known for unknowingly causing disasters without even trying
1634151 Oh, I thought it ment pink for anything in Kirby's POV
1635277 ahh. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
Oh Twilight, just wait until you see him fly.
I think Twilight should have given him the Magic ability but beam works too
1624117'
Obviously mix. It's the only random one I could think of. Though I sort of figured Kirby would get Mirror or Plasma from Twilight, so obviously I can't predict these.
Wait. I just thought of something. Copying Pinkie gives Kirby Crash.
celestia help us if he swallows pinkie
VORE
This was actually down right disappointing. But still had its perks.
You made crucial character building errors where Applejack should have just started yelling at Kirby. Twilight probably wouldn't be this forceful looking into his mouth either because she KNEW he understood her and she could have just asked him to open his mouth.
Regardless of the mentioned character errors you did well.
I'd like to see more discription between walking from one place to another.
wonder what would happen if he swallowed celestia or luna
2255332
WA WA WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Since he ate Twilight, whouldn't he be Spark(le) Kirby?
Actually, in all seriousness, wouldn't Kirby become Magic Kirby? Although perhaps since that form is more stage-magic-based, Kirby would assume that form if he ate Trixie.
Sorry. The Great and Powerful Trixie.
So awesome! Btw on phone so can't add pics or icons
You cannot believe how disappointed I am that Kirby didn't turn into something like this:
th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2012/225/2/3/kirby_twilight_sparkle_by_silver_soldier-d59j3nl.png
4692579 That would have been awesome!
4692579 Now that's a punch in the gut right there.
One does not lock up Kirby PERIOD
I'm still here
-CactusMan
You dont just lock up kirby you will FEEL PAIN! ESPIECALLY IF HE HAS BEAM
Beam Attack