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Princess Peach Toadstool of the Mushroom Kingdom has come to Equestria on important diplomatic business, bringing with her the superstars of the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario and Luigi. But, when Discord is released, and aids Bowser's forces in invading Equestria and kidnapping Peach, Celestia, and Luna, Twilight and her friends must work together with Mario and Luigi on an adventure spanning two kingdoms, to rescue the princesses, defeat Bowser and Discord, and return Equestria and the Mushroom Kingdom to their former glory.

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LOL! The premise made me laugh. Sounds interesting, I'll give it a read.

This...does not look good.:twilightoops:

Oh my sweet Celestia this is awesome! Tracking!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

Sweet, I love Mario crossovers! Tracked. :moustache:

This is beanbean kingdom all over again.
I can see a few successful combos here:
Twilight/Mario: friendship's fire
AJ/Mario: hammer and anvil
Rainbow dash/ luigi: storm's fury
Fluttershy/Luigi: mesmeric stare. (weegee and fluttershy stares into your soul)

This is very, very well done so far. I was a bit skeptical, but this is just really good. 5/5. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and I did spot a few minor typos. It seems like you're occasionally using the wrong orientation single/double quotes, which is probably just some bizarre problem with the editor you're using (I'm assuming you're writing this in another program and then copypasting, because otherwise it makes no sense. Oh well, I'll just blame Discord). It's not enough to detract from the story, but you should still look into it.

Loved the battle scene.

That battle scene was a replica of "superstar saga" and "inside story". Nothing new there.

Just the combos that will be pulled off that I can't stop thinking of: elements of harmony/starpower= good game.

Discord and bowser look like the classic brain and brawn combo. Like wario and waluigi... Oh snap, what about them! We need these guys to stir some crap up like popple and rookie (amnesia struck bowser) from superstar saga.

Make it happen

Wario and Waluigi will be showing up, don't worry.
And it will be in Equestria, so you won't have to wait quite as long for them.

"Fluttershy/Luigi: mesmeric stare. (weegee and fluttershy stares into your soul) "

This is awesome. That's all I need to say.:eeyup:

if this were to be a video game.......................
I would buy 3 copies
no wait...................
I would buy 300 COPIESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

#16 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 ·


Will there be a Trixie/Wario/Waluigi alliance? Because it just seems natural for it to happen.


I second that motion... :twilightoops:

#18 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

That Letter is a Hotel Mario reference. My eyes! Curse you discord!!!:raritydespair:

It would sound good. Nice to have them show up too.

Now I think about it: Mario and luigi are a fire/thunder duo. Bowser is fire and discord is known for using thunder. The double battle that would ensue will be gargatuan.


Too many mario references. It ruins the atmosphere of the actual story. And for once I would like to see a mario crossover without having to imagine mario and luigi talking. but it is still a good story! :raritywink:
~ Fearanger, Master Shape-Shifter of Canterlot

Funny you should say that, because I'd actually like to make this a fangame if I can put a team together.
Nothing's concrete yet, but still, it's something I'd like to do.

I don't want to give too many details away. You'll just have to wait and see.

All I know is something better get stomped on, or goddess have mercy on your soul.:twilightangry2:

Part of me is hoping that the Koopalings make an appearance at some point.

Pinkie Pie in the Racoon Suit...pinkie Pie in the Racoon suit.....YES!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Best idea and usage of the Mario series ever. Please do keep puting up the good work. :yay:

MUST PLAY GAME!!! :pinkiehappy:

Still this was a nice chapter, as i cannot wait to see how the girls fit with the SUPER MARIO BROS. :ajsmug:

I mean just Wow, Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :twilightsmile:



This is going to be a good laugh, given that like Pinkie Pie, Wario tends to break the fourth wall as well, given the whole Wario Ware inc. thing. :pinkiehappy:

Please do keep up this wonderful tale of yours.:rainbowkiss:

Very nice so far. I'd only complain that the story is moving so fast. I mean WHAM! Trixie out of nowhere!

Plus, I was imagining this to be a story with Mario and Luigi having full conversations, but I'm surprised you keep it simple and perfectly style it after the M+L games. Great work!

I forsee Trixie, Wario, and Waluigi teaming up to be that group of idiots that don't leave you alone even when you've bashed their skulls in for the fifth time. Not that there's anything wrong with that.

My only complaint is that we need more Yoshi! :flutterrage:

HAHA i love the reference you did for the cdi mario game :rainbowlaugh:

For someone like me, that have played all the Mario and Luigi games this is amazing!
It not only recreates the feeling from FiM, but also adds the quirkiness, the humor and the RPG feeling right into Equestria, all the classic parts like the initial fight with Bowser and the optional tutorial, the strange world, the fights with the mallets, everything was just like the games.
I loved the duet of Luigi and Fluttershy, those two would make amazing comedic scenes.
Also Trixie seems to be something to laugh about.
Would Fawful appear in this game? There is a lot to see and I'm here to read it with a big smile.

I think Trixie is filling his role in my opinion. Somepony to be used for comical relief and easy exp.

I knew Trixie would be the constant annoyance (aka Croco, Junior Troopa, Popple, etc.), but I'm still betting on a team up with Wario and Waluigi. Comedy ensues. In great (and powerful) numbers. :pinkiehappy:

WHY DOESNT THIS GAME ACTUALLY EXISTS!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!!?:raritydespair:

I would buy this game in 10 seconds flat. Sorry couldn't resist.


I mean seriously this is a good storyline and it fits both properties real well. :ajsmug:

I wish to encourage you upon such great work as I cannot wait to see what next in this tale of yours. :yay:

I would so buy this game, just to see the combinations that the plumbers would make with the likes of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. :rainbowlaugh:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :pinkiehappy:

I agree with the other commentators i really want this to be a real game.. i don't care if it's by nintendo or just fanmade i want this to be made a real game..

Oh great job so far.. sure i spotted some errors.. but it's still good :twilightsmile: keep up the good work :raritywink:

As I've said before, I'm trying to put a team together to make this a game.
I've got someone helping with music, but that's about it.
If you know someone that might be interested in joining the team, point them my way, please!

This is GENIUS.
221146 Wait, you're actually making this into a game?!
Depending on how you're making it, I might be able to help with the coding.

Hit the Newgrounds forums. There's loads of flash artists there to make it into a flash game.

"Fluttershy had spent her time and money at the Yoshi Shop, purchasing a manual on Yoshi care, as well as some food. She had also applied for a certificate allowing her to raise Yoshis in Equestria. The beast itself would have to wait for another visit, when she wasn't pre-occupied."

Fluttershy raises a Yoshi..... Somepony needs to write that!

I nearly died at Twilight giving Mario the classic tutorial for these games.

Drop me a line at link2125@hotmail.com, and we can work things out from there.

:rainbowlaugh: Green Missile, poor Luigi!

I don't know, iare luigi and mario going to be able to use lightning and fire? that would be appropriate for the oncoming Discord/Bowser VS mario and luigi fight at the end.

Quick question.. about the game.. is it gonna be like mario and luigi super star saga?

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