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Mat the Brawler


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Princess Celestia senses a grave threat to Equestria, and calls on Kirby and Meta-Knight to help stop him. Will the heroes of Popstar and Equestria get alone? Will the demonic beast be defeated? Only one way to find out!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 49 )

Kirby was the shit when I was little! But try to make the chaps longer :)

I agree with Gordo here, longer chapters never hurt anyone, Kirby was the shit when I was a kid, but even then I never realized there actually was a back story to the little guy. I await for more chapters.

Aww, Kirby's cake got smashed:fluttercry:. I hope Pinkie has some emergency cake on her:pinkiesmile:.

get alone?

*Along* ................typical.... but I like it though:derpyderp2:

KIRBY CROSSOVER!!

Hang on, I don't play Kirby....Whatever! I'm reading it anyway!

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Larger chapters hurts the author. :P

1456420 Shorter chapter = More chapters more often for you to read! :pinkiehappy:

1456671 What are you talking about? (the alone part not the typical thing)

1457199 hay remember me? I'm the one who did your reading of "Sonic Boom To Sonic Rainboom"
i am letting you know that i will be doing a reading of this too.:pinkiehappy:

I like it, but the format is a but odd. I was also a fan of From Sonic Boom to Sonic Rainboom.

1457199 Does it look like I care? :derpytongue2:

1462636 Well never mind what I said earlier.... I had quite a few pissed off days....

1477075 Thanks for listening :twilightsmile:

I have trouble identifying who is talking, save for some lines.

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Alright. This story has potential, it just needs to be readable, even if there are still a few grammatical errors.

1480603 Thanks I think... Kind of a backhanded complement.

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What do you mean?

1481121 You said it's a good concept but not readable. (Maybe I misunderstood, I donno lol)

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By concept, I mean the idea. The idea of having a crossover between MLP and Kirby is good, but some sections of the story are confusing and sometimes unreadable.

more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more! more!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

1682769 Gonna post this here for all to see! School is taking tons of time so sorry when I have time + the desire to write I will.

1685084 I'm not mad or anything, I just wanted people to be able to see/know. :pinkiehappy:

And they told me there'd never be a boomerang emergency!:pinkiehappy:

And FIRST! Man that felt good.

1748188 Tell that to Ty the Tasmanian Tiger.

1748205 who's Ty the Tasmanian Tiger?

1748269 Obscure video game character who uses Boomerangs, and biting, as his method of attack. Look him up his games are awesome!

1753164 I heard their making a cartoon out of Ty!:pinkiehappy:

1753976 So I hear I hope it's not just another romour though, not bringing back "The House of Mouse" made me very sad. The Ty cartoon better be a thing!

1753976 Just did a bit more research and the cartoon was first mentioned in 2004 so it probably won't happen, but we may get an iPhone game and we have this!:pinkiehappy:

I don't remember a moonwalk in Kirby's victory dance. Oh well, guess that just makes it 20% cooler now.

YES! MORE CHAPTERS! I know what I'm doing this weekend. :yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

1797473 yes, yes it does...but wait...i just played Kirby. he has a moon walk-like move in his dance. just saying.

1797473 Will this help

Comment posted by Karsap deleted May 1st, 2016

Bring back, plz papi

this a lot of potential, hopefully it gets continued soon

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