One Fated Night

Soaring

Soaring #1 · January 7th · 1 · ·

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Professional Prose Pony: Soaring

Putting this on my resume right now. 😎

Nailah

Nailah #2 · January 7th · 5 · ·

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Silly story for silly ponies that dream a dream so big.

QueenChrysalisForever

QueenChrysalisForever #3 · January 7th · 1 · ·

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Looooove it! Now I wants more. Sounds like the perfect prologue to an amazing story to me. :P

Aklinstar

Aklinstar #4 · January 8th · 4 · ·

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The princess was high on expectation, and low on explanation.

I love this juxtaposition, it's really, really good.

Keep safe; Be loved; Stay determined; and in the center of it all: Make friends.

I'm making a poster of this as a venn diagram now with Celestia's likeness plastered in the background.

All those protection spells and you still managed to knock me up!

Oof. I never once considered those types of protection spells, but I can see it.

You’ll be the first father in history that died in child-birth, so help me, Night Light.

LOL

There was enough screaming, kicking and pleading to the stars that there was little difference between childbirth and some cult’s colt sacrifice

Great pun placement and a very interesting comparison to say the least.

That was awesome. Although, I have to admit... this does make me dislike Celestia a little more. That's just dirty of her to impose childbirth even if it is the only foreseeable way of saving her sister. I can 100% see her doing this and this does change my perspective of the show a bit. That was a good short story though! Welcome back~

Greatazuredragon

Greatazuredragon #5 · January 8th · 1 · ·

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Nice short tale, good work.

N4rwh41

N4rwh41 #6 · January 8th · 2 · ·

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Luv me occult magics. of course Twilight is a magicked bab, she is too stronk. LOVE IT! I also like how DONE Velvet is with all of this XD. of course, that raises the question of where Shining is, as he is the bigger brother. Hopefully he just hasn't been born yet.

Chaospaladin

Chaospaladin #7 · January 8th · 2 · ·

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Goddamn you're a sorcerer when it comes to writing descriptions and details. Teach me your ways!

Night Light is incredibly adorkable here. You absolutely nailed the "three guesses where Twilight gets her nerdiness from" vibe with him. This fic was simple, awesomely executed, and wholesome.

Short. Sweet. Clever. Nvidia.

I had a good time. Looking forward to more of your work!

ThePeer

ThePeer #8 · January 8th · 3 · ·

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So. You're telling me our lovable purple alicorn was born from an evil magic spell, by two bat-shit insane parents, at with Celestia's ~~command~~ blessing.

I dig it.

Dreams of Ponies

Dreams of Ponies #9 · January 8th · · ·

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I mean, this explains quite a lot. Celestia isn't actually omniscient, she's just had time to prepare for literally everything

ThePeer

ThePeer #10 · January 8th · 1 · ·

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One of the best, reasons why Celestia made Twilight an Alicorn, theories I saw is that the moment she realized she would've allowed Nightmare Moon to destroy Equestria rather than fighting her sister again, she knew she was not fit for the job anymore and started grooming Twilight to be her replacement. It would explain why she didn't face Nightmare Moon in the first episode, and I think serves as a good insight into her character.

Also really cool male Twilight pfp. Twilight Profile Pictures are the best.

ReadDEMOh-17

ReadDEMOh-17 #11 · January 8th · 1 · ·

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That was absolutely magical. I loved every second of it. Goes straight to my favourites

Oreng Pingvin

Oreng Pingvin #12 · January 8th · · ·

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Something has changed, but I don't know what. Was 999 words, now 1000

Dreams of Ponies

Dreams of Ponies #13 · January 8th · 2 · ·

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It was a thousand words when I submitted it. Apparently a single word decided to wander off, so I had to add another one. I'll let you know if and when I find it