I believe if there's any kind of god, it wouldn't be any of us. Not you or me, but just, this little space in between.
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During a quiet evening of stargazing, Princess Luna and a young Twilight observe the night with mutual contentment. A small flicker of light catches Twilight's attention, a strange anomaly in the sky. When she questions Princess Luna, Twilight is rewarded with a story — one both terrible and beautiful.
Edits by Level Dasher
Prereaders: JackRipper
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Set before season three.
This story was written for Nightmare Moon 2017 Summer Contest.
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8386143
Thanks, David. I missed a few when moving Luna's dialog over to modern English.
8386143
Thanks for the catch.
Dammit, I missed one.
It was ok I guess.
This was a great read
another well done story dreams
Review posted: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/212612/hidden-gems/thread/330920/garden-of-shadows
This was a really nice read. Very enjoyable.
One wonders though, are the stars the souls of the children and does that mean they're stuck under the black sky forever, unable to move on to the afterlife?
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I suppose it's more like that is their form of afterlife.
8386458
That sounds like it sucks.
The really sad/ horrible thing is I actually could imagine Celestia doing this. I don't thing Twilight would smile.
Wonderful story.
8388460
I'm glad you enjoyed it
8388468
Me too.
I'm always a sucker for the "sadness of Nightmare Moon" stuff, but this added a twist I hadn't seen before, and made it feel very real and touching. Thanks for sharing!
8390032
This story was fun to write, even with some parts falling into more somber tones. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and I hope my next stories are this well received too
Why must thou make me feel all the time...... *Cries*
!RevieweiveR!
Whew, a nice mix of dark and whimsical. Engaging read.
9437516
I'm glad you liked it