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DanishDash
Why do I write? Because it's fun! :D
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I really liked that story—a nice, wholesome read. Personally, I wouldn't mind seeing this become bigger, but as is, I like it.
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Thank you.
Yeah, I feel like that too. It might be fun to explore, but as it is now, I'm happy just to write one sweet moment.
Wow, nice job on the story. Hopefully there'll be a sequal to this.
Also liked the added touch that Celestia adopted Jake. Very wholesome
More, please.
that was lovely indeed!
DanishDash,
I’d say you succeeded. I like it!
Very good! I like it.
This was a very good human in anthro Equestria story, I loved the relationship that Jake and Rainbow Dash have with Dash having a "nickname" for him. lol
I do hope that someday you'll make a sequel to it, if not I understand.
Awesome job! It’s also interesting that it’s a prequel from before the show’s first episode!!
I'm interested to see where you go with this
That's one sexy anthro Rainbow Dash!
This should be "fussed", but the implication of excessive floof is hilarious to me.
Barring that, this is a sweet story on its own, but an excellent setup for a potential continuation. It'd be neat to see how much Jake's presence has an effect on the Summer Sun Celebration and Nightmare Moon incident. Hope to see more of this in the future. If not, well, always looking forward to whatever comes next.
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Thank you! I wasn't sure how it was spelled, so I just took a guess. Glad you liked it.
That picture along with the story is why I decided to like it in an instant.
Gotta say, being a prequel is a nice twist.
Got to make this into a story it's too damn good to be one chapter and be so short
Definitely needs a prequel/sequel
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Oh yes it does need a prequel or a sequel to it, here's hoping that it will happen in the near future.
So cute. I wouldn’t mind if we see more of this.
Could you do another one like this? I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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I think I stand with the majority in saying we would live to see more of this universe.
I wonder how Celestia will react when she sees him with Rainbow Dash and not telling her
As much as I enjoyed this I gotta say, I got that itch man, I got that itch, I gotta have more
Great wee story, super wholesome, love stories like this
Damnit, now I'm addicted.
Also, love it when I purr at my coffee, makes it so much sweeter.
But all joking aside, This is very well written, and really does hit that little niche that you were hoping to hit, and of course it makes me want more, especially with that ending hinting at this being before the very first episode, I'm eager to see how it all turns out as he goes through all of the episodes now.
Hopefully that makes sense, but long story short: Yes I want more!
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Now you've got me wondering of how Cadence would react to not knowing that he's found his special "some pony". LOL
Ok this was pretty good and wholesome and I’m hoping more of this will come later on as a full on story or more oneshots with Jack and Dash and whatever else in the mlp world
Very adorable!
Re-reading this again always makes me smile and wanna do my own take on a human in Equestria situation like this but with a human female and her stallion love interest be it an canon or an OC.
Anyways I hope that you are doing very well in life, take care and God bless.
I would pay for a whole novel of this.
I would totally LOVE to see more of this! Interesting how you made Jake the Sheriff of Ponyville... Didn't know that position was even a thing until now. But the way you wrote the two of them, It was very loving and playful. You captured Dash's personality well. Overall a really good story