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"If we can't be together in Heaven, I'd gladly run away to burn in Hell with you."


This story is a sequel to Hypothetically

In theory, you and Twilight didn't make sense. A strong, intelligent, and wise mare like her paired with an awkward, dorky, and eccentric human like you... It was almost too good to be true, and yet it was. You and Twilight were the best of friends, until you found out about a week ago that she had romantic feelings for you.

Would it even work out? Could things between you two really escalate into something... more?

(Rated Teen for mild sexual innuendo.)

Cover art by tingsan!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

Really cute story here, almost poetically written. Wonderful job!

Thank you! I wasn't really confident with my writing style here, but I hope I did well...:twilightsmile:

You did wonderful, bestie!

I second this. It’s obviously a little different than your previous stories, but it’s still very well done.

I liked this... a lot.
The emotional rollercoaster that the MC felt, beginning back in the previous story was well-written and quite thought out. In truth, what would a human like any of us feel if we had to face such a dilemma of Twilight, or any other pony, falling for us? Your tale examines that very question. I cannot talk about how others may feel, but I sure as heck can for myself. Twilight, Luna, Starlight, Rainbow, Ember: these are my top five that I have feelings for, even if they are just cartoon characters. After all, isn't that why we are here, on this site? They may be just drawn images, but each tale brings them to life, breathing an existence so dear to us, leaving each of us with our own emotional rollercoaster...

Well done! :twilightsmile: :moustache:

After all, why on Equus would she even be interested in you? You and her were simply too different from each other. You think this to yourself as you attach a new sheet of paper to the roller, locking it in place as you set your fingers to the keyboard once more. Previously, your mind had been brimming with ideas for your story. But now? You were at a dead end. You could never get past this chapter, no matter how hard you would try. Romance scenes always eluded you, that much was certain.

As they say opposite attracts.

Plus books is all I’m going to say

"... But that's just a theory."

a game theory

"I'm still no Flash Sentry." You chuckle, hoping to make a small joke.


I third this statement my friend

And with that thought in mind, you drift off into a peaceful sleep, a smile on your lips. Tomorrow is a new day, after all, and with Twilight by your side, you feel like you can take on the world.

God I need more of this story.

I'm so honored you think of me that way...:heart::twilightsmile:
Thank you! I tried to change things up a little. :>
That's the beauty of fiction, my friend. The way it brings characters to life in our own minds, the way it stirs complex emotions in our hearts as we connect with them on a borderline spiritual level... It's what makes fiction all so real.:raritywink:
Looks like someone found the reference! Tee hee.

Quail #15 · 1 week ago · · ·

CUTE! super cute, Lovely work, thank you very much!


Thank you:twilightsmile:

Thanks for watching?

Yet another story where Twilight acts the part of the dom. I’m beginning to see a pattern for her character, which honestly works.
Good story dear author. Well done! :twilightsmile:

Thanks a ton! Means a lot to me. :>

Has anyone in the history of fiction ever asked a legitimately hypothetical question?

Elmoz #21 · 1 week ago · · ·

Not the biggest fan of MCs with low self esteem but hey, you did great here otherwise. Looking forward to whatever else you make!

I'm a little disappointed the stuffed Twilight doll in the cover image didn't come into play. But that's just me.

One rated E story, one rated T story... now the next step is obviously the rated M lewd story where Twilight finally shows him just how much she loves him... I'm sure we'll all be looking forward to that haha

Nice work. Adorable soft Dom Twilight is always a great time.

This was very sweet. Made me feel all warm inside. :heart:

D'aaww, that was so sweet! Damn, now I'm going to have diabetes!

Thank you! Glad to have you along for the ride.
T'was the closest image I could find...:twilightsheepish:
I don't really plan on diversifying to Mature-rated stories anytime soon, but if I ever do, it'll be a sequel to this one! :>
Thank you for the kind words! :>

"... But that's just a theory." She giggles nervously, hiding her face from you.

A Pony theory!

(I totally read this all in matpats voice by the way lol :rainbowlaugh:)

I'm a bit late to reply, but heck yeah! :yay:

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