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"If we can't be together in Heaven, I'd gladly run away to burn in Hell with you."


Rainstorms bring out the affectionate side in people. Apparently, ponies are no different.

Twilight asks you to cuddle her on a rainy day, and lucky for her, you are willing to provide just that.

(If anyone happens to know the artist of the cover art, please let me know so I can credit them properly. Thank you!)
(EDIT: Cover art is by Katputze!)
(EDIT 2: Featured on 6/14/21, I'm so honored! :pinkiegasp:)

Entry for CategoricalGrant's Cuddlefic Contest!

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Comments ( 37 )

Very cute.

Thank you for the cute story!

I am not a native English speaker, and I can assure you, that I will use your work as a source to learn, a source to which I can come back anytime to make my own works better and get to know a few expressions and expand my own vocabulary.

Thank you for the kind words! And yes, feel free to do so, I'm glad to be of some help!:twilightsmile:

Reverse Google search leads me to believe that the artist you're asking for is "Katputze" on DeviantArt, if you're asking what I believe you're asking. Good read btw

You can feel her tense up in anticipation, before she lets out her breath in short puffs. "C-careful! My wings are a little...sensitive."

Now why would you ever put a line like that in there? :derpytongue2:

You're mixing up your past and present tenses a lot; pick one and stay consistent with it. Other than that, very cute. Good luck in the contest! :twilightsmile:

How is this not a clopfic
Everything about it, from the title, to the profile pic, to even the description, screams clopfic

Subversion of expectations. Most of the time, it ends up with a positive outcome.

This is no different :)

My goodness gracious this is absolutely irresistible! This really is a great story to lift spirits and really fills the heart! Hope ya don't mind, but I couldn't resist making a reading of this cuddly fic of yours! Also, good luck to you in the contest by the by! :D

Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/T6jW9Cay33c

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

This was real nice! I get all of the warm fuzzies every time!

This is adorable. Short and sweet.

AAAAAAA thank you so much! I'd be honored!:pinkiehappy:

Dawww, so, so cute! Great work! I wish my description skills was this good

Thank you! :twilightsmile:

Just practice, friend, you'll get there!:twilightsmile:


You're welcome! I'm at least better at descriptions than I was a year ago.

EDIT: and congrats on getting so high on the feature list and getting a reading! This story earned it!:twilightsmile:

The story keeps hopping between past and present tense (one of my biggest pet peeves, I must admit,) but otherwise this is a very nice bite-sized piece of fluffy sweetness. :twilightsmile:

Ah, this is very cute. Good stuff.

I love cuddle fics like this because they help me calm down after doing something stressful.

It’s was good I don’t really know what me to add it was a bit short though

I demand u delete this to improve my chances of winning. Thank u.

This was so cute.


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Another great Twilight fic, thank you @Erynaster.
You just know I love them, so it is another Favourite button clicking time. :) :twilightblush:

Gosh just imagine... Cuddling with an alicorn or a pegasus let alone Twilight, The Princess of Friendship would be a godsend to my cursed insomnia. I'm sure she has lots of responsibilities throughout the day that physically drains her, I couldn't understand why she wouldn't want a nice cuddle at the end of the day. :twilightsmile:

Cuddles is a question


This was a really nice read! Sometimes well all need a slice of fluff and this piece was extra cozy!

Twilight waifu for the win!

That was so cute! :twilightsheepish: 8/10

Audio reading on this brilliant story here.

Happy 2nd Anniversary!

I loved this, cute little cuddlebug story! Ah, just makes me kick my feet like a teenager lol:twilightsmile:

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