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Erynaster


"The greatest stories are not written, but lived."

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Being the only human in Equestria can get a little lonely. And, having a crush on the Princess of Friendship probably isn't making things any better, either. Could risking friendship with Twilight really be the best option?

Cover art not mine! Cover art from Squidgy Unicorn2.

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D'awwww. :yay:

Cute as hell. Loved every second of it!

Might have to reread this sometime.

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You know...that's not a bad idea.:pinkiehappy:
Will look into that.:twilightsmile:

Twilight, you're sooo adorkable.

That's why we love you.

Makes me think about that line from the Little Mermaid. He's a human you're a mermaid. You should tell us about the date though. I want a sequel.

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I have a sequel planned in mind, but should take a while with a few things going on.:twilightsmile:

Glad you enjoyed it, though!:raritystarry:

and another reason why I like TwiNon stories

Enjoyed it? I simply loved it. The previous one, so the "Good morning Anon" was truly great, but this one was awesome.
I'm always interested reading a good human x Twilight story, and the story you just wrote is perfect. So cute, adorable, perfect characterisation of each character and I love reading as I said a smart, adorable - in character - Twilight. I would love to see more, so I will wait for the sequel. This story deserves it. :) Also Cute, smart, adorable, and blushing Twiley is the best. :)

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*babbles incoherently*
Awwweeeeeeee thank you so much for your kind words!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: This truly made my day, so thank you, and I hope you'll enjoy my future works!:twilightsmile:

I loved it to no end. This is sooooooo like my fantasies! Hehe. Eager to read a continuation of this story :twilightsmile: :heart:

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Hehe, glad you enjoyed it!:twilightsmile:

This is awesome. Its the best Anon x Twilight story Ive read in a long time.

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I'm happy you appreciated it!:twilightsmile:

Or maybe taking Rarity's advice on acting on his growing feelings was the part where he went wrong.

If he’s saying that in his head i think you need to change the his to my.

Well, who could blame him? Chopping the parsley next, he went slowly, avoiding his fingers. She was everything that made living life amongst sapient equines worthwhile. Especially with everything he's been through.

Same for this one.

But what did it? Anon absentmindedly tossed the garlic slices into a pan filled with olive oil, letting them brown lightly. Was it the way she cared? Or the way she would ask him about his day whenever he would collapse on the couch from exhaustion? Or was it the way she would ramble on about a new book she was reading, captivating his attention and sparking interest with her round, violet eyes...?

And this one

Rarity had already told him off for that, chiding him gently after he had opened up to her, "Darling, if you spend so much time in wistful thinking about your fantasies, then you actually distract yourself from trying to make them come true!" she had clucked disapprovingly.

"If you really want to win the mare over, then you must ACT! Show her that you want to be more than just good friends, be the stallion that absolutely sweeps her off her hooves! "

Wow, and here I thought rarity’s romance advice was trash.

"Just...be honest with me." Her tone was serious.

Might as well, because you suck at lying.

"Anon...do you... do you like me? " her eyes shone.

Was she that oblivious?

When she had opened up to Rarity about her little crush on the human, she had been quick to suggest that she let Anon make the first move. To 'take initiative', as she called it.

It’s kinda nice to know rarity hooked them up.

Have your well-earned upvote.:twilightsmile:

Nice Job! very well done....

This was a cute and very sweet story. Just the kind of light-hearted little fic to raise the spirits on a dreary day. :twilightsmile:

However, from a technical point of view... Please, in the future, ease up on the italics in dialogue. It should be used sparingly for effect and emphasis, not sprinkled about willy-nilly like Michael Bay does with explosions.

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Noted! Will improve in the future, thanks.:twilightsmile:

Aww, this made me feel giddy :twilightblush:
I liked that Rarity gave them both the same advice lol, we all know who really pulls the strings in Equestria

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Thank you for your kind words! I hope you'll appreciate the rest of my works.:pinkiehappy:

PLS Make second part because this is MASTERPIECE AND SWEET! :DDDD

Sorry if this is rude but is there a sequel to this?

"... We were helping Applejack bring in the apple harvest for the season, and for no reason at all, you insisted on carrying my share of the work."

"Hey! You can't blame me for trying to be a gentleman, can't you?"

She shook her head, smiling wryly.
"... Applejack said you fainted halfway back on your 4th trip."

XDDD

These guys are so cute :rainbowlaugh:

Or maybe...they could read a romance novel, cuddled up in warm blankets by the fire...

I think I have a problem. I cannot stop enjoying these fluffy and cute and adorable stories that just appeal to every cheesy and hopeless romantic fantasy I have. It’s absolutely insane that one author can make so many stories that I just love to bits and pieces!

I loved this. How Rarity sets them both up and be true to themselves, the oh so real fear of rejection, and the blossoming of what will be an absolutely perfect relationship. I know I left so many comments on your stories like this, but I just have to express how happy and warm these short fanfics make me!

I can’t wait for the next one!:twilightsmile::twilightblush::raritywink:

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