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Sooo... I don't get it. So AJ is a mechanic? Where did you pull that from? It was also confusing in that at first, it seemed like the Templar was trying to learn something from her, but then he's the one who gives her a job to do.
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Aj isn't really a mechanic, but she is a problem solver. Not of precisely a mechanical nature, that's what's called an engineer. Aj solves practical problems, I think the leastmost stretch of imagination in Aj vs ht is to presume that she's got the same basic working knowledge of how to get bits that should move to move and bits that shouldn't to not that most farmers have. Hence; duct tape. Also, he's just a silly ol' high templar. Don't mind his antics.
Prelate? wait.....
Zeratul as a foal-sitter cracks me up! and so does rarity's little tirade. hialrious. mustache for you
To the readers and such like peoples: If you're going to comment (I hope you do!) please indulge me with a bit of this -
What was your favourite short? and why? Which was your least, and why? I'm messing about with silly ideas and such, so any and all outside input into the mix of consideration is much appreciated. Just because it's silly doesn't mean I can't keep looking for ways to improve.
Thank you.
Sweet, I was kind of hoping these would be consolidated. Now they are.
My favorite? I'd say Wonderbolts vs Phoenix vs Vikings, but that might be a bit biased since I requested it.
I know I loved the Colgate vs Defiler, that was fun.
Least favorite...uh...I dunno, there isn't one that I don't like...If I had to pick I guess the Vinyl Scratch and Octavia vs The Nuke...just cuz.
Was that a TF2 engie reference I saw?
I said it before and I'll say it again......this is how I want to die.
I'd say my favourite would be Rarity VS Additional Pylons. As for least favourite... I guess Vinyl Scratch and Octavia VS The Nuke, I'm not really sure why. I guess it sort of felt like a filler to me :/
Random requests:
Changelings vs changelings
Luna vs mothership
Derpy vs thor or seige tank.
Fluttershy vs ghost
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Vinyl and 'tavi vs the Nuke seems to get that reaction more than any other. I'm not really surprised; it just lacks for a certain something. I'll be the first to admit that these can be a bit hit and miss.
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Colgate vs Defiler, though CMC vs Overmind is a close second.
My least was... Celestia vs Queen of Blades.
It just didn't fit the rest to me.
meh, personal opinion there.
But the missiles-cum-rocket engines...
...
Is uh...that really how you wanted to word that?
Favorite definitely goes to Wonderbolts vs. Pheonix vs. Vikings. That was random and awesome. A second goes to Rarity vs. Additional Pylons.
If I had to pick one that didn't really sit well with me, it'd be Iron Will vs. Angry Units. It just doesn't feel as great.
Do something with a BC. Or a carrier.
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I suppose I'll take the safe approach though and change it anyway
Oh sweet Celestia, I read all of his lines in his voice.
Hahahahaha, oh what I wouldn't give to actually hear him say that.
“I am going for a bubble bath. No one to disturb me.”
I'm not sure what garden gnomes have to do with anything, but this was certainly entertaning.
Caught a few things:
They'd keep melting throw the floor
Lately, of civilization could be blamed on shipping (missing word?)
opened. the emperor looked looked up
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Errors have been addressed. I kinda suck at spotting them.
I wish anyone was this enthusiastic at anything. The world would be a goddamn utopia.
Or a fallout hell-hole. Either or.
This is the most pleasant will-destroy-everything-that's-ever-excisted force I've ever seen.
It was not very clear to me, at first, that the CMC were making things evolve just by touching them. I didn't get a good idea of the process until you had the guardian turn into a brood lord. Even then, it still felt like an awkward read. This is all a shame, since the CMC infecting the zerg with ambition and growth sounds like such a fitting (and freaking adorable) idea!
I also wasn't a fan of the back-and-forth between the Overmind and the cerebrate, initially. Any of the Overmind's character didn't show through until performing the rescue at the end.
As for my favorite chapters? I each one averaged out to be an enjoyable experience, until we reached Iron Will. Everything since then hasn't been very funny, or even comprehensible at some parts.
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Woeful tidings indeed. Looks like I have some work cut out for me.
OK, that was a cool ending. This chapter was more enjoyable I believe, because there was less of the excessive, tautological narrative (although we were still stuck with plenty of it), and more to do with character dialogue and actions.
A few notes - It's been brought to my attention that some of the more recent PvSC's in gentle but concise terms...are different. This may not be a good thing, and so I am deciding that the next six of them (including this one, Pinkie Pie vs Bunker) will return to the mane six as a bit of soul searching on my part. With Ponies. And Starcraft. In conflict. I intend to remedy any perceived decline in quality right away.
Hence- have Pinkie Pie vs Bunker.
A particular note on this one - It may or may not be continuious with 'Pinkie Pie vs Infestor.' I'm flirting with continuity, but I'm not sure I'm ready for that kind of commitment. It's open to interpret whatever way you want.
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I think it would work perfectly with the continuity. After all, the Marine kept seeing tentacles and stuff... but that doesn't mean they were attached to Pinkie, after all.
and besides, now that we have a Party Infestor, there's an enitre group available for party set-up.
Think of the party possibilities!
well well, this is highly amusing. im intrigued
So she was infested (hence the tentacles and green organs on the outside), exploded (an ability from SC1), and survived and no longer infested (because she's Pinkie Pie)?
Anyway, I liked this chapter the most of this latter half of chapters/shorts. Doesn't fill me with with as much joy as the first generation though. Probably because the initial argument between the SM and SCV wasn't that endearing, and I wasn't entirely sure what was happening during that explosion.
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I think I'm starting to see the breadth and depth of the matter...
I get what you're saying, though I did enjoy the Mengsk one... bubble bath
Looking forward to see where you go.
Oooh, Pinkie was an Infested Terran. I thought she was just (unsuccesfully) neural parasited.
I'm gonna be honest, I didn't figure that out until the comments section.
I do like the continuation of the previous Pinkie chapter (Pinkamena becoming zergilicous). It was neat, and I personnally hope the same will happen for the rest. But, that's your call.
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I think a healthy dose of continuity might get me back on track from this overly narrative heavy style of the more Randomly Random Crossover chapters.
It's all the metagame of Starcraft...err,, Ponies vs Starcrafting.
...
I saw the title, and I knew, this was going to be hilarious. I was right! That zealot trying to break the rocks was great.
Heheh, I love that Immortal description. If something like that had been recast in heavy armour with twinned cannons, sent to the far reaches of space, seen afew things, and blown most of them up it very well could've been nearly as impressive as the Immortal.
These descriptions is one of the more grand parts in my opinion. They always start out being legit in it's explanations, then it makes a nice turn into comedy absurdity. (Aka, bold parts)
To quote: "Everything else is gravy."
Very, very good gravy.
Ha! I can't wait to see how rarity reacts to warp prisms and colossi.
Probey-Wobey, what has been named, cannot be unnamed.
Another grand chapter.
I'd say more, but it's hard to type on a fucked up keyboard.
Said keboard willypull crap ike this, laking lettmrs dissaear and repppear laaer... trtly annoyinu.
YES!!! I consider this and the last one, with Rarity to be the start of a new arch, with the ponies interacting wth an entire base. And I for one am LOVING IT! I also felt the inclusion, even just the referenfing of, hard core tactics upped the tension.
xD HILARIOUS!!!!! AND YAY FOR THA CHECKL
IST!!!
PHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!!!! THE END!!!!
FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUU!!xD
Rainbow Dash is truly the best of the best...hmmm now I want to see what happens if she encounters Rarity's base and doesn't realize its her.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Two things:
and if had ever thought
burns their marred their hulls
This was great! I kinda expected the enemy to be Protoss though... But that ain't really a complaint.
Wait- Rainbow took control of the Zerg?
And, uh, is it wrong that my mind keeps remixing "Adri" into "Idra"?
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Huh this was totally
He totally didn't
intentionala coincidence, and I am in no way making any kind of reference in any way, shape, or form to him,angry hate spewing ragerfine upstanding player that he istotally didsget his ass kicked by Dash, who then proceeded to sabotage his game and raid his fridge. That would just be ridiculousand awesome1371595
Lol. I knew it!
Figures She'd know the guy in person...
and be more than willing to peg him in the eye for it.
EMP! And Number 25! FU**ING AWESOME :D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
I realized something. I could totally write chapters that are smaller than a thousand words now, seeing as the sum total of the story is Thirty Times the minimum required story length.
I set out to do just that.
This chapter has 1048 words.
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Micro chapters: Yes, No, Worth a shot?
If you can still pack in a good story and punchline, I don't see why not.
Brotoss and their cloaking, no matter who it is, the other party is gonna have a bad time. PyloXTwilight schematics have been uploaded to the orbital shipyards.
The pylon should paced before shone
Whuh?
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If you french fry when you shoulda pizzaed, you're gonna have a bad time dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Also, I think it shoulda read "The pylon she paced before..." - at least, that's what I've fixed it to.
I am strong in the ways of the derp, you see. If Derptitude was like the force, I'd be Luke Skywalks-two-steps-and-trips-over-a-cloud-because-I-turned-to-wave-at-Derpy-dot-dot-dot-I-regret-nothing-she's-totally-awesome-pony.
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How does onepacea pylon?Is she timing the rotation of the rings?Edit: Re-reading it, I know understand, ignore this.
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another attempt at a micro chapter...and it's 1057 words
Still, the other Fluttershy chapter had her verseus the UNIVERSE ITSELF and this one is about as opposite to that as we can get. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
I think you should retool the structure at the end. It was not clear when (what I assume was) the dark templar was talking, and when it was Twilight Sparkle.
Also:
“Oh Pylo. Why can’t your creators be more like you?" Twilight smiled as her gaze sank into the artfully worked crystal, a masterpiece of form and function. “I mean, you’re steady. Constant. Reliable. Tastefully illuminated, and producing free energy at a square inverse dimensional reciprocation rate." Just thinking about it sent shivers of delight through her.
So adorable...
But Silky will never escape, unless he gets the incredible luck to become a Mutalisk, because then he'll be faster than Fluttershy.
I hope he becomes a drone, and then a building, because then Fluttershy can snuggle up to him day or night.