(This story follows the Abridged versions of Goku, and Vegeta)
Vegeta finally has collected the 7 Dragon Balls after days upon days of searching, and the one thing he's always yearned for is now within reach...
Immortality.
That is, until Goku joins in, and unknowingly wishes the both of them to Equestria. How will this end?
Find out on the next episode of- oh wait... damn.
Rated Teen for: (rude language, sex jokes, and general dumb behaviour)
The Sex tag is included for: (Sexual jokes, and references. No sexual acts will take place in this story.)
Chapters (2)
.....lol teh fuck
...So it's the Abridged versions...
I get hard thinkin about this story
5796616 Indeed it is.
5796617 And why is that?
And with this the end of equestria is close XD
5796623 ....you tell me
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5796913 I shall. Altough updates on a regular basis shall be difficult.
Not bad of a story mate, it's a nice change of pace from reading romance ones. Anyways I really don't care for misspelling as long the author stays true to the character(s) and how the readers feels inside the story to. I don't know if you have free time on your hands but another chapter we'll make mine or someone else's day.
5796946 I'm trying to get a good sketch for the next chapter later today.
But having no stable agenda, and having occasional mood swings, make it impossible for me to update on a reqular basis.
this is the funniest thing i've read all morning.
i hope to see more of this or i will cut you.
Oh hell yes..
I vote to co author with you.
Also, maybe put in the description you'll be referencing Abridged so less people get pissy.
That fast?
5797173 Twas what I could write out at the moment. More chapters will follow ofcourse.
5797176 um...more words it.
P.S: Fix you Grammar it.
5797180 Don't worry, it'll be edited. <3
5797193 I see. good luck. i will check you story some progress. when you done.
5797198 Edited
TFS versions? Oh, fuck the hells YES!
I think that one was meant to be Kakarot, because that's all TFS Vegie EVER calls him.
5797345 Ah yes ofcourse. thank you for pointing that out.
btw In Dragon ball EP, no one ever say "Fuck"
5797372 This is based of the Abridges series from TeamFourStar
5797329 Oh my god. Dan!? FAV!!!
*claps hooves together*
This is going to be so fun. I wonder what antics Goku and Vegeta will get into while in Equestria.
I wonder if they're going to try to eat somepony....Saiyans gotta eat ya know.
5797403 Find out on the next chapter of:
Goku and Vegeta Take on Equestria! (or not.. Because you know, filler)
5797350 For the sake of amusement, why not throw in a couple of lines from HUA as well? I'm thinking either, "You missed. Whoop whoop whoop whoop whoop whoop,", "Bitch, I eat people!", or "Bitches love cannons."
5797425 There is still plenty of room for additional lines on future chapters.
5797432 That's what I meant.
5797473 Oh.. Whelp, blaming lack of sleep on that one.
5797476 ...Yeah, you don't get to use that right now, unless you're also an Aussie.
I do.
It's 2 am here.
5797482
6 P.M here. And beeing up since 1 P.M yesterday.
5797496 Been there, done that. Makes me glad I've done with all forms of study for now.
I'll be looking into getting a security license after I turn 21.
I must see this continue. I MUST!!! O_________O
Ha.
I love the idea of throwing the abridged characters into Equestria, but this needs some serious help with editing because it is kind of a mess as is. I will definitely follow it for now because the idea is hilarious, but the problems are really keeping the story as a whole from being good which is very unfortunate because this could be absolutely brilliant.
I likes me some abridged crossover!
, 
nudge, nudge...
Y'know, I wouldn't stop you from doing a Hellsing Abridged crossover as well, hint, hint,
5798491 You know, no offense, saying there are problems then not pointing them out doesn't do squat to help the story. Mind pointing them out so they can be fixed? (BTW I know this chapter was kind of messy, so I plan to help the author a bit more with the next one :3)
5798835 Yeah, I know. The problem is that there were tons of problems of all kinds throughout the entire chapter and I really do not have the time and motivation to edit this myself which is what I would have to do to make sure I didn't miss anything. It has issues with everything from spelling and punctuation to sentence structure to pacing along with a bunch of other weird issues that I am not sure how to even describe which is why the only thing I can really say is that it needs a lot of editing. I am sure there are good editors out there that would be willing to help with this because DBZ Abridged is hilarious and very popular so a crossover with that should have strong appeal, but I do not know how to find them so I cannot help with that either.
5798865 Pacing I can see, but these stories just kinda roll like that. There were maybe one or two sentences that read a little funny. There were perhaps a few small errors with the spelling and punctuation that slipped by me because Gdocs was acting all funny. But besides that all the others things aren't exactly true. 'Weird things you can't even describe'? What the heck does that mean? Also, no offense, but your comment itself had quite a few issues I could point out, so I don't know if I can exactly trust what you say
But, I will take your advice and help the author get some top-notch editors for this.
Interesting theme you got here. I will reserve judgement on this story until you get a few chapters in.
Only real grievance I have are with your tendency to... well, make *sound effects*. *these* comic sound effects works in comics because the description lies in the picture and not in the actual text. It's simply not proper to use them in a novel kind of story, no matter its comical effect. It only translates as one being too lazy to take the time to write properly.
Don't write *Twack* instead describe the action as Applejack kicks the tree with a solid hoof.
And then kicked it again.
Then firmly she planted one last hoof into the bark and watched as the last apple fell from the branch above into the waiting basket at the foot of the tree.
In my opinion it sounds much better and sweeps the reader into the world you are trying to depict, don't you think so?
Well I have said my words, do with them as you like but I hope you take them to heart. See you next chapter.
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5798904 Thank you for pointing this out, and I highly agree with you on this.
I will cherish this info for the future.
I need a adult?
5801801
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Think you might want to get a better editor, I count at least ten errors.
random, very random but in the good way, it is really funny, I hope to see more of this.
keep up the good work.
Yes, more, more, MORE!