• Member Since 9th Aug, 2014
  • offline last seen Nov 7th, 2014


Names GMD, I make stories about horses meeting monkeys. Like Saiyan of All for instance. :D


Everybody knows about Goku, the one Saiyan who avenged his race and defeated the evil Frieza, and especially his son, Gohan. Goku is said to be dead, what they don't know, is he is actually alive, and sent to a strange planet where friendship is a form of magic. In short, its Vegeta's worst nightmare.

Wanna ask me a question about this story? Go here!: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/366712/ask-gmd-1
Current blog post: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/378181/no-just-no

Artwork by: GabrielDemarco1031

Current chapter i'm working on: None

Wanna get the latest news on this? Join DBZ Crossovers now! And submit you're best story of DBZ and MLP! If you don't have one, join anyway!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 157 )

Hmmm I wonder how they will react to ssj goku


4826959 Only time will tell...

even if i am not the greatest fan anymore from Dragonball, i think this is going to be interessting.

There are numerous errors here that take away from the story's interesting premise. If you haven't already, I would recommend finding a proofreader.

Comment posted by Kovy deleted Aug 10th, 2014

4827372 I do know there are many errors, but c'mon. It's the first chapter! And yes, I do plan on getting a proofreader, just dunno who... :ajsleepy:

4827974 I don't blame you. My very first chapter I ever made (still didn't transfer them to fimfiction) had errors. Plus, it was in a play script at that time!:ajsleepy:

Wow, this story is already popular!

random comment!!!!!!!! :rainbowwild: but i ike the fic eitherway


4829772 You're profile pic matches that comment.

I will continue reading this with enthusiasm. I find it to be an extremely eye-catching story that contains a wonderful plotline. This will remain as one of the few stories I still keep tabs on.

Interesting so far. Looking forward to future chapters. :eeyup:

goku is in for the ride of his life. lol. hey if you don't already have a proof reader, id be glad to help out. just PM me and ill look over the story and report to you what i find:twilightsmile: also heres a :moustache: for your troubles

You asked me what's going to happen:

"Woah woah woah! We're not just gonna let you wander off into Ponyville!" Twilight said.
"Oh really?" Goku replied with a smirk on his face.
"Yes rea-" Twilight had begun; but before she could finish, Goku was already out of her spell and walking out the door.

"Okay, have fun with that," Goku said, "Oh! And FWI, I ate all the food in your fridge." And with that, our hero began his first day in Equestria; leaving two gawking ponies, and a dragon, to try and understand what just happened.

This...this is what's going to happen. (Probably not, but it'd be hilarious if it did.)

Or maybe something like this:

"Oh, and FWI, I ate all the food in your fridge."
"What about the freezer?" Fluttershy asked.
"F-Frieza? Frieza!? Friezahhhhhhh!"


Ok a few things. First the premis (I had to have spelled that wrong) is a good one, the DBZ verse is full of aliens and fantastic creatures even on Earth so its not a streach for Goku to find his way here. The thing is so far you're doing whats called "telling, not showing". In other words your listing a series of events makeing it seem more like an outline of a story than an actual narritive. That and you break the 4th wall with the narration makes it seem more like I'm listning to a guy talking rather than reading a story. I'll keep following this because its only the first 2 chapters and some of my favorite fics were MUCH worse in this stage. Keep up the practice and dont let negative comments get you down.


4844479 To be honest, I haven't gotten any negative comments t'ill now. Also, it's suppose to be a comedy too! So, you should have expected fourth wall breaking! Who knows, maybe the speaker is actually an important character in the mlp universe... Lol jk that would be stupid.

Just offering a bit of critique. Not that I should be talking Im no Shakespear. Just keep it up, like I said this idea looks promising. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Aug 14th, 2014
Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Aug 14th, 2014
Comment posted by GMD deleted Aug 14th, 2014
Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Aug 14th, 2014

4844773 I should probably get a proofreader though.

*Ahem, is this thing on? It is? Okay, you are now reading why the others came to Fluttershy's cottage. Have fun with that...*
-Nappa from DBZ Abridged

I thought you were dead!:pinkiegasp:

Everybody knows about Goku,

Sudden emphasis on Everybody...

This story is so corny, I love it

I'm also reading tho goku parts in the abridged voice

Can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiesmile:

MUST. SEE. MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

I love this! I hope to see a new chapter out soon. :rainbowdetermined2:

Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Aug 17th, 2014

Great chapter! Will be interesting to see what will happen now. Looking forward to future chapters! Be Well.:eeyup:

Just wait until she sees a SUPER SAIYAN! :rainbowdetermined2:

Loving the story. It's well written and has a lot of good stuff. Can't wait for the next! ^u^

Let me guess she will see gokus memories?


4865439 Not, even, close. That's too predictable.

"Now, Saiyan, I have decided to be merciful and let you leave considering you have not harmed anypony," Celestia says with a low voice.

I frown and look her in the eyes.
"Yeeeeaaahhhhh...I can't."
" What?! Wh-who do you think you are! To challenge a foe that's obviously much more powerful than a saiyan could ever be!" Celestia shouts in outrage.

'Really? I didn't even challenge her! I just-you know what... if she wants to know what I am, then I'll show her,' I think to myself.

"Who am I? Heh. I am the warrior you have heard of in legends; pure of heart and awakened by fury." The whole throne room begins to shake and a gold tint begins to form around me.

The ponies all look at me in amazement, especially that white one.

"I am the hope of the universe. I am the answer to all living beings that cry out for peace. I am protector of the innocent. I am the light in the darkness..."

The golden glow intensifies and my hair begins to spike up.

"I am truth. Ally to good. Nightmare to evil."

Suddenly the aura around me explodes in a brilliant golden flash, and my hair spikes up equally as gold.



Don't...know why I write that. But oh well. Seriously though, when is Goku going to just show everyone that he's the strongest in the universe?


4866257 Well, you gave me an idea, and he'll show them in the next chapter.

Hmmm....I honestly wasn't expecting Celestia to lash out like that. Then again, if she's heard of Saiyans, it makes sense.

I bet 20 bit celestia knows about frezia and she fears for her kingdom about a mortal stronger than frezia or she doesn't know about frezia and after what twilight told her fears goku might try to kill her and rule her kingdom

Interesting, though the Mane 6 do know what horses are, consult Season 1 finale "The Best Night Ever!":twilightoops:


4868760 Heh, my bad! Lemme change that.


Holy crap! 60 likes and over 450+ readers! Thanks guys! I plan to make this story the best!

Awesome fic so far dude :D, when is the 5th chapter coming out? You have certainly peaked my interest, also where do you put the mane six, princesses, Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra etc in terms of power level? Cause we already know Goku's current power level

Base Goku- 3,000,000 (or did Goku get another Zenkai in this fic?)

Goku (Kaioken x10)- 30,000,000

Goku (Kaioken x20)- 60,000,000

Super Saiyan Goku- 150,000,000


4885940 Ya know, i havent thought bout that... Ill tell there power levels in the next chapter!! :pinkiehappy: Also, i am planning to make the next chapter up to atleast 4,000 words! So.... expect itt done atleast in 2 days! :twilightsmile: :twilightsheepish: :rainbowkiss:

Login or register to comment