Humans finally invade Equestrian and make it so that ponys are slaves. This is very bad and I must help them. I am a human who gained the power to be an ALICORN. I am going to free them. weather I die in fight in not of the issue...
NO HATE (TROLLS) IF YOU HAVE A ISSUE WITH THE STORY PLEASE MAKE SURE YOU READ IT FIRST!
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Beautiful writing, as always!
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Thank you boooo!!!
So, how many chapters will this have?
how can it have 18 dislikes if it just came out???
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No one likes Mary Sue alicorns. OC alicorns are pretty much the most hated thing.
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i have no problem of OC alicorns
Overpower: Check!
Male Alicorn: Check!
Red or Black colour: Check!
instantly romance Action with Main6: Check!
Edgy Name: None
4 out of 5
Come on, you can make an OC better than this
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I mean male alicorns Are not inherently bad and this is a war story so it makes some degree of sense
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IS THERE A PROBLEM WITH THAT??
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what makes it a mary sue?
Love it.
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thank you!!! there are some trolls around here righnt in the now that make it hard to make storys but at least i will DELETE AND BLOCK THEM
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but im a girl? my OC (Time Shatter) is not a mary sue because he is a HE not a MARY.
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So apparently, Harvard's English classes have completely dispensed with such trivial things as detecting sarcasm in favor of "how to be James Joyce" (who they don't actually understand, but they try to make that sound like it's a good thing). I can't say I'm surprised or even disappointed, because I don't really expect better from the US' education system.
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Gary Stu is the term they are looking for then
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how is my character a gary stu if you did not read it?
You can actually disable the upvote-downvote bar, since it'll never be in your favor anyway. (For the record, downvote-bots are actually real but they only provably target foalcon and other illegal-to-actually-partake-in fetishes)
Wow, I have read a lot of bad stories in my life, but honestly, not even the worst story I ever read was anywhere as bad as this. May it get as many downvotes as it deserves and get an even worse rateing than those supertrampoline story.
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so you own the bots that are attacking me?
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this story is not bad. anyone who says it is bad never read the story. you did not read it. i know because you think it is bad.
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absolutely rude. dont post garbage pictures here
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Belive that if you want, but I know that it's not the case since I regrett the time spent on it.
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did not read it i guess
Man, they're deleting comments like the Gestapo burning books.
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If you want to keep accting that way, than so may it be. I won't waste any more time on it
For now, welcome to my list of blocked users, it's a very lonely place and will probably stay for a long time.
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blocked users??? NOOO!!
I checked the rules, and this doesn't technically break any.
More words are correctly spelled than not, and most paragraphs at least end with a full stop or ellipsis. Ignore how hilariously low of a bar that is; much like how I bring up James Joyce, there are dead-tree publishers with lower standards.
This almost sounds like a justification for at least some of Windlife's actions. Much like jaywalking
or social distancing, being a stickler for the actual law apparently means posting on r/AmItheAsshole afterwards and being told that you are. Again, ignore the comically thin skin that causes the situation because the rules don't actually care about that.11255808
tahnk you for combating the haters !
it is really good so far
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I didn't say your character is one, was pointing out that a Gary Stu is the male version of a Mary Sue. I would have replied to the comment that called the character a Mary Sue but it's deleted
Honestly dude, this is impressive.
this is the most ratio'ed story i've seen in the new tab.
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gotta agree here
I can't tell if OP is an insane schizo or just trolling, but it's amusing to read through the dumpster fire that is this comments thread.
More fun than reading the fic, at least.
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Is this a real person an automated meme bot edgelord machine?
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?????
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Haters come after me on every story i write. even if i try to be funny or sirus they always attack me and try to dystroy me