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I stopped and let Twilight down and she laughed and said "It was good to finally be able to meet you."
I agreed and bowed (It was a human thing but she understood because we had somewhat so culture) and she (Twilight is a girl) said (they attacked her mouth early in the story but i didn't say so she talks with a lisp) "I love (Twilight knows what love is in the universe) you (My Oc - Time Shatter)
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i like that you had to clarify that twilight knew what love was in this universe
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dumb
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thank you. i know she has issues with love i nthe show because she is so smart but here she knows which makes my life easier to write this out. i plan on it being about 100k words
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That's what makes this guy so amazing, you just can't tell, and it's so hilarious to watch the cluster fuck lol
I will totally simp for this guy just for the memes
I have read this story and I have to say, I am very confused.
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why
NEW STORY TOMORROW EVERYONE!!
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wrong
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because you are trolling the story IN MY OPINION. you didn't read it, i think.
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trying to get to me huh? Ill let you know that at any point i could delete that passive aggressive comment of yours. ill give you one more chance to not troll. use it wisely
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trolls are so easy to mess with
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are you saying facebook is bad??
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harassment
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wrong
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stop acting like a child please !! :)
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dont be upset, troll. haters going to hate as they say in my home town of california
Story Tomorrow btw!!
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Ahh, schizo then, I see.
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Ooh, a little narcissism too. Fun!
Go touch grass.
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you did not read it i see. just another person who sees me combating the trolls back from my story WHICH DESERVES MORE THAN IT GOT and you think im the bad guy? wow. This is dumb!!
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thank you for the new testimonial
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yes
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How do you know I didn't read your fic?
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you are not complementing it
interesting
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my mother who hates my uses facebook a lot and she says is okay but i dont realyl use it much because i like tiktok but she says its bad and i said it wasn't but i dont live with her whatever
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Let's play a little thought game. Let's say the tables are turned. Let's say you read somebody else's fic and didn't think it was good. Let's say, hypothetically, that you comment on it and say you didn't enjoy it. Let's say a lot of people agree with you. Is your opinion valid?
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Deletion is only justice: prompt, severe and inflexible; it is then an emanation of virtue; it is less a distinct principle than a natural consequence of the general principle of like/dislike ratio, applied to the most pressing wants of the story.
Now, I’m no troll, but I am a fair and honest critic.
The idea of humans versus ponies is interesting, but this is really rushed…
Obviously the spelling, grammar, and vocabulary need work. Not nitpicking too bad on that, though.
The first chapter goes way too fast, and the characters know things for… reasons. There’s no elaborations. Also there are plenty of other issues.
My advice? Use Grammarly, and maybe try to have your story proofread.
I’m out.
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Grammerly is a virus
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Uh… no it isn’t? Where did you hear that?
It’s a writing tool that is very useful for actually writing stories. I use it myself for my own fics.
Just saying.
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you dont have many followers tho... cant be that good
>when you write true KINO, but the lowlifes raised on skirtsian purple prose can't appreciate it
The sheer injustice of it all, man
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thank you!! consider joining the fan group!! I LOVE MY FANS!!!
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Not a virus, but it is technically spyware. It saves everything you type and shares it with third parties.
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i knew it. virus. thank you!
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NEW STORY TOMORROW!!! 
Spinner, you are a terrible person! I hope the admins ban you for that terrible comment!
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I'll keep mentioning James Joyce until Windlife figures out what I mean by doing so.
I know that I have my own sins with the first story I made like two or three months ago, but... Lord, I don't even know what to say, it's not that bad, but the reasons, background, personality, and characteristics of a world must be given through the story, not in a single chapter that does not fill any of the minimum requirements to make a story. This is my opinion of what you can do, just... Make a draft of what you want in your story, the setting of the world, personality of the characters, etc.
This is the most storied story I have read. It plot certainly plots and its characters certainly character as do its many words that word.
The fact you were an asshole to some trying to help you means you kinda suck.Exanbu was giving you advice to take away downvotes yet you don’t listen to them and still preach on how he’s a troll.I felt bad you were getting this much hate up until now.You’re like https://www.fimfiction.net/user/218077/Norwegian+boy .He pushes away everyone even if they’re trying to help and downvote them.
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Not going to listen to people like you who just want me to change my whole story to fit WHAT THEY WANT. Guess what? THIS ISNT YOUR STORY. GO AWAY!
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If you want to talk about ppl pushing others away... cough cough