The Death of Equestria (Alicorn Transformation) *Twilight Romance*

by Windlife

Hello

There was something in the air (It was white and light and hurt my eyes) it was the sunnings

Comments

[Try Hard]

Beautiful chapter, baby

[Starlight Nova]

What is this a crossover of?

[Windlife]

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sonic

[The Weaver]

Chapter is so pitifully sort it tarnishes the name 'chapter'. It is not even a complete sentence as it lacks a period.

[kykkoman4]

it is with great regret on my part that i must inform you that my still sleep deprived self does not have the patience to form a coherent rationalization of your story. I don't think i ever will. Good luck to all of those who do have the ability understand this whole a heapin a spaghetti pile of informazione. My head hurt reading this
|。･ω･|づ　βyё βyё☆彡

[Windlife]

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hater

[Soderin]

My guy what even is this

[Glitched Grim]

My brother in Christ, what. the. fuck. did I just read.

[HoloMew151]

I think the story does have some potential, but I would highly suggest that you use a spell checker more often because there are way too many examples of spelling errors and lack of punctuation. Think the pacing is too fast at times though - the actual transformation in particular was over and done with within a paragraph and could have been fleshed out more.

[Windlife]

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[Glitched Grim]

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Thanks for pointing out the obvious, now let’s hear the valid argument.

[PastyWaffles]

Omg you're still here holy shit

[Randomguy12]

I’m still baffled on how you still produce stories like this, they all get downvoted into the ground and you never take the advice that people give you on how to better it.All 18 stories are all in the majority of downvotes, and this can’t be the cause of a couple random trolls. If over a hundred people dislike your stuff then you are the one messing up.Fix the stories and learn how to grow up, take the advice people are giving you.It’s the only way of getting out of the sea of red you’ve gotten yourself into.

[Windlife]

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You have 8 followers. Please troll someone else! Thxs!