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// sometime all you nned is sneed 
// Story: The Death of Equestria (Alicorn Transformation) *Twilight Romance* 
// by Windlife 
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Twilight was at the edge of her seat (Beacuse it was small) and then she laughed because (becaus she was laughing)

My OC, (I forgot his name) was very happy that they won the revolution and it was really cool - and now he was with her (Twilight_OC Name_Last Name) 

He closed his eye (because he lost one like an anime character in my new story im writing right in the now) and he remembered the war and he is going ot flash back into it

-Flashback_

It was warm outside. He had a gun, but it was magic nad spicy and metal and cold unlike the warm air aorund him with a kiss form his grandate he hit himself with it (forgot to pull the pin) (He did not want to live at this moment because he lost Tigliht) (Will explain in next chpater) and it hit him in the eye and hurt his eye and the doctor then siad he lost it because he is scared.