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Rainbow Dash learns she can control other people's minds with her amazing guitar playing skills! She surly won't abuse the power.... much.
Editors Needed for future stories.
I'm not looking for people to yell at me again. If you're going to "Criticizes" this, don't be mean about it. If you are a hater, you'll be deleted. Thank you.
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No adding to any troll groups.
5088112
Again, please stop trolling.
Looking for editors.
5088119
Stop talking like you know things.
5088129
Sure, buddy. Go back home now, you're not very good at being "smart".
5088134
Says the person who deletes comments to "block the haters"
5088138
*Pats on head* You keep trying to be smart. I'll be over here laughing at you.
Windlife? I hate to say it, but if you say don't add to any troll groups, the troll groups will come for you. If you ask that they add to troll groups? It might have a slightly better result in your favor. Don't talk about troll groups at all? Bingo.
5088141
I've done nothing to indicate I was trying to be "smart". Simply that you're a fucking idiot.
Let the hate rain down on you like the plagues of egypt.
5088145
*Pats on head* You tried.
5088151
"tried"? Dude, if you get rid of the "DONT HATE ON MAI STORY" warning, this would have just faded into obscurity
5088157
Hush now, for your time has not come.
5088161
The fuck are you talking about?
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5088178
Fuck off.
5088185
Seems fair to me. Two apples for the price of one? That's a good deal.
Don't worry everyone, Guardian and Babs has nothing good to say. Please enjoy the story!
another brilliant story, i new i not mad3 a mstak folloing u
but it seems STOOPD PPL still kep being hatrez
kep going duud, ignor te hait
5088111
Don't troll. Last warning.
5088229 Wanna fight about it, m8!?
Fookin' bash ur 'ead, swer on me mum.
5088241
And people say I'm rude. Wow, please leave me alone, you hater.
5088246
Totes h8er
5088142 I'm pretty sure that it's goal.
Negative comment.
5088262
Thank, God. Please never come back!
5088268
Thank you for learning your lesson.
5088271
And yet you never learned yours to not delete comments, or mass hate will be spewed on you.
5088241
5088138 UM EXCUSE ME SEE THE THING AT THE DESCRIPTION TELLING U TO "NO HATERS"???????!!!
5088276
Haters are a necessary part of being an author. They teach you to be better by criticizing you, and they get you ready for the harsh real world of writing aside from online fiction writing. To say not to hate is like to say "I don't want to improve"
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5088312 tl;dr
2word4me u must be stoopid al de hters r rlly meen to rlly good ritr kk thxbi
I've only read the first paragraph and I'm confused. Why does she like the sound specifically? Does it bring up an old memory? Is it just catchy? If you're going to make the character like something, at least give the reader a reason as to why she likes it. I'm sure you wouldn't have just added it in if there wasn't something significant about it. Or maybe I'm just being optimistic. Anyways, here's a better example:
Again, the reason your scene is sub-par as there's literally no description or detail put into it, it's just there.
You're not even trying, are you?
Nice troll fic. Enjoy your dislike.