In the Eyes of Death

Damien Law was once part of one of the biggest villain groups in the USA. Key word on was. The first member went missing, now presumed dead. The second got stabbed while on his way to the store, and bleed to death.

It’s been five years since then. Damien has moved on. From all of the ‘work’ he did he has enough money to survive on till he dies.

So he decided to go to a convention dressed as a hero from Japan. What could go wrong?

Chapters (6)

Prologue · 25th Oct 2020 · 1,946 words
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Chapter One: Beginning of a new life · 9th Nov 2020 · 1,792 words
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Chapter Two: Old Monster and the Rat · 26th Mar 2021 · 1,708 words
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Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen · 13th May 2021 · 3,938 words
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Chapter Four: Experiments · 23rd Jul 2021 · 1,488 words
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Chapter Five: Break Out time. · 23rd Jul 2021 · 1,701 words
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Karakuri_Shogun_Burel

Karakuri_Shogun_Burel #1 · Oct 25th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

Is it anthro or fully human with different traits?

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #2 · Oct 25th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

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It’s going to be human but with anthro traits, so with the wings and horns. And later on I will include ears and tails, and more.

Karakuri_Shogun_Burel

Karakuri_Shogun_Burel #3 · Oct 25th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue ·

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So what do the Earth Pony's have then? Because, usually, they are just stronger but that unicorn said "I don’t think I’ve seen a creature like you before." witch, as he doesn't have wings or A horn, would make him an 'Earth Pony', with everyone looking human, but the unicorn didn't know what race he is.

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #4 · Oct 26th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

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Well I guess you’ll just have to wait and see...

king ageless

king ageless #5 · Oct 26th, 2020 · 2 · · Prologue ·

Will the main character have have 2 quirks because of the character he was dressed ass with his original quirk mixed together

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #6 · Oct 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue ·

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Yes.

king ageless

king ageless #7 · Oct 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue ·

I knew it

Navarone

Navarone #8 · Oct 26th, 2020 · · · Prologue ·

Looks good but I'm hoping this isn't going to die early like a lot of attempts at a displaced story.

The broken sword of hope

The broken sword of hope #9 · Nov 9th, 2020 · · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

Hmmm interesting

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #10 · Nov 9th, 2020 · · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

How can a villain group be big if there are only three members? ...Please tell me he's getting sent to the My Little Academia: Friendship is Heroic! universe.

deadmemes

deadmemes #11 · Nov 9th, 2020 · 3 · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

After a minute or two Starswirl fell asleep thinking ‘A little power nap won’t hurt anybody!’ Once he did the water started bubbling and Clay rose from it and walked out. His clothes were fully repaired and all of his things were still on him. He looked over and saw Star sleeping. ‘I need to find the nearest town… thank you Starswirl.. and goodbye.’ He thought as he walked out of the cave leaving Starswirl sleeping peacefully.

Shoulda killed him to avoid unnecessary trouble

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #12 · Nov 9th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

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I like the way you think

deadmemes

deadmemes #13 · Nov 10th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

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Society probably won't

Sorry piece of substance

Sorry piece of substance #14 · Nov 18th, 2020 · · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

“Now I don’t know what happened to your voice, but I can tell you where yours are.” Clay watched as the man opened his arms wide and adorned a big smile on his face. “You are in my laboratory! And my name is Starswirl.” Clay was about to speak up but was cut off by the pony. “And before you ask, yes I’m blind,” Starswirl said as he pointed to his eyes. They were light blue and looked like the most beautiful crystals that were shattered.

"I can tell where you are"

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #15 · Nov 19th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

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Thanks!

PixelatedPerson

PixelatedPerson #16 · Nov 26th, 2020 · · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

This is pretty good, hope to see more soon.

Ray MorningLight

Ray MorningLight #17 · Jan 18th, 2021 · 1 · · Prologue ·

To bad the dog couldn't come along

Ray MorningLight

Ray MorningLight #18 · Jan 18th, 2021 · 4 · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

He woke up in a laboratory and Star-guy decided to say that with an open arms and smile... Star-guy is mess up

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #19 · Mar 27th, 2021 · · · Chapter Two: Old Monster and the Rat ·

The greedy bartender deserved that kick to the face.

ponyreaper1

ponyreaper1 #20 · Mar 27th, 2021 · · · Chapter Two: Old Monster and the Rat ·

Nice lad

Orrm

Orrm #21 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Prologue ·

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Where d dog?

Orrm

Orrm #22 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

..... Yeah.... That's a no from me.

The one thing you don't do on a job is implicate yourself, that's how you get arrested.

DarkKing2

DarkKing2 #23 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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Pete100

Pete100 #24 · May 13th, 2021 · 1 · · Prologue ·

“One day when you choke because you didn’t chew, I will laugh my ass off.” Zeke then looked up to his master with big puppy eyes. He reached down and patted the dog on the head. “Of course I will save you, but I will still laugh.”

Wow, some pet owner.

Pete100

Pete100 #25 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter One: Beginning of a new life ·

Didn’t know lauren would be here.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #26 · May 13th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

No way to know the difficulty of the job, since it changes over time. How can arrows pierce plastic goggles??

Pete100

Pete100 #27 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter Two: Old Monster and the Rat ·

The old man closed his eyes and took a sip of tea. “The kind that can tell you’re not a pony.” Clay was already on guard against this old man, but now his guard tightened. “You see, my eyes can see the magic network or as some like to say, magic circuits, in a living being. Except you don’t have any magic, you have this peculiar green energy oozing off your body and swirling around your chest.” The old man let out a refreshed sigh and placed his cup on the table.

I’m sorry, what?

That’s when it clicked for Clay. That’s how Starswirl’s knew he was human. And that’s why Starswirl’s could see where the ponies were. The crazy pony may be blind but he can still see .

Starswirl can do it too?

“Hey, boy!” The old man yelled from the doorway, causing clay to turn around to see what he had to say. “I told you all that because I like you! If you ever struggle to make use of your powers come back here! And the nearest town is to the east.” With that Clay walked off, without even learning the old man's name.

Isn’t his powers useless?

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #28 · May 13th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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The arrows never pierced the goggles. The arrow pierced the mask. His goggles were broken by the sword slash. They were also turned into metal when he was displaced. Sorry if I didn’t make that clear enough.

DenzelRamos

DenzelRamos #29 · May 13th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

What ever happen to his reaper quirk?

Did it get combined with the eraser quirk, or did it get overwritten?

Pete100

Pete100 #30 · May 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

A hooded figure was standing above him staring. “You- You’re the Ghost aren’t you? You have on that mask.” The figure said shakily. From the tone of their voice they sound like a woman, an older one at that.

Fluttershy?

It was about a six hour long journey to the City of Eclipse. As Clay settled down on the Carriage he began to check all of his equipment, which has become part of his routine. He no longer wore his Aizawa costume as it got old and torn up over the years; now he wears an old turtle neck cloak, underneath he wears chainmail followed by a black shirt. And on top of all that was his scarf. His lower half consisted of some black tactical cargo pants and a pair of sneakers. And of course he has a bag that he takes with him everywhere since he technically doesn’t have a home.

Ok, got some drip.

‘How did he get on the roof without me noticing.’ He thought to himself as he used his scarf to bandage his wounds. ‘And he clearly was behind me, but when I turned around he wasn’t there. But instead he was where I was just looking. He didn’t make a sound…’ A thought clicked in his head. ‘I didn’t think they would appear here but it had to have been a quirk…’ Clay grunted as he wrapped his chest wound tightly. Once that was done he walked out of the cave to find a sturdy stick. He used that and some of his scarf to make a splint for his leg.

How is that possible?

“Will then Clayton Crow I go by the name Shao Dow. I’m what you would call a bodyguard.” The earth pony now known as Shao Dow introduced himself. “I’m surprised you healed so quickly from our last encounter. But really man did you have to kill our biggest employer yet? Like he played us so much and we barely had to do anything.” Shao Dow sulked.

Did you get that name from a rapper?

Coughing up blood, Clay spoke. “How did it come to this…” Clay said, as he laid on the ground bloody and beaten. As he laid there He began to lose consciousness.
“I should have never accepted that job….” Clay said coughing up blood, before falling unconscious.

But, a few weeks haven’t went by yet, has it?

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #31 · May 13th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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Thanks for clarifying. As for the archer, I'll chalk it up to them having armor-piercing arrows.

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #32 · May 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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Fictionfan100

Fictionfan100 #33 · Jun 1st, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

Since you have the main 6 in this, will you soon do a 1000 year timeskip or something?

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #34 · Jun 1st, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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Yessir

Kadigan

Kadigan #35 · Jun 24th, 2021 · 2 · · Prologue ·

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I think that's something we pet owners all share, to be honest. :D

I don't think it's that different to having a kid... Ask your parents about such dumb moments, I'm sure they have a catalogue. ;]

I mean, if I had to dig my cat out of the damn drain in the bathroom, stuck half-way through, I would've done it of course... but she'd never have lived it down. ;D

Pete100

Pete100 #36 · Jun 24th, 2021 · · · Chapter Three: Blood of the Fallen ·

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Well, I don’t have kids or pets. So I guess I’ll take your word for it.

Pete100

Pete100 #37 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter Four: Experiments ·

He was barely alive when they brought him in but most of his injuries healed once he was hooked up to a machine that supplied him with healing magic. The only thing that hadn’t healed were his eyes. So here Clay was, blind, being used as a lab rat.

What happened to his eyes?

“Hello~ this is Red Hoof here again today with experiment 589-D. Today we are using our lovely volunteers Shao Dow, Gentle Breeze, Hazel Showers, Hard Buck, and Subject 1’s gene factors like normal.” The doctor said into a recording device as he hooked up a machine to both of Clay's arms.

So shao Dow and his sister also went through this?

“Now onto the testing phase.” Red Hoof electrocuted Clay with magic to get a reaction, nothing happened. When that didn’t work he began doing various other tests to see if he could get the pain to activate the gene factor he had injected Clay with. After an hour of torture, he gave up. “No response or change in the subject.. I believe that my fears were true…. With the subject being blind he can not activate the gene factors of Shao Dow, Gentle Breeze, or Hazel Showers in any way. I was hoping because of this a variation may occur within his cells and produce a new, similar gene factor, but it did not.” With a sigh, he continued.

What does his eyes have to do with it?

‘I tried.’ He thought, dejected. Before the other two could say anything else Clay spoke. “I confess to killing Adolf Blueblood. I am prepared for my death. So let’s get this over with.” Clay said as he walked back to his bed and took a seat.

Is that really his name?

In his reflection Clay could see that his face didn’t have scars on it like he imagined it would. He looked to his right eye and like Starswirl pointed out, something had happened to it. His eye now had a concentric circle-shaped iris in it. It reminded him of a bullseye.

The rinnegan?

“I have no idea.” He lied. “Maybe a mutation in my quirk.” Clay shrugged. He knew that it was most likely caused by the quirk experiments that he went through. He will have to check it out later. If there is a later.

Why would he lie?

“Well then. Do I bust out of here or do I accept my punishment?” Clay thought aloud. He knew that he now had multiple quirks. With a thought, his claws came out from his fingernails. The quirks he knew he had was Thick Skin, his skin was now externally durable. He also had a mild regeneration factor now along with his claws, he calls this Sabertooth. And there were three more people whose ‘gene factor’ was injected into him. Shao Dow and his sister, Gentle breeze being two of the three. So that means he most likely has a teleportation quirk and some kind of enhanced vision-related quirk. He had no clue what the last one could be.

Those count as having multiple quirks?

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #38 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter Four: Experiments ·

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1. Clay was blinded by his last fight.
2. Yes and no.
3. It will be explained.
4. Yes lol
5. It is apart of another quirk.
6. I don’t see why not?

Pete100

Pete100 #39 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · · · Chapter Five: Break Out time. ·

On the wall of my cell I made a sketch. My claws are retractable like cat claws. And they come from my fingernails. They are strong enough to cut the concrete wall like butter. They remind me of those white haired boys claws on Hunter Hunter something… my brother watched that a lot. Except my hands don’t get all veiny.

Like the reference.

After watching the bars hit the ground, Clay stepped out of his cell. He rolled his shoulders and began walking briskly out of the dungeon. Once he got to the main corridor of the dungeon he peaked around the corner to see many guards along the walls. He noted that it was a wide space and a high ceiling. That’s when an idea hit him. And something else also hit him.

What also hit him?

HydeYmir

HydeYmir #40 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · · · Chapter Five: Break Out time. ·

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The guard spotting him.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #41 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · · · Chapter Five: Break Out time. ·

Fluttershy can ask him about his experience as a tree, since she expressed interest in wanting to be a tree at one point.

Mitril

Mitril #42 · Jul 24th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter Five: Break Out time. ·

He was imprisoned for many years and he doesn't plan any revenge?
WTF?

JackieFingWeeks

JackieFingWeeks #43 · Jul 25th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter Five: Break Out time. ·

Well I have a quirk idea for ya! Adaptation: The quirk is not controlled by the user but instead acts on its own on an instinctual level, depending on the situation the quirk will adapt the wielder to the situation. So like if their falling they'll turn into a human spring or turn inot a human feather or even give them wings. Once out of danger though they will loose the effect. Its always different for every situation. And yes it has something for every situation even for someone like a Hulk level threat. If you want an example of this in effect look up Darwin from Marvel Comics.

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