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Windlife


We must dare, and dare again, and go on daring.

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The wind was howling outside Twilight's library as was Twilight turning in for the night. Suddenly, she heard a cry outside... A cry for help!

She went outside to find Scootaloo... in a cardboard box.

Can Twilight, with the help of Rainbow Dash, help her back to normality?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 136 )

talk shit and you get blocked

Comment posted by PegasusMesa deleted Jun 6th, 2016

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how do you know what clouds are? your not no cloud expert your just a troll

7280629 Clouds can be musty! Do your homework

Comment posted by PegasusMesa deleted Jun 6th, 2016

7280636 In my headcanon, there were corpses raining down. It adds to the story

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why dont yo just back off? you dont know how to right like me

Comment posted by PegasusMesa deleted Jun 6th, 2016

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but hes not a troll liek you. so he can stay

please stop harassing me. im a struggling author

Comment posted by forrest yuchnitz deleted Jun 6th, 2016

we have many likes. thank you for likeing my fans

has potential, but i think a bit of editing is needed, for a little sprucing. good idea though, may need to expand on why twilight is so focused on being the one to help scootaloo and angry that she wants rainbow instead.

maybe spin it as a humorous thing?

Comment posted by Lucky Seven deleted Jun 6th, 2016

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listen here. you have no clue where this story is going so i think you should stop hating and go away

no trolls here pls

Pretty good read don't let people tell you how to describe anything it's your story not theirs.

I have to go for a bit so please keep giving it upvotes until i get back!

:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

10/10 like MLD with orphans

Comment posted by Anstca deleted Jun 6th, 2016
Comment posted by Moonlit Path deleted Jun 10th, 2016

Yet another masterpiece from a true artist like yourself. Well done.

Oi, you cheeky m8. I hope many jimmies are rustled.

Given a up thumb. ANYONE who gives out downthumbs is doing so because they want a reaction. There is no reason to bomb someone else or their story. If you don't like it, just don't comment, but to give a 'down thumb' just to hurt the stories reputation, is NOT the pony way of life.

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I mean, generally a dislike is used to show that someone has done something wrong, which is not a bad thing. Dislikes are useful.

Unless it's on a pure work of art like this story. Then it's wrong.

Story by Windlife?

My body is soooo ready.

This is definitely a cute idea, but it could use, as pointed out already, a lot more editing. There are points where the words just don't make sense, and it really breaks immersion to the story. Please don't take offense to this, but if you are interested, there's a whole group where you can request help. Until then, I wish you luck from the haters.:derpytongue2:

~Harmony

Sorry, but the artist (who you did not give credit to) has specifically requested in the description of their picture that it not be used for any fanfictions, as shown here: http://mrardilla.deviantart.com/art/No-More-Tears-Squirt-451393752

Why everyone hates this guy? :rainbowderp:

7280906 Or you can just not be a dick.

-The artist.

7280921 I don't care about you.

*No Haters Please. Don't like it? Don't read it.*

How will people know if they don't like it if they don't read it? :rainbowhuh:

i feel dumber having read this soooo

This comment section went sexual really quickly.

7280906 Loath as I am to involve myself in this silliness., what they CAN do is PM a moderator, inform them of the disclaimer, and have it removed.

Might even get Windlife a disciplinary infraction of some kind, too.

Speaking of which, 7280882 PMs work better man. You know that.

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It got really gay for some reason.

Maybe it's my fault.

7280949 You're saying it like its a bad thing.

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It tends to bring in the kind of crowd that takes comments seriously though. That can be a problem when you're as stylishly sarcastic as someone like me.

7280928 Lol please, you're calling us talentless hacks? Conker, the owner of the picture in question, is a fantastic artist, and has drawn many pictures that have blown me, and countless others, away. As for me, I've published nearly half a million words and have amassed quite a significant following because of it. And what do you have to show to back up your petty insults?

Nothing.

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Aren't you supposed to be above this? Besides, follower count only means that people like your stuff, not that it's good. On this website, those are two drastically different things.

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This is a website centered around one of the biggest, most obnoxious fandoms in recent history. No one here is above pointless arguments and dick-measuring contests. Especially me.

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Besides, follower count only means that people like your stuff, not that it's good.

Where specifically did you see me mention any of that in my comment that you replied to?

7280906 That may be so that the characters are owned by Hasbro, but little did you know that Hasbro made it so artists are allowed to draw fan art. So there really isn't any threat of having their work claimed by the company.

Now what CAN be claimed is a copied original picture who's owner stated that no one can use it in any way, shape, or form. It can also be claimed for not giving any credit to the owner of the art piece.

Please check your facts before you embarrass yourself with your "facts" (Opinions).

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and have amassed quite a significant following because of it.

That part right there, where you use your followers as a point in your argument that Rebecca's opinion doesn't matter.

7281000 You're accusing me of me saying that because people follow me that I think I'm a good writer. I did not say that.

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In response to Rebecca's assertion that you are a "talentless hack", you pointed out that you've "published nearly half a million words and have amassed quite a significant following because of it." You used two things to prove that you aren't a "talentless hack"—word count and following. I don't see why you're trying to argue this when I am quoting your exact words back to you.

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At last, we have been reunited yet again. Our star crossed love shall be written by great poets, who hopefully don't write on this site.

What did I just read? :rainbowderp:

7281011 Lol so you're saying that my followers are all idiots? That's a fantastic argument. And if I'm writing "utter trash", then do explain why I have this many followers? Your insults hold little merit.

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