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Getting a lot of work done made Big Mac pleased with himself. He got to eat a good meal made my Granny Smith and with fatigue, but a good kind, he went to his room. A pity there was already a pony on his bed. Big Mac swallowed back his startled sound instead of alerting the entire house. There, slumbering, was his female counterpart.

meal made by Granny Smith

A very interesting and mysterious start. I look forward to reading more.

Cousin Princess Orchard Blossom, at your service.

what do you think

should this could as
NON-royal Alicorn
what about Male Alicorns & Pegacorns

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I'm pretty sure other people can add stories to folders.

Well, isn't this an interesting little gem.

what gave you this idea?

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A patron wanted it to happen, so it shall happen! I am a bit of a mercenary writer that way.

Haven’t read the first chapter yet… but this seems like it could be interesting.

I’ll have to give it a try later. When I’m not so exhausted from a long day coming off of an even longer week. And I’m unlucky enough that I have to work tomorrow as well.
Yay me!

Comment posted by Dan deleted Mar 5th, 2022

Honestly the first chapter feels like it's going a little fast but the 2nd seems to dial it back to a good pace. I enjoy it thanks for making this and I'm looking forward to more

This idea is intriguing. Let's see where this would lead to.

Come to thing about it... if Big Mac become Blossom when he slept... does this mean he hasn't slept at all? Physically, his male body had rest, but what about mentally?

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There appears to be none but also plenty? He/she awakens refreshed, but has no pause in their experiences, as if the sleep of their body counted plenty for readying for the next day, despite having no actual dream time.

Despite that, she fought him off. "Tarnation. If she's willin' to share her dark secrets, then so should we. That's called bein' honest." She winked with a knowing smile. "As I was sayin', Orchard Blossom's the name Big Mac used." She waved at the big, blushing stallion.

The easiest way to hide the truth is put another truth over it.

"That's a better question." Her magic and hooves were working together to massage Orchard completely. "You should speak to Fancy Pants. He's an expert when it comes to that and he always does it the proper way."

WAT...? Are we having some kind of Batmane in this story too?

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Okay, 'too' might be a bit misleading. Just that, I've read a few of that kind of stories already. Your story already has one rare vigilante character so I didn't expect another vigilante to show up. Personally, I'd like to see Mac doing a one-mare-show.

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All I was informed of at the start was that this super powered princess has to do her thing, and Princess Luna is prowling after her.

"I'm not interested in a random mare." She leaned forward. "This isn't a random mare. I want to be a part of what you are going through. At the least, I want to cheer you on. I want to know what she looks like. She is you, isn't she? So I'd cheer you on if you went off to Canterlot. Just sore you didn't bring me along."

Big Mac may have just awoke his marefriend's secret kinkiness.

Still waiting for the meeting of Sugar and Orchard. It would be amusing to see how his mare evaluate his feminine side.

"Just found the light." She had found no obvious issues yet. Not that this stopped Orchard Blossom from exploring onwards with her hooves and magic working together. "Ah ha!" A fine crack went through one of the many tubes. He felt gently over it as her magic focused on the spot, sealing the glass shut firmly.

She felt gently over it

"Hey." Orchard veered towards the mare with a smile. "Want to rent a room. What're the rules and the prices?"

Err... did you forget your marefriend ask to meet you in person? That should take priority over... practically anything?

Orchard Blossom smiled at the mare she felt an attraction to but couldn't quite put a hoof on. "Well, if ya insist, you can start by showing me exactly how to mare."

Now we need Cadance on the case.

She had snacks. She had a comfortable place to rest her head. Orchard had a city full on wrongs just waiting to be righted one at a time. She had met all her basic needs!

city full of wrongs just

I love how this is rated M but has been T the whole time, well done

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Well, that depends a lot on how Orchard and Sugar reconcile.

"Nopony gets to be angry at my boyfriend without my say so. She'll have to get through me, and that'll give you enough time to fly away."

Shouldn't it be 'coltfriend' for ponies instead? And Sugar, you did know that Luna can teleport, right?

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From the Maud Couple.

Maud Pie: [deadpan] Pinkie, the reason I've been so busy is that I have a boyfriend now.

Sugar Belle is indeed sweet as pie, as the song goes.

"Don't insult the cake." Celestia sat up to the affront on her tastes.

One thing Celestia would adamantly protect no matter which one it was.

"A little sleepy, but happy you came by." She set her glass aside and hopped from her chair to her hooves. "Gonna have to head back soon. I can't lurk here forever." Orchard didn't stop her from coming in close. "So I'm really glad you came by. I didn't want to pressure you." Orchard wasn't stopped from leaning in, or touching. Nopony prevented her from planting a gentle kiss on Orchard Blossom's lips.

This has Orchard Blossom kissing herself.

We know that pegasi can fly while carrying smaller ponies, surely Big Mac Orchard Blossom could easily fly with a regular sized pony.

Why did I feel Luna was not on the same page as Blossom & Sugar?

Ah yes, intermission... Rent free in my head, but only the chorus, which is annoying.

In for a bushel, in for a barrel. Just tell already!

Honestly, Applejack wouldn't have it otherwise

I honestly don’t see much reason why Orchid Blossom would be against telling her. Luna doesn’t seem to be the type to vaporize someone for the slightest misstep given her history.

What does Orchid Blossom sound like?

I think that Princess Orchard should tell Princess Luna about her flip side.

No. Way. You can't have him. I called dibs ages ago!

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Dravkwn deleted May 27th, 2022

To be honest, I kinda expected Cadance to pop up with all these relationship talks.

Sugar Belle big brained that

"You can have him if you share"

*Slowly puts away polycule chart with Sugarbelle, Fancy Pants, Orchid Blossom, and Big Macintosh*

Fine, ruin my fun.

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