Big Mac by day, a princess of justice by night. He can handle this, he's sure of it.
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She felt gently over it
Err... did you forget your marefriend ask to meet you in person? That should take priority over... practically anything?
I don't normally do this in other people's stories, but the way this sentence is structured is kinda weird. Gets the point across but it seems, i don't know. Off? Maybe it's just Orchard being herself.
day 'owl'? Why not day 'literally anything that isn't nocturnal'? It's dialogue so its not a huge deal anyway.
Also. Sugar Belle is apparently REALLY bad at secrets.