Big Mac by day, a princess of justice by night. He can handle this, he's sure of it.
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No. In fact Minnuette only said Orchard was her favorite night princess, which Twilight is not one of.
Okay. Caught up now.
First, telephones? Alright. Didn't think that would be a thing.
Now for an overall view of the story. I know this I a prompt from a patreon and I don't know how much control they have over the story so I can't blame you. But early on it seemed like you weren't sure what to do with this. You caught your stride but it took a bit.
If i wrote this i probably would have leaned into the whole vigilante thing and made Orchard Blossom's actions a little less excepted by the police force/royal guard and Luna. More of a batman then a superman, but that's preference.
I don't really have much more to say, most of the issues were solved already.
Keep up the good work
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I am a discovery writer. I learn as I go and interact with my wonderful characters. So, yeah, getting a better grasp as I go? Sounds about right.
She was batman, but became superman, because ponies are too pure for this world.
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