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David Silver


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Luna was ready to cast aside her shame and guilts. It was with the help of so many that she could stand up to it. Why is it still there, now dependent on her? Luna resolves to care for this new foal. She created it. It is her, if one thinks about it.

Written for a new patron, say hi! They're starting at 1/month updates. Will that change? Only they could know.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 166 )

:pinkiehappy: Crescent is cute.

Interesting. An amusing twist.

Another great story started.

Aww, another story so soon? David, you do spoil us. (And the generous patron, of course.)

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Thank you for joining us. Come, walk with us on this moon-lit path.

Luna know peace, and that was a rare thing. She knew nothing but peace in every fibre of her being, except that one spot there. She reached a hoof to scratch it, still quite asleep, safely ensconced in her dreamscape. But the sensation didn't go away.

Should be
Luna knew peace,

SQUEEEE, This is PERFECT, i eagerly await the next chapter, what will possible Auntie tia say and do, when knows, and Crescent, i foresee possible mischief in her future

Awww, Crescent is so cute! She should easily win Celestia over.

Oh, a new story. Nice.

I'm curious to see where this goes.

Not the first tantabus/regrets turned into a filly story but there is plenty of potential left for stories like these. Not to mention that they often make for great slice of life reads with very little actual drama. I'll be waiting for more.

The cute has been doubled! And adopting a coping mechanism is perfectly normal, just ask my cats.

Why is it with more chapters, Crescent would be more adorable? I can already imagine her doing all of those things and would be to adorable to resist not going along with her actions

This is amazing! And I rarely rate a story as amazing. Please promise that you will finish this hopefully before yr 25 ends.

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It is now at 4 updates a month, or roughly weekly.

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Sorry if I sound rude but so many good authors take forever just to add a chapter much less get to the end and sometimes they take a break only to seemly never return.

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I am a professional, and I mean that in the terms of being paid to write. If I keep getting paid, I will keep writing. If I stop writing, I stop being paid. I like being paid.

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That's good news. Most people on here are amateurs with talent. Considering that the site doesn't pay for stories. But this so far is the first story I rank as awesome. There are a lot of good ones here but so far yours takes the cake.

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The greater risk would be the commissioner changing their mind. Thank you though, that's quite nice to hear. What other tales have you read of mine?

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New endings is one that reading. Hopefully discord will get some punishment for his stupidity in your version because it isn't right for him to get no punishment. The first time you think he would have learned don't trust villains.

Oh no! More Crescent per month? However shall everyone stand all of the cuteness?

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Stand strong. We'll survive this, somehow.

Crescent, like Luna, is a treasure!

Which works, because she is Luna.

The self, everypony!

The meetings Crescent had did go well. I'm curious to see what will happen next.

Luna set the foal down carefully.

I think that should be Twilight not Luna. The meeting between Twilight and Crescent was nice.

One of the better fics about Luna I've read in a while! I like it! :twilightsmile:

I love me some simple fun and happiness. This is great so far.

Very nice though I have to wonder why Crescent doesn't know certain words if she has Luna's consciousness shouldn't she know what Luna knows.

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Crescent sends all of her knowledge to Luna. That information is not always sent back. Luna has that choice. Crescent is their own pony. Even if they share.

This just adds to my belief that the Tantabus is basically magic-powered trauma given life. I'm glad that Crescent is no longer that kind of entity.

Now, she's all moonlight and silliness! :heart:

A/N quote:

How many are willing to endure a tantabus, hoping to get a Crescent in the end?

If it means facing my past mistakes, working out said mistakes, and moving on with at least a somewhat clearer conscience. Then I'm willing to fight my monsters. Whatever form they may take. However, that does not mean that I'll be successful in that endeavor...

Anyhow! Really like the story so far!

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You are a brave pony, but perhaps you could be better at the other end of that gauntlet, and maybe get an adorable mini-you to go with it.

You need something to do doing the day

I think that should be during the day. Also at one point it says pomy instead of pony.
Crescent is certainly a boon for Trixie's magic show.

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Fixfixfix. Trixie does not accept typos during her Great and Powerful performances.

Nyx who? Crescent for the win.

Dang the way Celestia can be commanding but regal at the same time respect, also Trixie's a ahole but that's nothing new, awe crescent I just wanted to pick her up and squeeze her though her personality can become rather grating to almost anyone over time not the kind of person I could spend eternity with maybe she's going to mature a little bit later who knows.

All hail the adorable Tantabus.

Well so far this is just plain adorable. I will never object to a iyashikei. A cute healing slice of life is always welcome.

Silly crescent. Just because you are your own person doesn't mean you don't have a place in others hearts. Lots of people are their own people who also live in others hearts.

This was a nice chapter and it seems that Luna and Crescent still aren't 100% sure of how things work between them.
Also I spotted a typo

crearture

Should be creature of course.

"Prepare to be helped." - Crescent, 2024

"Because... I wanr you to be free, not shacked to my silly dreams." She cleared her thoat. "So I keep a little..."

*want

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Typos? Is this a nightmare...?

Oh dear, that much cuteness in close proximity is dangerous, could lead to cuteness overload.

Surely your remaining Covid will give way before the combined power of the Cute that is in this chapter.

Loving the cuddly cuteness.

It's good that Crescent managed to help those homeless foals.

I don’t know how you respond to pointing out small errors, but when Cadance meets Crescent

"Surprise!" Cadance laughed, catching Crescent up in a hug. "When Luna told me about her adorable little niece Crescent, Flurry and I just had to come meet you!"

I think it should be Celestia, not Luna.

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