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Noir de Plume

~"If you want it to make sense, YOU say it."~



Big Mac is strong, supportive... and silent. The model big brother, he's always there for Applejack and Applebloom, never asking for a thing in return. Together, they keep Sweet Apple Acres afloat. But was that always his dream...?

(Don't miss the sequel: "Your Beautiful Mind.")

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Comments ( 21 )

I love this so much, thank you, thank you for taking the time to listen to me ramble and turn it all into this beautiful story


It was my pleasure. :twilightsmile:

You should write a sequel so that those of use can continue to like your stories. :derpytongue2:

I liked it, so have a like. :twilightsmile:

Just wished I knew, what was so urgent during his dissertation, though.

Very nice.
I'm most interested in how Applejack was teasing him about possibly writing a letter to Princess Luna, though. Rather interesting that that's the first name that came to her mind :raritystarry:

"My name is Macintosh Apple,

Nah, you're Big McIntosh

This was near perfect. I love characterisation of secondary characters, and an intelligent Big Mac is no exception. The magic usage is spot on, too!


Thank you. And I'm a mare. :raritywink:


The Apple family's parents are never shown or mentioned, and later hinted at that they have passed on.


I do have others. :raritywink: And thank you so much for reading.

Blood is thicker than water, as the saying goes. Bravo, Big Mac! And Bravo, Noir, for a lovely and refreshing tale!

Read this today. Interesting.

5723601 Oh, well thank you! :twilightsmile: I appreciate the feedback.

5723603 I certainly didn't expect Big Mac to have a thesis and all. Say what was the event that made Big Mac go away? The death of Aj's and his parents? Or...

5723616 Thanks! Now I have to read the other two tomorrow.

Say would your theory support a pegasus that instead of clouds and air could manipulate water and/or swim/fly through it?

I've always seen earth pony magic as a connection to the earth and ability to grow things with ease which would be an outward manifestation of their magic but to each there own I guess.


theory (n): an idea or set of ideas that is intended to explain facts or events
: an idea that is suggested or presented as possibly true but that is not known or proven to be true
: the general principles or ideas that relate to a particular subject

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