• Member Since 19th Sep, 2011
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Celestias Paladin


Love can transcend all bounds, whether it is time, space, or class. That is something they were always taught.

A short little story of Heart and Hooves Day. Something that has been sitting on my hard drive for some time. Not the best but I figured it was time to share it.

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I'm here, where's the story?

It's short, and not much in the way of epic story telling

5626562 its just that there's "The Dance" in the chapter, so I'm looking for "the Story" to show up, because there is only one me...
Or is there?

The story is the last part, he's telling the story to their daughter



*pomp amd circumstance starts playing*

Thank you, thank you. I'd like to thank the academy and Momma Dancewithknives.

That was lovely. I wonder what's with all the downvotes?


I can only think the downvotes are from violating someone or other's one true pairing. Really, downvotes without comments are pretty much just trolling. :derpyderp1:

Or that I had the shear gall to make Celestia nice.

Thanks for the comments, Darth I take it you liked it.

I can dig it. All it needs is a little brushing up from a typo here and there and it'll be a pretty sweet little one-shot. Not that it isn't already.

Thank you, and if you can, can you point out the typos so I can correct them.

I liked it, yes. It was a sweet little story. :twilightsmile:

and( ) humble as( ) very trees he tends [as] [the] ???
family danced or partake in [ partook]
They dance through the night, [ danced ]
only to be stop by his mother [ stopped ]

Thank you, I'll get on making those correction. What did you think otherwise?

EDIT: Changes made

good story, does vary from cannon quite a bit but so what I like it .

It does since I think I set most of it before Luna's return, and I do mentioned Mac's mother.

It's rare when I find a story when Big Mac gets shipped with Celestia but I'm glad I found this story of yours. Loved it:heart:

Yeah not a common pairing, you will find LunaMac more often. And thank you

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