It’s the grand galloping gala, and Princess Luna feels lonely and sad up in her tower, not finding the strength nor the joy for joining the celebrations in the main hall.
On the other side, Big Mac went to Ponyville hoping to find his sister at the gala with big sale numbers, only to find out that her plan for selling apples at the event went wrong.
Soon enough both of them will the discover the wonders that the night is hiding
A/N:
this story has Nothing to do with the other one, in case somebody ever wonders. This is just something I wrote time ago, and recently rediscovered.
Thanks, and enjoy!
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The english and grammar is terrible but the story is good and the pacing is agreeable. Over all a good job.
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i know my grammar isn't really good, and back then it was worse. also 'word' doesn't really help ha ha...
anyway, thanks for the comments, both of you!
wow I really loved this story. A sequel would be great
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My only complaint is definitely the grammar but other than that its a great story.
You earned
I would love to see where this goes
keep it up!
i hope you continue this id like to see where it could go
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good story, any plans for a continuation?
Aside from the editing, I liked this. With a bit of TLC, I'd give it a 5 / 5, but without it, just a 4.5 / 5.
Though the writing isn't of superb quality, you still managed to convey your message, albeit needing some context clues to fill in the holes. There were parts that didn't make sense because of transition issues, but I enjoyed the conversation between Mac and Luna. The ending was a bit abrupt, which is probably my worst complaint.
I think that this makes for an excellent rough draft. I think that if you go onto Fanfiction.net and submit this story into the Doc-X program they use, then somepony will definitely pick this up and edit it for you, for free. Plus, you'd probably get some feedback on it, and after that if you post it in the My Little Pony board, you'll get twice the audience you get on this site, which means more feedback and reviews. Then, perhaps if you continue this, your skills as a writer will improve.
I agree, a sequel would be lovely.
A charming story, one that, in my humble opinion, you should continue.
I love Luna’s character development in this story compared with the show. I love it I love it
Anypony
Well this was a pretty nice story so this is during the best night ever and Applejack is waiting for Big Mac to deliver the apples especially the fancy ones once he did he decided to go back but then he had company and it turns out it was Princess Luna and she was apparently hungry and he offer her some of the Apple treats which she did and when she was done with that she wants to pay him back but he said no and of course he could be stubborn too so she will do the same thing and decide to walk home with him and despite being awkward with each other they starting to have conversation which it looks like both of them really starting to warm up with each other and it's pretty nice to see that and not only that she made a friend I got to say this was a pretty nice one keep up the good work