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Why do I write? Because it's fun! :D

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Sometimes you gotta give them what they want.

sykko #2 · July 2nd · · ·

And thus the greatest villain Equestria has ever known arrives!

oh l want to see this become a good a long story


Please tell me there's going to be a sequel to this I'm curious to see if he gets his revenge or even if the elements knew what happened to him

sequel must have 0w0

holy shit I honestly want a part 2 this was a whole ass mood

Yo bet this seems like it's going to be a great story

This needs a follow up. The cliffhanger is much too big to leave this as it is.



I'LL GET TO WRITING, HAPPY NOW???!!!!! :flutterrage:

No, but seriously thank you for the hype. I just wrote it for fun during my break on my phone. I will toss some ideas for a sequel around and see what I'll come up with. :twilightsmile:

Lol I need more 😅 shouldn't shouldn't wrote this
Lol to good

They are gonna deserve for what's coming, those f****** w*****!!!!!!

Ow, the edge! /jk :pinkiecrazy:

That out of the way, I do wish to inquire if you are planning to continue as this feels like the prologue of a revenge story.

I am also interested in what happened from the Equestrian side of things as such an event would have twigged some suspicions fiercely.

Oh, and using Blue Blood at this point is like beating on a dead horse--somehow he seems like the linchpin for everything bad with the nobility. I hope that should you continue this that you defy expectations and surprise us, readers. :moustache:

I do hope to see more from this as I'm intrigued.

happy yesssss indeed. corec

if the edge cuts your tongue it adds flavor.
if the edge cuts your eyes it gives you more surface area to see
if the edge cuts your asdfmovie14 then not cool bro.

take your time. you have got a solid start so taking some time to make sure that you are happy with what comes next will help you alot if you contunue it. if you get worn out from writing about the present then you have the option to write about his life in equestira before his prison

the possiblity for this story is great. in the prison they whiped away his cutiemark so whats to say he couldnt get a new one. While an mc becoming an alicorn is done quite a bit having him go from happliy living peacfully to escaping prison and possibly gaining alot of allys and mabey making his own country with what little he knows of human tec as a boost could be intersting. either way if he grows into a great leader with a dislike for equestria or a villen who brings them to their knees this will likely be a ride we want to watch go down

Suena prometedor.
Suerte y ánimos von esta historia.

Loved it, I really can’t wait for more!

Please mister DanishDash, may I have some more?

I love me a good darkfic, and one insipred by Monte Cristo? Delightful.

YEEESSS *in a creepy voice* MOREEE

Just imagine the day after his escape his old friends had actually arrived, having figured out his innocence, only to find out that he apparently went mad, broke out, and cast himself into the ocean! They of course would most likely write him off as dead, NOPONY could possibly survive that.

That would give "Felix" the freedom to slowly begin to plant his roots in his revenge and that alone would be an interesting pot to watch boil.

I agree with the others, you've got something here. :D

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