Notes in Service of a Love Story

"If this is what it means to be a fool, I don't wish to be anything else."

A gift exchange fic for my wonderful friend themoontonite

Chapters (6)

A Playbill · 24th Dec 2020 · 23 words
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Prologue - Paradiso · 24th Dec 2020 · 338 words
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Act 1 - Purgatorio · 24th Dec 2020 · 1,387 words
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Act 2 - In Want of the Sun · 24th Dec 2020 · 1,060 words
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Act 3 - I Can’t Give Everything Away · 24th Dec 2020 · 1,529 words
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Afterword - Get To Heaven · 24th Dec 2020 · 209 words
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The Red Parade

The Red Parade #1 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 2 · · Afterword - Get To Heaven ·

Fantastic use of the screenplay method without straying into script format. This was evocative and beautiful in all the right ways and the underlying character work is so fitting and so beautiful. Great work as always!

Undome Tinwe

Undome Tinwe #2 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 2 · · Afterword - Get To Heaven ·

Wow okay. This was unlike anything I've ever read and I loved it. Once again, your ability to set a scene is awe-inspiring, and reading this and Meditations is probably the best way to start Christmas I could possibly imagine.

Dawn needs to pull out the crowbar more often.

SigmasonicX

SigmasonicX #3 · Dec 29th, 2020 · 2 · 1 · Afterword - Get To Heaven ·

Hmm, this was interesting, but I couldn't help but think that watching this as an actual play would be really strange. I also struggle to understand what the audience added, except perhaps to evoke the feeling of experimental theater where the big resolution to the story happens only after all the audience has left.

Foggy Dreams

Foggy Dreams #4 · Jan 18th, 2021 · 1 · · Afterword - Get To Heaven ·

What a wonderful way to tell a story. I don't think I've read anything like this on fimfiction until now, and I don't think I will again for a very long time. Thank you for leading us on this journey, and for the lovely little reveal at the end. Simply magical, it was.

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