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This story is a sequel to Nightmare Sparkle
Although Twilight Sparkle accepted the apologies of her friends, mentor, her brother and Spike, she still feels guilty about accepting Nightmare's offer to take her body and let the anger get the best of her. Will there be somepony beside her which understands what she is going through?
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i shall be the first reader!
Great looking sequel. I'm sure Twilight will forgive herself in the end.
nice work
nice work
Great chapter!
not a bad story. like with the previous ones there are some dialog issues. but it doesn't take away from the feels. it's defiantly in my TwiLuna folder
nice work
nice work
nice work
nice work
nice work
Just finished the story. Excellent story with a great ending!
Twilight thought, "She's not a very good mentor if she doesn't use books."
No, it's Nightmare. Everypony keeps forgetting that.
*claps* Encore! Oh, another chapter! *clicks*
I would love if there was a sequel to this story where Twilight Sparkle has gained the looks of Nightmare Sparkle but still has complete control over her body, like some kind of accident or something. Idk, just an interesting idea I came up with.
Am I the only one who is imagining Twilight as some 5 year old and Luna as some 10 year old? It might be the dialogue.
Not even a minute later:
Didn't she say this a couple chapters ago?
What is she gonna do? Never get upset?
Ok well that came out of nowhere, I wasn't expecting this for atleast another couple chapters or for another sequel if there was going to be one.
Wait no-
It's to soon, it's becoming to awkward!
And it's awkward, damn it Twilight! Your going to fast!!!
I think everyone reading this story is surprised by how fast this escalated.
Loved it, dialogue needs improving though, I do hope there will be a sequel.