Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other
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Chrysalis, now ex-queen of changelings and reformed by Starlight, decides to live in the castle of friendship together with Twilight, Spike and Starlight. Everything would be wonderful, if she weren't woken up by Twilight every morning to see her friends sing the opening and have her appear in the photo. Can't an ex-queen of changelings sleep any more now?
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This is such a silly premise. I love it.
I think you mixed up the words "reformed" and "renovated" a couple of times (unless that was intentional?), but other than that, to echo Super Trampoline's sentiment, this was really silly. I definitely enjoyed it, that's for sure.
Have a thumbs up!
:)
You forgot to add Discord in Fluttershys cottage window
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Sorry about these mistakes. But i will correct
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I just added.
Chrysalis invented the photo bomb
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Also why do an older opening rather than the new one?
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Because this story is happening at the beginning of season 7
No.
What’s a fourth wall?
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Fourth wall is when the character knows it is a cartoon and he talks to the viewer
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That’s breaking the fourth wall.
I feel like this story would of worked better if crystalist was more a straight mare, thinking the world was going crazy or something. As is, an okay story that’s cute
What?
I wonder what the rest of her hive is up to...
Chrysalis, you are the changeling here, and yet you are confused about changing appearence?
Many years later:
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Source.
Chrysalis: "I still hate it."
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Also, I believe I found the original source of the cover art (in better quality): Derpibooru #1739976
So cool.
