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Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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Nightmare Moon has noticed Twilight very busy lately, and with that, she has not paid so much attention to her. She has felt nothing but ignored by the unicorn. Fortunately, she has an idea for Twilight to pay attention to her.

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This story now have Russian version: at Ponyfiction and Ficbook (multifandom site).
Thanks, Twilight Star!

Really adorable for sure.
I can see Luna feeling the cuddles too from her link to NMM there too.

The black alicorn growled at the response she received, she couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted to get Twilight’s attention right now, but the purple unicorn didn’t wanted her at moment. Putting the hoof on her chin, she started to think of a way for Twilight to pay attention to her. Nightmare Moon may have been reformed, but if there was one thing she couldn’t stand it was ponies ignoring her, and Twilight made a big mistake by doing so. An idea soon came to her mind, she looked at Twilight with a mean smile and said, “Twilight, you made a big mistake for ignoring me.”

wanted should be want (the second one, not first).

The black alicorn growled at the response she received, she couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted to get Twilight’s attention right now, but the purple unicorn didn’t want her at moment. Putting the hoof on her chin, she started to think of a way for Twilight to pay attention to her. Nightmare Moon may have been reformed, but if there was one thing she couldn’t stand it was ponies ignoring her, and Twilight made a big mistake by doing so. An idea soon came to her mind, she looked at Twilight with a mean smile and said, “Twilight, you made a big mistake for ignoring me.”

Putting her hoof to her chin, Nightmare Moon started to think of a way to get Twilight to pay attention to her. Nightmare Moon had been defeated and reformed by the Elements of Harmony at the hooves of Twilight and her friends, returning Princess Luna to her sister while separating Luna from Nightmare Moon. But if there was one thing Nightmare Moon just couldn't stand, it was ponies ignoring her. And Twilight Sparkle made a big mistake by doing that very thing Nightmare Moon couldn't stand. An idea soon came to the black alicorns mind, one that made her chuckle to herself. She looked at Twilight, an evil smile on her face.
"My dear Twilight, you have made a big mistake by ignoring me," she said.

The black alicorn growled at the response she received, she couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted to get Twilight’s attention right now, but the purple unicorn didn’t want her at moment. Putting her hoof to her chin, Nightmare Moon started to think of a way to get Twilight to pay attention to her. Nightmare Moon had been defeated and reformed by the Elements of Harmony at the hooves of Twilight and her friends, returning Princess Luna to her sister while separating Luna from Nightmare Moon. But if there was one thing Nightmare Moon just couldn’t stand, it was ponies ignoring her. And Twilight Sparkle made a big mistake by doing that very thing Nightmare Moon couldn’t stand. An idea soon came to the black alicorn’s mind, one that made her chuckle to herself. She looked at Twilight, an evil smile on her face.

at the moment.

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