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Aiko-Arts


So, its been 3 months heh

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Twilight starts to develop new powers after her brother's wedding, more things happened during the wedding that were not shown to us that time.

Twilight discovers that she has a beast with an incredibly high power named "Kurama..."
Now she must learn how to use it cope with all the problems she has and face the enemies, and the most important thing...who is her real family and what is the truth of Equestria?


English is not my maternal language, however I already have experience writing stories, I hope you like this story, it is a different version/rewrite of my previous story titled the same.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

This isn't the first story like this. I know it isn't. Or maybe it's just the cover art.

So basically this is a REDO of the ORIGINAL story?

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Yes, however this one doesn't follow the same path, in the previous one there were plot holes, and I know that several people saw it, they also emphasized it to me, although there is a difference with this one and the other one, and that is that Twilight will have to learn to use her power, and also, how is she going to have kurama just because? Someone would have to have sealed him, in the next chapter kurama will show himself physically, professor kurama will explain it to you.

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And those drawing in my old story are mine too, you can find all in my devianart account If you want to see them

Nice chapter, waiting for the next!!!

its ok nice work and sorry to hear about your dad:twilightsmile:

Sorry about your dad. Take your Time. I send you my biggest hug.

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Thanks, and I'm feeling better, he's gonna be in my heart even if he's not with me physically

Our deepest apologies about your dad. Your readers & followers on FIMFiction gives you their blessings & prayers for this difficult time your going through.

Well this is certainly interesting.

I can't wait for future chapters, the story is interesting, I just hope Twilight gets the apology she deserves.

I haven't read the previous story mainly because I don't want spoilers.

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Well, the first versión of This story Is a different version, so I think you can read it, of course, it's canceled, but I can continue it, I just think that the depelovment of my characters was...bad, so I'm trying to make different things here, I'll publish a new chapter next week, I had problems in my life so I took a Time :twilightsmile:

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