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markelsmith866


Most stories will be based around Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Sci-Twi, and Scootaloo!

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Scootaloo isn't what she thinks she is. She was never what she though she was. And it all began on her tenth birthday. Bat wings, hunger, and pain is all that this filly knows now. And what does Rainbow Dash and Princess Celestia have to do with this?

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“There was no pupil, just purple orbs”

Bat ponies have slitted pupils, and that is canon from the NMM timeline of the Season 5 finale. If they had no pupil, then ANY light that entered their eyes would blind them, the pupil regulates the amount of light filtered by the eyes, and allows them to adjust.

I think the pace is pretty good, it kept me wanting to read more and more!

Actually "Thestrals" were also shown in season 2 as part of Luna's guards. That leaves the question why the Thestrals were hunted down and why they have to hide their identity. Well, I'm sure we will find out... sooner or later.

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Oh yeah, that's coming in. I didn't forget about that. Trust me... there's a reason why the thestrals aren't shown that many times. ;)

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Actually, if they had no pupil, it’d be they’re plain blind. The iris is what expands and contracts to control the amount of light entering an eye, and is the part surrounding the pupil. the iris is the part that is colored. The inner eye receives the light through the pupil, while the iris contracts to prevent too much in bright conditions.

Hmm, having read all of this so I do so far I have a few thoughts.

First I wonder if it was really Queen Chrysalis changlings that attacked while disguised as Celestia and her guards, it seemed like something they would be able to pull of while it seems rather out of character for Celestia to do so but at this point we know so little.

Then there is Luna's guard which were looking rather good for a race that 'Celestia' supposedly wiped out which will be interesting to explain.

Finally while a bit is likely silly and I am likely I am reading too much into it but it seems to me that there might be attraction between Rainbow Dash and Twilight.

... and then Celestia turned into Daybreaker. :rainbowderp:

Btw.: Since a genocide/massacre is an important part of the story, shouldn't this story have the "dark" tag and a "teen" rating?

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Thanks for letting me know. I'll have to add it in.

Celestia you are a motherfucking MORON! Considering you just banished the Element of Loyalty, good job making Equestria defenseless. I hope everypony close to you betrays you, imprisons you, then hands you over to Chrysalis and Tirek so they can make you their personal mindless bitch.

Oh no, the Tragedy tag. I have to be careful with this story. :fluttershysad:
Btw.: The more I think about it, the more it seems that Celestia is somehow possessed... by some sort of dark alter ego or a completely different entity.
Oh, and Sandstorm94 is right (I did not think about it): Celestia has practically banished the bearer of the Element of Loyality completely ignoring the judgement of the Tree of Harmony itself.

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And thus also compromising one of Equestria's most powerful weapons.

"You don't think daybreaker is trying to return, do you?" Applejack asked fearfully.

Capital D for Daybreaker.

The whole Draybreaker thing is a little bit confusing right now, since we don't know of any Draybreaker incident in this universe. In the canon universe of the series Draybreaker was just part of a nightmare, and she tried to destroy/kill someone (Nightmare Moon).

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Ok. Daybreaker was seen in the episode "a royal problem", where she and Luna have an altercation. But after that, she is not mentioned much if at all. In this story, she is only a reference, not a significant part. Daybreaker will not have a role in this story.

Is it me or is there someone else want to deck a Princess

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