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A new writer getting into fanfiction who has an interest in of Friendship is Magic with personal interests and ideas to share.

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This story is a sequel to The Pony Guard (Season 5)


After escaping another near death experience from Scar's clutches, the Lion and Pony Guard continue their efforts in trying to keep the peace as the war he started continues to drag on as he starts making moves to try to take over the two kingdoms piece by piece.

At the same time, Starlight Glimmer is adjusting to friendship along with her new role as the Lion Guard's newest member. Question is, can she prove herself worthy of her position and show that she is taking after her mentor, the Princess of Friendship?

Find out as the Lion and Pony Guard tackle more friendship lessons along the way where they utilize their greatly formed bonds to spread the Magic of Friendship together.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 37 )

I was just about to go to sleep!

But still, Sombra’s back.

For now

I like it.
Keep up the good work!

I was wondering if Makucha would join Scar or not

And true to their concerns and deductions, they are both greeted and surrounded by two pairs of eyes accompanied with black cloaks over their heads and covering their faces minus their glowing red and green eyes. Accompanied with sinister chuckling from both enemies looking on at them with their evil eyes as thunder and lightning appeared from their surrondings.

I don’t remember one of them having red glowing eyes

“They're with me.”

Don’t you mean us?

So daddy managed to recruit Makucha. I knew it! I knew Makucha would be recruited for daddy’s army! Looks like the heroes might be encountering him more now even before the Tree of Life saga (still don’t want daddy being destroyed)

Also wasn’t it shopping for Maud?

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Fixed. And I am doing something different for this episode.

“At least what you think…” Makucha himself said privately from afar in the nearby bushes before using the cover of darkness around him to leave undetected before making his way to certain hideout nearby. “...for as long as your enemies can persist in the face of danger, they still have a chance at winning, including me. And as for keeping an eye on the Lion and Pony Guard on their toes and hooves at all times, I’m just the guy for the job.”

That just begs the question for me, when did daddy recruit Makucha? I thought he would’ve been surprised to see him

You made a Puss in Boots 2 reference, how nice.

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Pupils do when using dark magic, not the irises.

I’m actually pretty anxious to see the map episodes, especially the Las Pegasus one.

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Don’t you mean the sclera turn green and the iris and pupils turn red?

Is it wrong to say that I ship Twilight and Kion, their perfect together. wouldn't you say so?

Aww, Nala caring for Flurry Heart, is so sweet.

Once she was sure that Marble was completely unaware of her true whereabouts, Pinkie wasted no time in rushing straight to the store that had what she was looking for. She was recalling to herself what the dress had looked like. "Look at that hand-stitched ten-thousand-thread-count velvet-lined rock pouch! Maud will love it! I need it! "

I thought Pinkie was looking for a dress for Marble

But when Pinkie reached said shop, she come across something she never expected to see at now of all times. The store door was locked, and the display window that had housed that beautiful dress, was now empty! "Oh, no. Oh, no-no-no-no-no-no-no! This can't be happening!" Pinkie exclaimed in horror, as she tried in vain to turn the locked door knob. "Hello, Mr. Pouch Store Owner, or Miss. Pouch Store Owner, whoever you!" Pinkie called out, while pounding frantically on the door. "I'd like to hear all about your sudden vacation in Canterlot with your grandniece while buying a pouch for my sister please!I have the money to pay for it!"

Dress

Pinkie shook her head, and then after inhaling she quickly and rapidly explained. "The store that had the rock pouch I needed was closed because the owner’s on a sudden vacation in Canterlot with his grandniece for a few moons! And so there's no way that I can get the perfect present for Maud, and now I don't have any present for her at all, so it'll be the worst Pie Sisters' Surprise Swap Day ever!" Pinkie proceeded to bury her head into the sundae, so as to bury her depressed sobbing.

Okay, I’m a bit confused. I thought this was focusing on Marble Pie not Maud

Will the The Lion King II: Simba’s Pride characters play a bigger role in this story than they did in the actual show?

But one day, as the farm filly was strolling along through town, she happened to overhear instructions being spoken out in a thick accent. "Alright, everypony, from the top," A female voice barked as she instructed. "And one, two, three, four, two], two, three, four, one, two, three, four, two, two, three, four."

Shouldn’t that be one?

Also, for the Kilio Valley Fire, is daddy gonna appear in his fiery form to his army like in the original version or is he actually gonna appear to everyone before they get out of the fire since you do put a few twists to the episodes

With this is light, Ma Tembo moved to take lead as the Lion and Pony Guard move to guide them away from Kilio Valley, even knowing how hard it is to leave home. “Everyone! Follow the Lion Guard out of the Valley! Immediately!”

And pony guard. You seem to miss that a bunch of times

"And that is something I agree on..." The masked ally spoke as he removed his mask revealing himself to be none other than Makucha himself. "...and if it weren't for me napping that pony Fluttershy, they would have had less of a reason to be forced to surrender."

Shut up!! Makucha’s now in on the attacks too?! Wonder what other attacks he might be involved in. This oughta be interesting

And once their song had ended, it dissolved into heated arguments with one another as they all got into each other’s faces all trying to assert that they should be the rightful leaders of the land they now claim all while at each other’s throats something that did not go unnoticed by Scar himself who is secretly watching on and is now personally considering of how to resolve the matter in order to quell their arguing.

Wonder how daddy’s gonna ease their squabbling

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Probably is, because of his romance with Rani in TLG season 3.

Whenever Scar has a plan, it never goes well. And if it involves Ember and the dragons we are all clucked

“Really?!” Twilight returned rather annoyed than insulted with that remark thrown in her face as the others look on in shock and worry at the growing tension. “You’re really gonna go there?!”

Yeah, Twilly ain’t going to be crying about that anymore.

“They sure will.” Scar agreed before thinking to himself of how to handle this before focusing his full attention on the mean red dragon, Garble, along with the more honorable blue dragon, Ember. “And with many dragons filled with a burning passion to wreak havoc on any kingdom they come across this could also be an opportunity to burn down our enemies.“

I have a feeling daddy might recruit Garble for his army

“That’s what I like to hear and see!” Scar said with a satisfied and evil smile before disappearing from the flames so he can continue to secretly observe their work in progress.

Oooooh, daddy’s gonna be observing the gauntlet

Scar chuckled in response while looking in the Dragon Land’s direction with a sinister and dark smile. “Because of one thing we have in common. Brains over Brute Strength. Besides…” He then said and added. “...I’m quite certain a few words from myself should convince the new Dragon Lord to do what we want him to do. Under perfect timing...”

“her to do” and what does daddy have in store for Ember?

I was wondering how this episode would be handled given Twilight’s actions in season 4.

Needless to say, it was handled well

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will you please make the other episodes of season 6?

But the ones in attendance that are the most excited are a certain group of friends, a certain seven fully grown mares (with one being an alicorn), a baby dragon, three school aged fillies accompanied by their respective family members, a young lion cub, a honey badger, cheetah, hippo, along with a little ostrich, elephant, baboon, zebra, and mongoose. All with front row seats because today is the day their friends Rainbow Dash and Ono are both slated to make their grand debut as the newest members of the Wonderbolts, with the latter being the first non-pony member to ever partake in a Wonderbolts show. Something that everyone had been getting everyone excited and talking about it in the days leading up to today.

Wouldn’t it six mares and two lion cubs?

“I can’t believe this! Just when they we’re this close to leaving!” Lightning furiously vented. “I should have sent another cloud their way when I had the chance!”

I kinda knew that daddy’s goons would be behind that cloud that struck those two

“Yes…” Scar’s voice spoke to them as his green eyes appeared in one of the nearby clouds. “...and even still the plan was enough to keep both Rainbow and Ono grounded which is exactly what I wanted. Because now that paves way for me to be able to carry out my new latest plan. One that’ll definitely ensure their cooperation with nothing more than a little need and thirst of surrender...”

Why did daddy want Rainbow and Ono not being able to fly? Oh, will daddy discover about Kinyonga being a chameleon and an ally to the guard, will he notice her when discussing the plan? Whenever you make these episodes, it just gives so many questions of what daddy’s got in store and what he knows from observing everything

Okay, a little confusing exactly what was going on, but I think I figured it out enough.

Moral of the story: COMMUNICATE!

Either way, Scar has a plan now that the flyers are grounded. And since it’s a while before a canon episode involving flight is on the roster, I think we’re in for a possible original scheme that’ll really shake things up. Possibly literally

I really commend you for rewriting the Wonderbolts and making them more likable here, especially Spitfire. Yet, we still don't know what her nickname is. Though given everyone's reactions, we're probably better off not knowing.

Scar, he's planning something.

The hyenas looked on in sudden fright upon seeing their leader here before them, not to mention he is not looking very happy with them right now. But luckily for them, dealing with them is not the most important thing on his mind. Dealing with the Lion and Pony Guard is and he is quick to face them with a magically conjured pistol directed at them just when they were preparing to tell the hyenas to get going along with an illuminated horn and charged magic in his other free paw.

“Or else what?!” Rainbow dared to say before finding herself disappearing than reappearing as a small as a pony doll in the half alicorn’s paw with his gun pointed right at her. “Oh, okay. Of course. There is that.” She meekly replied with an equally nervous and fearful grin.

How did daddy know about guns and what they are and how to use them?! Weren’t both these shows for kids?! I’m also surprised that daddy knows such complicated spells. Another thing, from what you said, does that mean you’re gonna start posting the Friendship Games next week?

Well, dang. Did not expect that to happen.

Things are only going to get worse from here, I can assure you.

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