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MXCDarkHorse2020


A new writer getting into fanfiction who has an interest in of Friendship is Magic with personal interests and ideas to share.

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This story is a sequel to The Pony Guard (Season 2)


Following the events of the Canterlot Wedding and learning that Scar has returned, the Lion and Pony Guard must prove to everyone from both worlds that the bond between the Pride Lands and Equestria is meant to be together as one. But Scar has plans for that and his ways to ensure that both the Pride Lands along with all of Equestria is his and is not going down without a fight in a way that will not only test that bond but also the Lion and Pony Guard's bond together.

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I get that Scar wants the Pride Lands. But, why the heck does he want to take over Equestria as well?! Is he that greedy?!

Plus, you STILL didn't answer my question on how will you put in the rest of the MLP Seasons? When the Lion Guard only has Three Seasons. And we already finished both MLP's and the Lion Guard's two seasons.

And while the Lion Guard only has one left. MLP still got Season 4-9 ( And the Equestria Girls Spin-Off and Movies. ) and MLP: Movie to go though.

Comment posted by Flamewarrior02 deleted May 22nd, 2022

Wow. That was great, and I guess the battle with chrystalis and scar made the rules on who will be king or ruler in equestria standards, is being question after they lost a fight brawl and scar leaving twilight that scar on her face reminds me of Kion for the battle of pride lands special, and looks like twilight friends are going have to help her with that before it gets worse. But awesome job.

Okay, that was epic, and twilight didn’t hesitated on giving spike the heart, that was good, and at least twilight scar of darkness calmed down and forgive her friends and man things are about have more adventure and man scar is really relentless when he forms a plan and that it will continue, I can’t wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work

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The desire to conquer Equestria is steaming from the fact of the alliance Simba and the Guard has with the Princesses pose a threat to his plans to maintaining his power hold. So he wants to neutralize any potential threats before it can even happen.

And in answer to your other question, I'm stretching the Lion Guard episodes out throughout this series, putting it together as I go along.

ominous red eyes with sickly green pupils
You mean green eyes and red pupils

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Can you at least make sure things don't go the way Scar wants them to from this point on?
Or at least help Twilight cleanse/get rid of the dark magic in her scar quickly?

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Comment posted by stark002 deleted Jan 17th, 2022

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I actually like Character Bashing in most stories. But, only to characters that deserve it. But, she already got the message through to them, and is just acting high and mighty by now. I mean, if she is so "smart". Then why the heck DIDN'T she do anything to prevent that wedding disaster from happening in the first place?!

They should answer that particular question to shatter her own "pride", for once.


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You mean with the scar thing?! Yeah, it was really ridiculous? Heck, Vitani didn't even remember him ( at first ) due to that STUPID Scar!!!!! That part in the finale piss me of!!! Kion still has the same eyes, skin color, hair, face, and voice. He is just grown up, that's all.

I mean, Kovu has the same type of scar, and she remembers him?!

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Though you have to keep in mind of what she went through at the wedding.

Yes she wasn't thinking clearly, and yes it wasn't her best approach to the situation, but no one was really listening or hearing her out on this so they try to find the best approach to the situation.. Everyone (minus Simba, Spike, and the Lion Guard) turned their backs on her instead of hearing her out or even sticking by her side. And not one of them bothered to look for her before the wedding.

Her brother who's she's hardly seen recently and started growing farther and farther apart from kept her in the dark about the wedding and then harshly berated her before kicking her out of the wedding all together.

Yes he along with Celestia regret the way they treated her, but considering they hadn't seen Twilight since the wedding and hadn't told her they were sorry during the time she's been rethinking her views of friendship in regards to them along with the Guard.

This following up after with when Discord briefly returned and her breakdown in Lesson Zero, and growing up in magic kindergarten, there's no doubt that her faith in friendship was clearly shattered there from betrayal and broken promises with the wedding fiasco that everything taken into account in regards to friendship has been ignored in one fellow swoop was the final nail in the coffin for her. Not to mention gets scarred for her troubles both emotionally and physically.

So in regards to what you view as "childish." you can't really blame her for giving the others the cold shoulder given what she just went through.

Also, you know you do have the choice not to comment or continue reading all together if you don't like what I'm putting down in this story.

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What you say makes sense. I guess I’m just tired of reading the same thing over and over again. Still, that doesn’t excuse HER. That’s more where my problems are coming from.

I told you before I like this story and are curious to see where it goes, and plan to quit it with the whining. I can only say I dislike a character so many times.

The way I see it, Scar always had darkness in his heart and has had a crave for power. Taking over the Pridelands again would be nice, but now there’s another kingdom and filled with magics and powers I bet he’s dying to know about, now that’s why I think he wants Equestria as well as the Pridelands. Just hope he’ll gain more knowledge of the heroes, villains, the Tree of Life and everything else all together so he can find a way to attain victory


OH PLEASE LET HIM WIN AND DON’T REDEEM HIM! I LOVE LIKE A FATHER AND AS A VILLAIN AND I WANT TO STAY ON THROUGH THE WHOLE THING!!

You got lucky this time, Pinkie Pie.” Scar said to himself upon holding a miniature stone statue of the giggly mare. “But rest assured, my little pony that I will succeed in the end, and you wouldn’t be laughing when I’m through with you.” He added before crushing it with his fiery green magic beams from his eyes and teleporting away in a flash.

Looks like daddy’s been learn new ways of magic. *chuckles* can’t wait to see what other tricks he has up his sleeve and hopefully they work in his favor

I was expecting Scar to do something with the pond. But I guess he knows better than to have another him around. That would get problematic once it starting thinking for itself.

Awesome work, now Pinkie learned her lesson from that whole Pinkie Clone Fiasco and looks like scar is still watching them and I think twilight dark side is getting worse with that scar on her face, but anyways awesome job there, keep up the great work. And quick question, is twilight gonna have that scar when Kion get his and the guard and their friends venture to the Tree of Life for a cure, because I’m wondering if this story go far to season 9 and to the season 3 adventure of the lion guard mix together. Just asking

I do like the interaction with Rarity and the mothers. Nice little moment of character.

Also, Twilight forcing the jackals out twice. I’m not the only one seeing the red flags from that. I mean, I know Kion does it too, but after season 2 I do not trust Twilight on her own.

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The sooner they figure out how to cleanse Twilight's scar of Scar's dark magic, the better

Awesome work, pinkie and Bungga babysitting the Cubs and man twilight tossing outlanders out of the pride lands without hesitation, that scar is really turning her, I hope the pony lion guard help out because I don’t trust her going out on her own when that scar is affecting here, but anyway awesome job, keep up the great work

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True. It's usually best for smart villains to not play with fire unless they know how to control it, and considering how double-crossing those around has ended with him paying for it dearly, it's highly unlikely he'll make the same mistake again.

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Depends of what I can come up with to bridge the gap between now and then and how the story goes. As for Twilight's scar, she'll have it going forward with her life.

Comment posted by OP Omni God-Emperor Doom deleted Jan 17th, 2022

Awesome job, and while that was dead for the cmc and babs fee to be even for the outcome, it was the good thing the guard was there to tell applejack and help the young ones out of there in time. Awesome job there, keep up the great work and I am wondering what will happen between twilight and trixie in Magic Duel, because with twilight scar making her dark self surface with that attitude of hers and with Trixie alicorn amulet, I think it will be a intense duel there

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There probably is, but magically removing everything means no one learned anything

Well, this chapter went slightly differently than I thought.

I was expecting the other three LG club members to be more involved. Then again, if they picked on Moto those brats would have both an angry hippo and angry mother elephant after them. And that would be their finale.

Still, I did enjoy seeing Gumba and Shauku defending their friends. They clearly show the spirit they’ll need if/when the passing of the torch comes.

Any way: next chapter. I’m concerned, for Trixie. Ponyville has two unstable and frankly untrustworthy alone sorcerers, and I’m expecting one of them to do major damage if Twilight doesn’t already.

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But, you still have the scarred memories from it and all? Sssssooooooo, you can still physically repaired it?

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No kidding.
Things aren't exactly going well, what with Twilight's scar corrupting her. Add an Alicorn Amulet corrupted Trixie to the mix, and things are going to get EXTREMELY messy to say the least.
On the bright side, the dark magic in Twilight's scar "might" give her the edge over Trixie, ....maybe.

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Frankly, I don't care if Twilight always has that scar.
I just want her to get rid of the dark magic inside it.

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I also meant to have that dark magic removed too. Not just to repair the scar.

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I know, I was just clarifying

In the next chapter, I have a feeling daddy’s gonna snag the alicorn amulet the moment trixie throws it away.

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What did I say about keeping your comments about "loving' that MONSTER to yourself?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOBODY cares about Scar!!! and even if they do, they still don't approve of his actions.

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Stark, there is nothing wrong with liking or loving villains especially if the walk the lines of Evil is Cool, so leave her be because everyone's thoughts and comments are welcome here. Thank you. :ajbemused:

Comment posted by stark002 deleted Jan 17th, 2022

Seriously, Pinkie, you said more than enough.

This won’t be the last time we ever see her.

Comment posted by Flamewarrior02 deleted May 22nd, 2022

Oh-kay, wasn’t expecting the alicorn amulet to be “cleansed”. I thought daddy was gonna snag it. I hope he’ll be careful though, considering how powerful Kyoga’s magic is; I hope he’ll discover about the tree of harmony training her. PLEASE, I WANT HIM TO KNOW EVERYTHING SO HE CAN FIND A WAY FOR HIS PLANS TO WORK!! Sorry if I keep mentioning stuff like this, I just really love him and I want him to get his happiness of power, know what I mean

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I wouldn't worry too much. I'm pretty sure MXCDarkHorse2020 will keep to the storyline of Twilight becoming an alicorn princess.

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Comment posted by Flamewarrior02 deleted May 22nd, 2022

Awesome. And man Kyoga became part of the element of harmony and the mysteries of the lioness is still needed to be discovered and twilight is becoming more strict with that scar, and man did Trixie get punished by the two royalties for what she did, anyway awesome work, keep up the great work

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Is twilight really going to have that scary till the end because I really would hate that?

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