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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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Twilight is called to Canterlot Castle to help her marefriend with something. Twilight can't help but be happy to help and speed time with Luna, but a surprise awaits her. A surprise that Twilight seems to like.

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Twilight opened the door with her magic and left the library with the intention of taking the train. As she walked the streets of Ponyville, she started to think about what Luna needed from her help. Did the princess of the night want company? Or maybe vent what she was feeling these past few days? She hoped that whatever the reason, she hoped to be able to help her in some way.

As she trotted the streets of Ponyville in the direction towards the train station, she started to wonder what Luna needed her help with.

Nice fluff piece. Wording is a touch strained but it's still quite cute. Definitely earned the thumbs up.

Your grammar is slightly off in places, but that is such a cute story! (Now I REALLY wish that there was a Luna emoticon!)

“Now, with you in my room, you will serve me in my bed!” she took Twilight with her magic and laid it on the pillow of the big bed.

"Now that you're here in my room, you will see how my bed feels!" She levitated Twilight up with her magic and laid her on the pillow of her big bed.

Just...so much fluff. Thank you.

“Now, get ready to be cuddled by your princess!” Nightmare Moon then involved Twilight with the hooves.

"Now, get ready to be cuddled by your princess, Twilight Sparkle!"
Nightmare Moon embraced Twilight with her hooves.

The light blue door closed with a turquoise magic, resulting in a noise. The Twilight tail bounced as she took a little jump. She looked around the room, looking for the princess, but even though she was inside the room, she saw nothing but darkness.

Twilight's tail

Nightmare Moon was surprised by Twilight wrapping it with both front hooves, but she soon smiled and returned the hug, making both of them involved in a warm hug and able to hear each other’s heartbeat, only that Nightmare Moon it was the big spoon.

wrapping her

“Now, get ready to be cuddled by your princess, Twilight Sparkle!” Nightmare Moon then involved Twilight with her hooves.

embraced Twilight

Nightmare Moon walked over to the bed and lay down on the bed’s pillow. “And there’s no use trying to escape this room. I locked the door of the room with my magic as soon as you entered for you don’t run away from your princess.”

so you can't run away from your princess.

Thanks for the fic!

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