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After sending Luster to Ponyville, Twilight's friends remind her of the horrible truth apparent on the surface. That she will outlive them someday because Alicorns live longer or forever. But Twilight points out ways for that not to happen and she takes it rather dark.
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This is less dark comedy and more... coping? Salt?
Intense and funny at the same time. Love it.
Liked/fav'd.
once again twilight making complete sense, just sad she couldn't get the seventh element -starlight- in her group of immortal forever friends.
I do not like this at all
10040430
Why not? I don’t see anything wrong with this fic.
I thought it was funny
10040380
Now I want pretzels. Yum.
Hey, I'm suprised this was never a option given to the girls in the last episode.
Well if we are going full metafictional here Pinkie Pie just has to point out "Were fictional characters we only die when humans forget about us!"
10040445
Well maybe I'm being a bit hostile toward those that want Twilight to outlive her friends.
10040521
They left it open for all sides I guess. Made the other girls look older so that people who wanted Twilight to outlive her friends could have that ending. But there is still the possibility of age spells and such, and my personal take on the finale with the student who was a lot like Twilight was Twilight was seeking a successor of her own so she can give up the power keeping her young.
10040547
Except you forget it took Celestia centuries to find a successor, plus it was destined according to the Tree of Harmony.
Luster won't be taking over from Twilight.
10040543
I don’t see it as hostile tbh.
10040597
According to the tree of harmony? Where does it say that? And you have no proof to go against my theory. It was left open for all sides, what else would be the purpose of introducing Luster?
10040521
Wasn't the story they wanted to tell.
10040597
I mean the series is over and they told us to go hog wild, so why not?
Strictly going by the synopsis, I'm a little surprised this story isn't rated M.
10040661
Well if you think it should be.
Hey congrats on getting featured!!
10040727
Thanks.
10040661
Maybe by the synopsis, but not by the actual story, I don't think.
"T" rated, sure, but not sure about "M" rated.
10040608
A Student for Twilight to set on the same course. The Heroe sending there protege out on the quest. The Neverending Story.
10040547
More like Twilight is following in her teacher's footsteps and taking students of her own. And Celestia had students before Twilight. But the important part is something people miss. That Twilight still has her friends after many years. Who still is friends with those they grew up with? Almost think the writers were channelling Stand by Me.
10041474
Well believe what you want. I'm gonna stick with shes grooming Luster to be her Successor like in my headcanon story.
10041508
Hey! Nothing wrong with that. I fully believe there story isnt over and the girls will get that Rainbow Power again which will make them young again myself. I have a hard time believing being linked to the Elements wont give them some kind of benefit.
10041511
Yeah that would be nice too. I'd be good with that. I have thought about doing another fic on that.
10041535
I wouldn't mind a story where the whole mane 6 and Spike gained extended life like Twilight (but not necessarily immortality) though an effect the Elements had on them. Even though the Elements are gone.
Assuming they all agree of course: otherwise it enters the territory of what Starlight did in the season 5 premier and effectively makes Twilight a villain,
Then again, that in itself could also make a good story where Twilight goes crazy and tries to make others immortal (assuming she is) like her. But it just wouldn't be played more for laughs like this story is.
10041700
Yeah, I have one started. Might come out in a few days. Miller said that her friends were exposed to a lot of magic so who knows its affected them. He also said that Celestia and Luna gave twilight their power over the sun and moon. I used both of those in my other story where she passes on. I find the one with the one with the magic a little sketchy since he was asked why her friends were aging while she wasnt. If it were the magic affecting their age they wouldn't look as old the other ponies, unless he meant that it could affect them in the future?
Either way, the writers obviously left it open for all sides. Made the rest of them look older so those that wanted Twilight to outlive her friends could have that ending, and left the rest of us loopholes like the magic affecting them or Luster being Twilights Successor.
10041700
Also the Tree of Harmony (now a treehouse) could intervene in their behalf.
10040402
Age spells can be cast by 'the highest level unicorns'. Starlight can make herself immortal.
10047063
I thought those were temporary or had some side-effect that made them not worth it due to not being powered by alicorns.
The show never really got into details about those kind of spells.
Simple answer : heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeck nah fam
10073415
Yeah I wouldn't want it either. Life of immortality is just sad unless you have your loved ones with you.
10149499
Yeah, and then they get a shortage of food and end up killing each other due to overpopulation.