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Ruirik


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It seemed so simple. An afternoon out with friends and the ones you love, but life is rarely predictable. It only takes a moment to throw someone's life upside down.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 530 )

1096882

I've not the slightest clue what that meme is. Sorry, I'm old.

1100846 It's the feels meme. Basically, I felt a lot of emotion.

1100859

Ahh, well I'm glad it did it's job then and hope you've enjoyed so far. Sorry I'm out of the loop with the latest memes. Getting old does that to you. :ajsleepy:

1101341 You're not that old... are you? Also: I watched you.

Oh, Might wanna change the "Incomplete" rating to "Complete".

1101384

26 this year, and I'm still undecided on if I want to leave this as a one-shot or give it more chapters. Thoughts?

1101455 I like it as it is, but I would LOVE more chapters. It really deserves more attention... but you are a newbie. I'll provide moral support.

It's my little dashie all over again:raritycry::fluttercry:

1138849

I've never actually read that story. Or Cupcakes. >_>

1138960
my little dashie, one of the saddest stories ever created in the fanfic department but really good read.

Cupcakes..... pinkie goes insane, cuts up rainbow dash to use in her next batch of cupcakes...... creepy story

....... :fluttercry::fluttershyouch::raritydespair::raritycry:
I love this its Amazing can nearly compare to my little dashie But its just a bit off but its a viny and octy fic I mean COME ON can it get any better...:pinkiehappy: thanks for writing this:pinkiesad2: And I think its alright on its own . . . Scratch Out :twilightsmile:

1141581

Thanks for the review, very glad you like it :twilightsmile:

Glad to be reading a great story. :pinkiehappy:

1096882 your messed up to post that:flutterrage:

1164536

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it!

Excellent chapter Ruirik. Looking forward to more.

1177552

Made my night bro, glad you liked it!

exceptionally good chapter... poor vinyl :pinkiesad2:
hopefully this will have a happy ending :fluttercry:

1178587

Well I promise it won't be Grimdark, aside from that no spoilers. :scootangel:

And thank you very much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! :twilightsmile:

I just wanna burst out in tears but Ill try to keep them in. Its just so sad I ....Dunno what to say dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png I hope she ends up ok...


You sir are indeed my Favorite Vinyl fic writer And I think you are purely AWESOME dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png AND I HOPE TO SEE MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!1dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png

Well that all I can say KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORKdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png

Scratch out...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png

1186903

My friend, you have made my morning. I don't think I'm up to the level of CoffeeGrunt's Allegrezza or Fresh Blood's Changes, but dammit I'm gonna try!

I am going to try n' read this and not feel emotion.

Ok not as bad as I was expecting actually. Still a heartfelt story though.

1222923

Glad you like it, stay tuned for more soon!

1222965

Very happy you enjoyed it, I've been trying to keep the sadness buffered by warmth. Thanks for the fav!

1225406

Yeah most the time when I see Tragedy and sad together I usually think someone died :fluttercry:

1225454

I would've added the dark tag for that. Though I did write a super grimdark ending...The vodka made me do it I swear!

You've got me hooked dear sir...
Tell me, what was your inspiration for this?
I am quite curious as to what drug you used while ongoing with this barrage of
letters. Also, what is the ETA for the next chapter?

1225935

The inspiration was a therapeutic exercise from having a loved on be in a similar circumstance, the drug is alcohol, the next chapter should be in a few days, unless I find an editor to look over my grammar. Thanks for the fav and glad you like it!

1225977 Alcohol? ... I am getting a bad sense of deja v^u here....
Be careful of that stuff. It be mighty dangerous to your health.

Sides comments include I just accidentally cut myself with a big knife.
And there is blood on the keyboard.... Some of it sticking to the keys....
If you'll excuse me, I need to so-

You have a repeat sentence, about 13 paragraphs from the end.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Lyra blushed.  Bon Bon chuckled and kissed Lyra’s cheek.

1233691

D'oh! :facehoof: fixed, thanks!

1233704 no problem, great story btw.

And read the chapters.. Good story. Though.. Dawn Chaser needs a slap. I hate people/ponies who only care for money and not their workers, supply me a portal and I'll slap her for everyone who reads this story. Now.. were did i put my glove.

1233711

Thank you very much, glad you're enjoying it!

1233742

Thanks for the comment, I'm very glad you like it. As for Dawn, well...yeeeaaaa.

I feel Octavia would do more than just slap her... Wondering how she'll react to that bit of news. Not like things could get worse for them though right? ...Right?

1250222

...How honest do you want me to be?

1250227 I think I'll just wait and see what happens...
Curious what else you intend to put them through and at the same time, not really sure I want to know.

This story is pretty awesome! Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

My wubs go out to you sir KEEP IT UP ^_^

1285439

Next chapter should be out later today :moustache:

Alright I can't wait!!! :pinkiehappy:
I am in love with this story !!!!!!! Anyway ill let you get back to it :twilightsheepish: Later

Arrrgh that ending... right in the feels.
Noticed that there was a repeat after "Octavia wondered if any pony every truly felt soothed there". That part repeats just below it.

1289967

D'OH! :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof:

Fixed, thanks!

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