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  • MThe Next Six Dozen
    The elements of harmony are working once more. Now their bearers just need to come to grips with their own feelings, and the fact that they are about to become parents all while dealing with a pregnant alicorn's raging hormones. Easy, right?
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Comments ( 22 )

pretty good, though i think it would've been better the other way around.

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I thought about it, but I originally did this as a silly one-off thing and didn't really want to indulge in the serious drama that would come without the twist at the end.

Get her a pack of jolly ranchers, but only the green ones.

Comment posted by Magolor deleted May 31st, 2019

Off in the corner of the room on the couch, Pinkie Pie rubbed her belly and sighed. “That felt soooo good. Oh hey look!” She lifted her element and grinned. “I told you it was my allergies.”

DAMMIT, Pinkie!

I can still get into it, but I would have preferred anthro but that’s just me.

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Normally I would do just that but it was part of the requester's well... request. That it be pony.

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I don’t know this is a thing but could do a commission/edit to just re-edit the story to anthro?

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I could do a commission to redit it to anthro. I'm not sure what I would charge for that as it wouldn't take a ton of work, but now that I think about it alot of stuff would still need to get rewritten in order to maintain the flow of the story and whatnot. I could also expand some stuff at the commissioner's request at the same time as well.

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To be honest, yeah, I kind of expected 'the other way around'. And imo it's MUCH better this way. The ageless demigoddess can do crazy things to herself for shits and giggles, and it's fine, not nessesarily so to others.

First thought on reading the description:
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Alas the story is set like 5 seasons before they even show up.

After I read this and went to bed, something struck me: according to Celestia, the next bearers 1) have to be related to the previous ones and 2) must have alicorn blood. Princess Celestia was the previous bearer, and was the only alicorn for centuries. If these requirements were always a part of it, then that means Twilight and the others would have to meet them as well. That in turn means that they all would be descended from Celestia. Admittedly, it would be so many generations that they would be far enough apart genetically for it to not be considered incest, but still...

Jest #14 · May 31st, 2019 · · 2 ·

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You missed one thing, and that was that in order for her plan to quickly change the element bearers by tricking the elements themself they needed alicorn blood. Otherwise the elements chose their bearers normally. I didnt really flesh this out as much as I should have though but thats the jist of it.

I swear Ponk, I swear.

Epilogue Epilogue Epilogue.

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Sequel, sequel, sequel.

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That’s even better.

Mmmmmmmmmm, pickles :rainbowwild:

Luna: so what am I, mashed potatoes?

Twilight shook her head. “Unfortunately that's not how it works. They should have as much energy as needed and than when they are no longer required they should be reabsorbed by the tree of harmony.”

I'm so confused. I know I shouldn't be worrying about continuity errors in a porn fic but I have to ask. The Mane 6 defeated Discord at the start of season 2 and learn about the Tree of Harmony at the start of season 4. So when does this take place?

Rarity being trans kind of came out of nowhere, but other than that it was a pretty good fic. Did a decent job of making each of the six different, and while some of them cut off way too early, that also contributes to each one being a different experience, even if it makes some of them a bit rushed. At least it’s not the same thing six times over.

I hope you’ve learned the difference between your and you’re since writing this, though! There were several problems with that in this fic, which was pretty annoying.

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