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Great work love it keep up the great work

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Fimfiction does not allow links to nsfw sources. Go to derpi and slap the provided source to the end.

I hope Twilight knocks up every single one of her female friends before finding out about the pregnancy thing. It would be hot but also hilarious if later they all show up at the same time to tell her they're pregnant.

I wonder what Twilight would do to Celestia for not telling her that she can still get mares pregnant even when they're not in heat. Sure she said that her seed is extremely virile, but doesn't tell her that she could impregnate mares no matter what.

10817481
FimFiction doesn't allow NSFW links. Have you been living under a rock? It's been like this for months now.

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I thought its been years.

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The author already explained this, but thanks

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Since 2013

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Except when you do that, nothing comes up

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Worked for me. Just to clarify, you need to bring up the derpibooru site. Then after the .com part put a "/" slash like that, and then apply the provided numbers. Then hit enter. It'll bring up the pic.

In an unrelated to my last post question. So, I just want to clarify. The story kinda cuts off at the end there, and this says complete.

So, is this all of it? Is there more that's suppose to come? Or is the Pateron blurb in the author's note suppose to be a hint that the rest of it is there, and I have to go there and donate for it?

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Nope thats all she wrote. If people request more in the future then I'll add to it though.

sounds fantastic, also hope you're staying safe and doing well

Abortions would be cheaper. Anal would be cheapest.

10820237
And oral is 25$

10819787
moar pls XD
Also just to see the consequences

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Well have to see if the patrons request it then.

Oh there is so much potential for shenanigans here. Because you know Twilight will turn her friends into friends with benefits. I mean, who can resist Rarity? Not Twilight!

So wish we get more

While Twilight is reliving herself with the girls, wonder how the Royal Advisor is doing?

Is this an unofficial sequel to that story where Cadence makes Celestia impregnate her and then gets stuck with Molestia?

This is awesome can't wait to read the sequel.

"¿En realidad? ¿Entonces sabe que Flurry es mío, al igual que los gemelos en tu útero en este momento? Presionó Celestia.

I'm curious how this happened and how it happened again.

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I dont speak whatever language this is so I have no idea.

11033822
Yo no hablo inglés. Use un traductor para escribir ese comentario.

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What do you think the answer is?

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¿Cual respuesta ?

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I am well aware.

Pretty good, though the word choice/phrasing sometimes broke me out of the story, like the in-story use of ‘plot’. Still, pretty enjoyable.

The biggest sin, though, is that it seems unfinished. Could definitely use a few more scenes of Twi demolishing any mare she finds somewhat attractive. Maybe also with a bit more variety, like an oral scene or a threesome scene. Maybe a threesome scene involving a married mare and her husband (Sugar Belle & Big Mac?) … who’s willing to go along with it as long as he gets to fuck Twi while Twi fucks his wife.

But what’s really missing is the conclusion where she learns the truth about her virility and finds out that she impregnated every mare she fucked. We really need to see her reaction to that!

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You should really check out a story's sequel before you comment. XD

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