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I have no idea what I'm doing.

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man, this is everything i could ever want

unicorn Twilight

the most important tag

Ok. That was the most awesome introduction to a clopfiction I've ever read. Nice, silly and quick, but still somewhat realistic.

I knew someone was going to do this pun.... it's too "punny" not to do it.

Not in a good way.

treasures guarded by the multi-millennium old guardians of Equestria

Hmm Celestia and Luna are canonically just a bit older than eleven hundred years... with high probability less than twenty hundred.
On top of that the plural of millennium is millennia. You should replace that with millennia.

keys, accept for one,

except

each the size of a small watermelon.

Uh... even a SMALL watermelon is BIGGER than Twilight's head... Even on Celestia they are going to be grotesquely oversized. Something a bit smaller? Grapefruit?

She layed on her back

laid [at least that is the common use]

hiding the bolder obstructed

boulder

With slow gentle movements she slowly opened the two flaps

Remove this as you have a repetition.

Twilight’s eyes glue themselves to the

glued

but twilight didn’t complain as she watched

Twilight

Luna awoken with a snort and slowly blinked

awoke

resume her manual stimulation

HM she doesn't have hands...

while her cannal rhythmically clenched

canal

able to take ether of these…”

either

out with the formerly timmed Twilight as she

Uh... I'm drawing a blank here...

stopped the crazed pase of her magic

pace

she lift a hind leg into the ai

lifted

and with a though

thought

i like the story but she have to get pregnant make it more intresing

She spun back around and clapped her hooves in excitement. “I can’t believe I did it… I wonder if Cadence knew about our dance...”

Part of me believes she knew exactly what she was doing...

She gasped, for before her were the most precious treasures of forgotten history. A matching set of Alicorn jewels. Two sets of massive testicles and sheathes, one white, one dark blue. Resting within the box on a soft silky pillow. The base of the organs glowed with powerful portal spells, the cause of their misplacement.

Portal spells? This means the organs are still connected?
Better don't touch them if you don't want to get in trouble.
Or do touch them, might have interesting results.

The guards sighed, watching the mad princess run off to who knows where, they picked the doors up and used the repair spells they had been taught when given the honor of being the personal guards of the moon princess when she slept.

That wasn't neither the first nor the last time they had used that spell, right?

Plus it would be a shame to come all this way with her gifts for the princesses and somehow lost them on the way.

Yeah, that would be fun (?) explaining it to them.

Celestia then took care in removing her sister’s bed covers, revealing the majestic mare of the night, curled up with a teddy bear and sucking on her hoof.

Luna: "Tell anyone and I'll throw you into an black hole."

Happy to see her own shaft was still massive by healthy stallion standards, she couldn’t help but feel jealous when she noted her sister’s cock was girthier around the base, but at least her own endowment was longer from base to flare.

That may leed to serious competition in the future.

Luna smiled at her sister over the panting unicorn. “So sister… I believe it is Twilight’s turn.”

:twilightoops:: *gulp*

Luna moaned out loud, watching her sister claim the mare between them as said mare happily suckled and drooled on her blue cock as she was stuffed full of pink cock. Luna couldn’t help herself and leaned in to join Twilight in licking her own cock, she savored her own rich taste and pulled Twilight into a kiss to share a thick glob of her precum as they made out.

This paragraph alone shows how happy everyone is with the current situation.
Good Twilight found the jewels!

She began paying attention. When she felt Celesia was on the verge of cumming, she would hold the cock still, until the jerking and twitching calmed down. Then she would return it to its home in Luna and resume fucking the cumming princess with the pent up pole.

How evil!
I love it.


Great story!
I enjoyed reading it.

In the end poor Twilight had to sleep without an cock in her pussy. Maybe Celestia will have mercy with her and give her an promotion, so Twilight can solve that problem once she learned the portal spell.


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Remember: Twilight put an contraceptive spell on herself, but it was never mentioned the other princesses received one...


Found two typos:

when she was barely had a third

I believe that word doesn't belong there.

out of her ass as he began

He?

Twi wouldn't be embarrassed about Ladybugs Awake, she's done it in public and in front of her friends many times, including the first time when we first met "Princess Mi Amore Cadenza"

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