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man, this is everything i could ever want
the most important tag
Ok. That was the most awesome introduction to a clopfiction I've ever read. Nice, silly and quick, but still somewhat realistic.
I knew someone was going to do this pun.... it's too "punny" not to do it.
Not in a good way.
Hmm Celestia and Luna are canonically just a bit older than eleven hundred years... with high probability less than twenty hundred.
On top of that the plural of millennium is millennia. You should replace that with millennia.
except
Uh... even a SMALL watermelon is BIGGER than Twilight's head... Even on Celestia they are going to be grotesquely oversized. Something a bit smaller? Grapefruit?
laid [at least that is the common use]
boulder
Remove this as you have a repetition.
glued
Twilight
awoke
HM she doesn't have hands...
canal
either
Uh... I'm drawing a blank here...
pace
lifted
thought
i like the story but she have to get pregnant make it more intresing
Part of me believes she knew exactly what she was doing...
Portal spells? This means the organs are still connected?
Better don't touch them if you don't want to get in trouble.
Or do touch them, might have interesting results.
That wasn't neither the first nor the last time they had used that spell, right?
Yeah, that would be fun (?) explaining it to them.
Luna: "Tell anyone and I'll throw you into an black hole."
That may leed to serious competition in the future.
: *gulp*
This paragraph alone shows how happy everyone is with the current situation.
Good Twilight found the jewels!
How evil!
I love it.
Great story!
I enjoyed reading it.
In the end poor Twilight had to sleep without an cock in her pussy. Maybe Celestia will have mercy with her and give her an promotion, so Twilight can solve that problem once she learned the portal spell.
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Remember: Twilight put an contraceptive spell on herself, but it was never mentioned the other princesses received one...
Found two typos:
I believe that word doesn't belong there.
He?
Twi wouldn't be embarrassed about Ladybugs Awake, she's done it in public and in front of her friends many times, including the first time when we first met "Princess Mi Amore Cadenza"