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What to do when a kindness takes the opposite turn? That is the situation of our pegasus mare, Fluttershy, who came in contact with a stallion that bears an illness. Unable to bring herself to ask for help at the expense of others joy.
Written for One shotober.
Co-written by: Swiftnicity and Fonypan.
Proofread by: Fimbulvinter
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And it's up! Yes! Finally something I put actual effort with Te- I mean um.. Fonypan........
You want to eat my brain?
*Looks at a sad zombie Fluttershy*
Aww i could never say no to you.
Here let me just...
*Opens his head and reaches in for his brain*
.....huh?
*Finds only hollow emptyness*
Well thats weird...
Explains alot though.
okay, Fony. I have one thing to say... The title. The last three words need to be capitalized
It was very good. I liked it
Awesome story. I wish I was this detailed about mine. A bit sad but a good ending all together haha. I at least learned a few things for story making on this one. If you want you can check out mine and tell me what you think. Thank you and Brohoof /) (wish they had a happy fluttershy face on this :p)
Fluttershy a zombie eh? she should team up with this guy:
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3408034 Actually our writing styles on our own sucked really badly. However it compliments the other so it makes sense that we do this....What's, gonna, work? Teeammwork.
3408494 We are both 'meh' writers and if it wasn't for the amazing proof reader... yeah...
3407801 don't worry friend! I have a donation for your donation! lemme give you my brain for you to give to flutters
) I know there was something in here
*opens own head and feels around*
(we need a determined derpy emote
*stops rifling as he has found something, pulls out a muffin and a cricket*
whelp... that can't be healthy
*eats muffin*
musta left my brain in my other skull... ohwell
Awesome story
that was a perfect story for nightmare night day 
3408563...man i'm really stupid
lol If you don't mind can you check out my story let me know what you think?
3408505 Still a pretty good story
haha I still learned a few things for story making anyway. Btw not sure if I said it already but if you can check out my story let me know what you think then thanks.
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You may have mentioned it...
3408989 um yeah i'm really sorry. Its just after I left the first comment I went for a long walk. When I came back I was a bit tired and I forgot about the comment so thats why I was asking a bunch. I'll leave you alone now.
Te- FONYPAN! I mean Fonypan!....seems to get all the credit... Meh, it'll let me lay back more and relax until we decide to release another one. *cowers into a corner and sobs*
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Fonypan's joy is our sustence, your despair is our entertainment.
...if you don't mind that is...
Oh my, this looks simply hilarious!
Or terribly horrifying . . .
Brains.
You need to make a spin off of this where Fluttershy has to help pinkie
3426915 Need...hmmm... Yeah, after we get to work on an idea I have for Hearthswarming Eve.
3426915 Finally somepony noticed it!
3430681 Yeeaaahhh Te-Fonypan most people just skip over and just assume that Pinkie does that just cause...she's Pinkie.
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3431667 Merh! Stop hurtin' my feelings!.... Nah just kidding... It's little situations like these that show us off..
3431667>>3431672
Late to the party to say that you both did a wonderful job on this.
Fluttershy asking nicely with puppy dog eyes to eat my brain... ......HNNNNNNG ohhhh my heart just stopped.....you can have my brain I wont be needing it anymore
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3407801 Best. Answer. Ever.
3430681 Excellent story, but in the actual show it is Fluttershy who turns into a bat not Pinkie Pie. And if any of the Mane 6 actually does become a zombie I would not be that surprised about it and that would be awesome
4017347 If you note the posted date this came out a long while before Bats! did.
4048708 You are right this story was writtne before Bats was made and do you agree with my comment about one of the Mane 6 becoming a zombie in the actual show?
4049644 In Bridal Gossip, Spike suggested the town might be empty because of zombies... zombies are canon.
As far as mane six, only a matter of time.
4049678 Well I am not surprised about zombies being canon and the way the fillies in the Twilight Time episode behaved it was like they were zombies and also the gateway to Hell itself nearby Ponyville is also canon with that Ceberus
Needs some editing. Some of the scenes are hard to read because of the amount of grammar/word mistakes made.
I could do it given some time and provided you don't already have an editor.
Wonderful story and concept. Loving it so far.
4123166 If you're up for it, go ahead.
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Cool, I'll work on it some today although I'm not certain if I'll finish.
I should finish reading the thing first anyway
getting really close to finishing editing it.
Should have it within the hour
4123925 PM link to G.doc if you will.
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Still have it in word. Will upload in just a sec and send the pm.
Ey, this feels like it could be an episode, almost. :3
good stuff man.
This is interesting... but how did Pinkie Pie turn into a bat? Or was that like one of her many tricks?
Id hate to be the one to put the bullet through her head...