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I ask only that you would forgive me, should I ever truly go hollow, that you would not hate me for falling asunder to the insanity.

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Discord may have seen the light in friendship, but chaos is not something that remains calm and contained for long, if at all. When the mane 6 cease to see the God of Chaos as a threat, they make the mistake of ignoring his powers.

Now, our mares are far from home, and in the clutches of the Chaos itself, with only a d100 to decide their fate. To make matters worse, the stakes are revealed to be quite high when the Elements of Harmony become the true goal to reach. Now, with their lives, and all of Equestria's sanity and well-being on the line, the group can only pray that luck is on their side, and they aren't off to a good start.


This is a collaboration effort and my first not anthro story. The awesome guys to help with this, especially with the rules and the rolls:
AwkwardTaco- Who plays the parts of Pinkie Pie, The Sword of Eternal Whining, and the Game Master, Discord. Bow before the amazing force of Awkward!
Lord Ershwin Wholewheat- The man behind Fluttershy and Applejack. Kneel! I say kneel before the almighty Lord of the Grain!
And, of course, myself, playing the parts of Rarity, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash... What? You think I have some cool bit for after my name? What do you think I am? Some egotistical snob? No. Just me, your awesome resident whatever-the-hay-I -am.

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Comments ( 24 )

it's funny and interesting:moustache:

3509981 Why, thank you. More will be up before long, with luck. :twilightsmile:

Man, I can't wait to see more of this. My DnD's hasve always been hilarious and with discord as master it's bound to be good. Lower numbers being better is kinda bugging me though. But I can live with it

haven't played dungeons and dragons in my entire life. but I sure find this interesting! good thing you bothered to explain the mechanics of the game as the story go...

one thing. the elements of harmony again? really?... can nothing else be at stake when it comes to discord?

can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, you could have used at least the board game cover picture as... well, the cover for this story. just a recommendation

Things that absolutely must happen in this story:
They must slay a Turask.
They must get Mazed by the Lady of Pain, or any ponified equivalent.
They must go to Dungeonland.

This story is funny I wounder what happens next cant wait

3510075 The deal is that this was inspired by the three of us playing a few "chapters" in Only War, which has the whole "lower number is better" system, and I figured that since it's Discord, it would be kind of fitting to have the systems swapped.

3510490 I know, I know, it's pretty cliche, but it was the first thing to come to mind. Besides, their lives are still on the line, and only the dice will decide is any of them survive.

3510628 I will discuss this with my conspiri-- I mean, with Taco and Wheaty. :twilightblush:

3510631 We can't wait to find out either! :pinkiehappy:

Though I have only played DaD twice, I rather enjoyed this story! Has great potential and represents what a good collab should be. I like the slow, yet quick progression of Discord's malevolent aim, and also the mystery behind what might happen.
You three have earned a like and a Fave. from med.


~Make life and Adventure~
Mr. Flare:moustache:

3510778 Huh. You're actually rolling dice to decide what happens in the story?

3513476 That we are. They could fail or succeed, and we won't know until the dice tell. We know where to take it, but the dice decide if we get there. It may end the next chpater, or they may save Equestria. They may walk away horribly disconfigured for life. Only a few may survive. Only one may survive. Only the dice shall tell.

Just a tip, if you want to make the story feel more realistic, try using low numbers other than one when they get a favorable result. Like 2 or 7. Otherwise, it feels kind of unlikely that 1 would be rolled that often.

3527536 I don't know how to tell you this besides that we are actually rolling for this. The rolls in this story are legitimate, and at the hands of the fairest of mistresses, fate herself. None of us legitimately know it they will even succeed in their quest. We only know the road we intend if their luck is good.

i just read this now. I'm liking the story so far...

I do feel like there's not a lot of interaction between the ponies for my taste though.

3531178 Hmm... This has been noted. Your feedback will be dealt with as according to our official unofficial schedule and handled as fittingly as we can manage. Thank you for your feedback. Please enjoy the story. We know we'll enjoy creating it.

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Thank you for addressing my concern, I feel privileged to have offered such support to your work.

I will gladly point out inconveniences to your story in the future for everyone's benefit, thank you for taking your time with me I look forward to this fan fiction

3531757 But of course. I always try to take suggestions from my readers, my followers as well. A good writers learns through books, a great writer learns through experience, and that includes interaction with readers. :pinkiehappy:

No chance you could provide the characters' full stats, could you? It would be nice to see exactly what status numbers they are getting throughout, not just what the die says when unaltered. Also, two things: 1, making Pinkie have different rules was clever, but I just want to make sure that they're the same rules in reverse, correct? And 2, allowing rerolls somewhat defeats the purpose of the story as a whole if you are actually rolling dice.

3556939 That was the only re-roll, and purely for comedic value. It was a unanimous decision. If the sword decides to try that again, it gets removed. Also, yes, Pinkie just has reversed rolls. Lastly, I meant to add that to the author's notes. It should be there in the first chapter, and nothing has changed.

Well done, finally got to reading this last bit. I enjoy the comedy and the twist that discord reigns. Something I would like to see is Fluttershy in rage mode.... it does not have to be her of course.... It is only fitting though.

Oh this should end well...

Why do I get the feeling Discord is going to make the game as horrid for them as possible.

The only thing I care about is that Pinkie ends up fine but I don't give 2 hells about the others. :pinkiecrazy:

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