This story is a sequel to Unraveling
When a unicorn mare from the shadow civilizations between major cities has foals with a changeling, most would expect at least one of them to be a definite problem child, but when the problem child is the most seemingly well-behaved, and a mother is left on her own to care for the lot, things slip by.
Well now that problem child is all grown up and long since off the deep end, not to mention well-trained and knowledgeable. Here we see the one kill he will remember for the rest of his life: #45.
Critics Welcome!
The events here take place almost ten years after the events of Unraveling, though it is not a direct sequel.
I would like to thank Time Paradox from Editors-R-Us for editing, as well as Chrono_Ryono for giving it a look over.
Unfortunately, I didn't get either of the previous guys to look at this next chapter. Instead, we have Xeno Jones and Slip Kid to thank for helping me edit the final chapter. Hope you enjoy!
Also, sorry for the last second addition of a certain tag! I derp'd pretty hard, it seems. My apologies all.
you're story is very good!
Well well well, you have me on a hook now don't you..... Lets find out where this is going.
I put a fav. on it because It fallows a nice balance of crazy, and puzzle at the same time. I enjoyed about every word in it, so well done! Looking forward for more.
Mr. Flare
3734522 I may not be great at fishing, but I know how to work a hook, mate.
Seriously, though, I'll be tidying up the sister story to this soon, then handle this one, then get one the... surprise... 
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Glad to hear, and looking forward to it. If you need any help just shout, I won't be on much due to work... But I can make the time if needed.
3734548 I got this, mate, but thanks for the offer. I need to get to work though. Psycho Scoots isn't gonna write her own journals, you know?
First!
Oh wait...
Aw man! Dammit Internet Explorer!!!
3734931 Ha! So, nothing on the story, then?
I enjoyed that quite a bit.
3760024 Well, thank you. It should be updated/finished within a week. Well, classes and mentality permitting.
3761026 sweet cant wait for more
My suggestion is this: After you write a chapter, save it. Put the device down. Go to bed. Wake up. Edit the chapter. Go do something else. Come back and edit again. Then post on fimfiction.
If you give yourself time to forget what exactly you wrote, you will be able to edit more effectively. It works for me.
3840771 Both chapters in this story sat for at least three days of my own scrutiny. I asked for help to be safe. Fresh eyes are the most likely to catch something out of place, the first to ask questions. I'll keep that in mind, though. Thanks.
Once again, what the hell kind of ending was that?
4156874 The kind that explains a few things and leads up to what is to come, mayhaps?
4157116 But the story's complete.
4157612 Aye. That it is. But the series is not.