Excellence is not a Skill. It is an Attitude
It does not take much to know that Octavia and Vinyl are very different ponies. However, most don't realize that they share some similarities. Octavia and Vinyl are both very well known musicians in their field, and for good reason, they both attended the same music school, they both excelled in their studies, they both graduated with Music Theory, and they both share a secret unknown to nearly everypony in Equestria.
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This was an...interesting read. I like it. I mean, you have really good grammar and your writing wasn't half bad. The only thing that I found this story lacked was...well, interest. Don't get me wrong; the story was clever. But nothing really happened. Shrug, this is kinda hard to put into words... I liked it, and give you a thumbs up.
~ Michael A.
4572328 Yea, it actually took a few weeks for me to actually write this. I thought the idea was interesting, but it was just hard to put into words. Who knows though. Maybe I'll get enough feedback to work with so I can go back and make it better.
Sequel?
To be honest, I have never been a fan of this concept. Its just way too... i dunno. i just dont really like it lol
But if you continue this in a sequel I will probably end up reading it.
to be honest, it was actually pretty good considering!
I'ma be honest, I'm not entirely sure what's going on. Is it a split personality disorder type thing, or just that she's both ponies, trying to live two lives at once?
This is... wow.
This story is deep. It's amazing how you can reveal so many layers in just the few last lines, after making the rest of the story look so trivial. I suspected that something was up after Vinyl talked about an interview, but...
Dear Sir, my mind is blown. This amazing work deserves five moustaches from me.
4573405 No, Muzzle! You guys already got me to make Special Request into a series arc, this shall stay a one-shot!
4577833 But...but...but...there is so much left uncertain! What happens?! How has she kept this secret?! Why has she kept this secret!? WHERE IS HER HORN?! (Maybe I missed that part if it was in there, I was super dead tired when I read this, I will reread it in the morning to make sure I havnt missed anything)
Well, hot damn.. I remember you mentioning this back at LouisiAnime and it's better than I expected... I wish it could have a continuation but you wanna keep it a one shot? Keep it a one shot! X3
OKAY, I SPENT 5 HOURS WRITING THE PREQUEL CHAPTER AND CHROME CRASHED SO I WENT FROM 3,000 WORDS TO 300. Jesus! Sorry, guys, it's going to take a few days to type it back.
4573227 Shhhhh....
4574506 I'll try to clear that up in the next part!
4576264 I've read your stuff, good sir. (omgthatwasamazing) and I must say (holycrapIneedtocolabwiththisperson) I was...amused.(suchcreativityJesusChristIamjealous) Thanks for the mustaches! ^.^
humans? and you probably meant improv not improve
4670370 CRAP! THIS ISN'T ANTHRO...Is it? NO. Shoot. Thanks! And funny story, I was writing this on the Microsoft RT tablet, and improv was auto-corrected to improve. Even on here, it's coming up as a misspelling. huh. idk
Woohoo! I new you would write another chapter! :D
There was so much left unsaid. So is this no a full on, multi chapter story?! Hell yeah!
I always believed in you! *cries*
4670483 I BELIEVED IN YOU BELIEVING IN ME MAN! -cries as well-
4670489 *crying manly hug*
4670375
Awesome second chapter. Or maybe I'm still that high-strung from the first.
If you need a prereader/editor, I would be happy to help. I noticed that you switch from past to present tense from time to time, and a decent prereader would probably be able to catch most of those before you publish.
Update! And so the plot thickens and the wait for the next chapter continues.
4818149 The reason the update took so long was because I was wrapping up summer school. Hopefully now I don't have to go on mini hiatuses just to get a chapter out.
4819148 awesome!
An interesting chapter... I'm certainly curious about this Medley character.