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Fonypan


I have no idea what I'm doing.

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Groups of humans have invaded Equestria and captured ponies to sell as slaves and pets back on Earth. Will they ever be set free? Will the princesses come after them in a daring rescue attempt?

Well, this story isn't about that.

This is one pony's tale of the events that happened to and around her.


Seen through perspective of Silver Spoon, based on the Slave Pony General threads on 4chan/mlp/.

Contains some dark themes and ideas, but nothing nightmare inducing.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 6 )

the Slave General threads on 4chan/mlp/.

Where can I read that?

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Over on 4chan.org/mlp

Look for threads with 'slave pony thread' in the subject.

My story is a lot lighter themed than many of the other stories.

This is a nice idea for a story. I hope that you continue it in the future.

I really like this story, and hope to read more of it soon.

Yay! Another chapter!

Good story. I quite enjoyed it, but one critique:

Most of the story is written in 2nd person ("you"), and at several points switches to first person ("I"/"we") without good reason. I'd suggest you write in third person ("she", "they") instead, as it tends to be a more enjoyable read.

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