Discord is dead...a God...is dead..EveryPony is happy well nearly EveryPony ...FlutterShy ignored her freinds comments on how Discord killed Rarity and AppleJack...
As FlutterShy stands in the cold hard rain...alone near Discord's cold stone hard grave..
or so she thought...
Feels.
why?
No idea....just want people to feel...
SHIT NIGHTMARE MOON HAS POSSESDED ME RUN FOR UA LIVES
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Yayyyyyy
Zecora was a bit hard
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But the thing is.....DID HE DIE?????
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I wil
And I might make a story on Discord as a filly and another one of Discord and Zecroa FIRST SHIPPING EVER
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I'm writing a story of why discord is the only one of his species and how his species died by fire!
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Oh god....are you unhappy by me?
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No, been writing it for a week. I wanted to explain why he was the only one of his species that we see.
Its......just......so........AWESOME!
YOU stole my picture....... how mean
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Yay and cool
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....AWESOMENEES HAS RETURNED
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I didn't mean to I just wanted a crying pony and only FlutterShy came up
Forgive me
Yet another brilliant story.
Bravo.
All your stories so far earned a fav from me, just thought I'd mention that
Also I commented on your first story, if you haven't seen already
Edit: *notices incomplete* So will there be more to this? Oooo can't wait!
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....GOD IM CRYING TO
Plus gunna make a Discord The Filly Story and Before The Rhyming Story....you know what that means
This story is just so awesome, I can't find any words to describe it. Punctuation is needed! Other than that, this story was just so awesomely amazing.
They didn't see the signs
So, touching!!!
THIS needs to be one of those 80,000 words 10 chapter long stories....I believe you can do it.
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Say what?
Please explain a bit more...I'm a bit of Dislexya
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Ah so you see my edit hmmm? Well....you must know that Pinkie's death wasn't explained much as AppleJack's and Rarity's....
So Pinkie can break the fourth wall right? Why not break the FIFTH wall to meet Discord???
3039224 This story needs to be really long 10 chapters long and has 80,000+ words in it.
it a excellent read and it would be a shame for to end after a chapter or two.
~The Random
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Ha!
I see you're getting to my other comments
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True.....true
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Who said I'm ending it at chapter two?
3039269 i never said that...i was just saying like this seams like a short story
and i would like it to last longer than a 4 or 5 short chapters.
~The Random
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Read this!
Well....you must know that Pinkie's death wasn't explained much as AppleJack's and Rarity's....
So Pinkie can break the fourth wall right? Why not break the FIFTH wall to meet Discord???
3039278 i am perplexed and you caught me attention even more...something was fishy about there deaths....but pinkie is already dead as with discord so she dose not have to brake the fifth wall right?
~The Random.
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Was she dead???
3039307 again i am stumped.....don't reveal to many plot twist just promise this story is going to long as all chaos.
~The Random
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I promise!
3039334 awesome!
3039334 You ended it. this is why i have trust issues
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I don't have any inspiration
This is how I legitimately feel right now. It's overused, might ruin the mood but that is how I really feel right now. great story bro
oh fuck i cried again this is amazing !!
thanks for this :)
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You are welcome
ngkfjgfdlgfhdjb I really like the concept but I have a bit of critique personally?
1. You need to make sure the grammar/spelling in your summary is correct - that is a potential reader's first impression of your fic and if that looks sloppy readers will assume the fic will be sloppy.
2. I feel like you use "..." to the point where it just kind of loses any effect.
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I promised myself I wouldn't cry but that went out the window when Derpy came along and called him Muffin buddy then I lost it, still loved it though.
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