Rainbow Dash: Brave, Bold, Headstrong, Strong, Fast, Loyal.
Fluttershy: Timid, Weak, Kind, Slow, Agile, Compassionate.
They are the best of friends, Rainbow and Fluttershy had been through it all. Rainbow Dash always had been there for Fluttershy, protecting her, fighting for her. Living the Element Of Loyalty well. And Fluttershy always wanted to repay for her fast Pegasus friend.
But when a dangerous storm is created, trapping Rainbow within it, and throwing her out making her fall to her death. Fluttershy can only do either two options:
Fly...
Or Hide
OOO
Art is not by me, it is by the right person who created this lovely badass picture. Judge me if you will but I take no rights for MLP or the art.
Chapters (3)
Words on picture take from
The song
fear of Flight by aviators
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Faving just because that pic and avatar now off to read the story
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Y-Y-You. No. Words
only feels
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3531463 :3 caught? ^.^
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veeeeeeeery cute! I love it! <3 Can't wait to see more from you!
Why do you need so much space between those two sentence ? It's like half of the text.
Anyway, this was really good, I still hope it will end well despise the 'tragedy' tag.
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Thank you for the notice
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This story has taken a lot of feels from me.
Keep them, and feed off them so you can write what happens next.
Please
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Don't worry
but I'm afraid the Sad and Tragedy posts are there for a reason 
Nice start to what looks like a hard ride ahead. Makes me wonder if Dash will perish in the end there. I think you set Fluttershy up rather well there at the start.
The feels and promise of a good adventure up ahead make it worth an upvote/follow
If you like Flutterdash, I recommend you check out some of my stories, such as this one or this one. As a user who takes my name from my fave ship, I tend to write a lot of stories that feature Flutterdash.
I also wonder, will you be writing more Flutterdash after this story is complete? If so, you might be worth a follow there too. For someone who says they are Twelve Years old, I find this to be a rather impressive story.
Cloudkicker is a mare, not a stallion
Also Fluttershy's eyes are blue
I can't wait for more this is the first sonic flutterboom I have ever read about and the first story I read that Dash got caught on fire I love it.
PS. I hope she dies but that's just me.
Curious I am right now.
Most amazing America poneh ie ever see this is Awesome
Nice. Using Butterflies to help save RD was cool.
You had quite a few nice feels in the chapter. It was a rough emotional road. Bit of a shame the story will only be 3 chapters though. It would be nice to see them develop beyond just becoming fillyfriends.
Will Dashie wear prosthetic wings after?
Yeah no. I can't stand a pegasus losing their wings. It's just as bad as child abuse. Or more like mutilation of the genitals. You remove their identity and that's one thing I can't stand. Best wishes in your story, but I just can't read any further. It makes me want to throw up when ANY pegasus loses their wings or a unicorn their horn. Was good writing and I really REALLY liked the first chapter. But you kinda ruined it for me. But hey not expecting everything story to be made for me. Best of luck to ya.
Though honestly I'll probably skim over the last chapter later.
I remain neutral and await the next move.
I think I died of feels
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Dear god that was beautiful. The assault on my feels has now waged war on my heart and won. Feels, annhialated...Sniffle...sniffle...
You, sir!
p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/hostedimages/1380222758/490731.gif because of you!
Well... uh... didn't see that coming. That seemed like a senseless killing of Fluttershy there (or removal of Fluttershy from the physical world).
and poor Dashie. Not sure why everyone doing it to her was so sorry when they went through with it anyway.
Right up to the Crytal empire, this was a great story in my eyes. It had great emotional impacts all the way though (especially when Fluttershy got taken out), but I'm not sure im such a fan of where it is going. My upvote is for now, a downvote. But I'll see how things go (after all, you might have something epic planned soon).
And that authors comment
So odd.
It's good, but you could definitely use an editor. This fic was filled to the brim with spelling and grammar errors. If you'd like, I could help you with your upcoming works.
Don't mind me, just gonna go cry now :'(
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I would like that
thank you 
Man... Your English is rough. First, the word 'to' is basically used to indicate movement. Like: "I'm going to the river." Or to tell what was affected by the subject. Like: "You are so nice to her." You tried to use it in the place of "too". Too is used to show that there is an excess. Like: "There is too much cake."
Secondly, you are using the wrong form of 'your'. The contraction you have chosen to use is used in place of "you are". The word you were looking for was "your". That is the possesive. Like: "Grab your coat." Not: "Grab you are coat.". Aside from that... Your very hard to understand in most places.
Also you may think that HUGE page skip was genius, but it is pretentious. Let your story build tension. All that page break does is make it harder to read your story. Keep at it though, practice makes perfect practice.
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I try my best
but my Grammer has improved since I first came here and to that a top my hat to this website, I am also glad to have a few people pointing out mistakes when others think it would be rude 
And to that I thank you as well
My thoughts about the author's note: HAY NO!!!THIS IS THE BEST DANG CHAPTER SO FAR!!!! (so far, but it will probobaly get better!
)
*i read the last few paragraphs* NO! NONONONONONO! *runs out of door sCreaming* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Sorry
I hate to be a complainer, but I'm not sure that the whole Fluttershy becoming an alicorn and pretty much dying was necessary. (I don't mean the alicorn part, it's just the whole dying thing.) I get it's for drama, but it doesn't seem logical. I mean, the princesses all could serve their job without dying, so why couldn't Flutters? You've probably already heard this though, so it might be fun to talk about the things you did well, because there's quite a few. First off, the romance between Rainbow and Fluttershy felt extremely real. You could tell their heartbreak and sacrifice are making a major impact on them.
Another thing is that you kept the focus on what's important in this story, the relationship. I have seen some stories completely veer off track from the main story, (and I can be guilty of that too when I write stories.) Finally, as you've seen from the comments, you can really get people's emotions going. I've read some romance stories, and your's is really good, with some flaws that you should work on, but still good. Just work on what you kind of messed up on, (as the comments will gladly point out,) and you'll do just fine.
Also, if you were serious with the author's note, then don't be so hard on yourself.
....*sniff* My first story on this website, and it had to be about my favorite pony dying and my second favorite being emotionally destroyed?!?!?! *Bawls out* But...I loved it. Everything except FLUTTERSHY FREAKIN DYING!!! :(
* Runs back in door panting* Btw... *GASP* best... *GASP* FlutterDash fic..... *GASP* EVER! *returns to screaming* AUGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
(One last thing, I favorited every single one of these chapters.)
You my friend need a proofreader badly. Unfortunately I don't have the time to do that.
Other than that this story is amazing!!! Flutterdash forever!
Great, now im crying. it wasnt perfect and hell you nedd an editor but it was good. Not a lot of tears but certainly i want to kick those alicorns-gods-whatever plots.
Oh Celestial, that made me cry! And I don't cry! Oh Celestia the feels in this story! Waaaaaahhhh! Fluttershy!!!
Sorry, had to get that out of my system. Anyhoof, thus story really knows how to pull at the heartstrings (So Much thanks to the author for that). Although spelling errors run rampant, I really appreciate the heart put into this. Moustache Queen, many tips of the hat to you...
Final rating: 8.5/10
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Thanks
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3789257 Well he could do it himself. Thats what I do anyways, and I almost always get stuff like spelling, and forming complete sentences down.
It doesn't take all that much of an effort to go over your story once or twice. And he could always ask a friend for a second opinion.
Sorry about reading this and faving it over a thousand years later, I completely forgot about it. Anyways, godd story, love it, byE!!!!
Right in the hony nut feelios
3709190 Uhhhh... Dude. Fluttershy didn't die.
Question: was fluttershy killed by the gods for doing the love bridge, or did she kill herself ? After the incident, rainbow dies of a broken heart, and fluttershy comes to collect her to the afterlife.
QUESTION: Was fluttershy killed for creating the love bridge, by the gods, or did she kill herself ? Celestia performed the deed, but did fluttershy go into the prolonged sleep, as the earth element ? I don't understand exactly, what the result of celestia's deed was. I got the feeling that rainbow dash died of a broken heart, three months later, to be collected by fluttershy to the afterlife. but the small item before the ending asked if rainbow believed in angels, and rainbow's reply, mentioned "squirt", something she called scootaloo. this tends to say that rainbow lived out the rest of her life, and just died of old age, again to be collected by fluttershy, to the afterlife. I got the feeling that celestia, and cadence, conspired to trap rainbow and fluttershy, for some darker reason than cadence was talking about. Why was it so important to keep them apart, to essentially destroy their love ? did it have something to do with the balance of the elements of harmony? Was their elements connecting in that manner, seen as a threat to the balance of harmony ? I got the feeling that they were betrayed for some unknown dark reason by cadence and celestia. It felt like fluttershy had opened something that was not meant to be opened, and therefore, was eliminated, to keep some dark secret, safely hidden once more.