Dinky sits beside her mother's side, Derpy, whom now lays on her death bed as they spend their last few moments together, reflecting upon the past and cherishing their life here and now, mother and daughter, together, as a family.
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You say its Dinky Doo and yet you call the mother Derpy.
That would make her Derpy Doo, when it's Dizty Doo, or Derpy hooves but seeing as the child is called Dinky Doo then it makes more sense to call her Ditzy.
Apart from that it's a allright Story.
Good day.
Sorry it's just annoying to put in Ditzy Doo and Dinky Doo, it kind of get's confusing after a while, but thanks for the feed back anyways
is this all???
262084 i thought that derpys real name was ditzy doo??
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It is.
Good day.
No I'm almost done with Part 2.
262229 indeed
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Yes.
Good day.
Just wondering my readers', should I just have part 2 cut short then have part 3 and part 4, or just have part 2 and part 3.
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262201
Ditzy Doo and Derpy [Hooves] are two different ponies. You never see Ditzy Doo in canon; she's only mentioned in the episode Winter Wrap-Up. Derpy was (until recently) named and shown.
And who's to say that a child has to have the same name as her mother? Haven't you ever heard of adoption?
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My only suggestion is that the parts are a bit longer... but I like the epics, just personal preference.
Great start to the story. I'm already keeping tissues on-hand, because I think I know where this is going.
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No, it was suppost to be Dizty Doo, its just the fans hijacked it.
And now that it's been changed there is the same proof for both names.
Good day.
I'm confused here, but if you don't mind I'll just stick with Derpy.
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Herr Wilhelm:
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Um, so... can you guys just stop with the argument about names,
Part 2 is out everypony!
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The character currently know as 'Derpy Hooves' by the fanbase was intended to be the pony who went north for the southern birds, who was know as Ditzy Doo, but then as a nod to the fanbase they showed Dash calling her Derpy.
But this mas RainbowDash, the pony who tends to call ponies by thier nicknames when she is mad at them, eg: Calling Twilight 'Egghead'.
So the likelyhood is that Derpy is just a nickname, and the fact that it hasn't been mentioned again, plus the fact it has been changed suggests that Derpy is not her name.
That does not mean that it cannot be used as a nickname by other ponies, just that it is not her real name.
Yours Wilhelm II, German Emperor.
Good day.
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It's all in Bold.
Good day.
BAWWWWW
262616 And
262479
wait so if ditzy doo and derpy hooves arent the same than who the hell is ditzy doo????? beacause i thought that whaz derpys real name and then she changed it to derpy hooves
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No they are the same.
Good day.
262605 maybe
262084
When someone has a nickname that they like or are used to, they usually go by that, even if they have a given name.
263564 Thanks for justifying my decision!
oopsie guys. Huuuge mistake, Dinky is actually supposed to be 4 years old not 1. I accidentally put 14 years instead of 11 years so, yah just wanted to point that out.
New chapter is out!
brilliant keep up the good work i was so stuck in reading this that i was finding it hard to breath with the suspense also this is so amazingly written so im totally watching this cant wait for next chapter
um, that's the most praise I've gotten from my readers so far so, THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT!
though I can't write my chapters day to day now, srry, but I'll do my best to write more! 
Sorry everypony, homework and school have all been my objective these last few days, but now it's the weekend, so here's a hint for the next part of the story. "The Doctor" Is all I have to say.
As you my fair readers may have realized if you have finished this part of the fiction, that I'm beginning to wrap up the story.
Though I Pinkie Promise that I will continue to write more later on. The next two parts will be my longest so while waiting, if you haven't already done so, read my other fiction.
So that's all! 
For Now.
She Flutters No More.
i am now intreged in this story *sorry for the bad grammar* and i am curious of whats going to0 happen
i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/243/451/55e.gif Just for amusement
Are you planning on concluding this? It says "incomplete," but should it be "on hiatus" instead?
Really really sorry everypony, I've just been caught up with so many other fictions of mine, I have no time now sorry.
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Sadface...
This was pretty good. I love the relationship that these two have. I would suggest splitting the chapters up so that they're not all bunched together. This will make it easier to read in the future.